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1、精品资料一篇文章的英文审稿意见.No.：MY-24-20Title：Technology Management of strategies for organic Food Industry Expansion in ChinaMajor：Technical Economics and ManagementExpert No.11. Academic evaluation.This paper which tries to put forward Chinese business model of organic food market, based on referring the busi

2、ness model of organic food industry in America and combined with the analysis of the organic food market in China, then conducted a preliminary qualitative and quantitative analysis of the consumer demand and the target customer group. Overall, although this paper may have some practical significanc

3、e, but on the whole, there is little contribution for business model and consumer behavior theory. This paper also lacks literature review and only makes some situational innovation.From the reliability of research, the paper lacks of method introduction chapter, and the methods introduction scatter

4、ed through chapters. At the same time, the paper also lacks of reliability description of case study and online survey. Such as how to choose a representative case and the sample in quantitative analysis. Which method should select in the data collection. How to determine the sampling range. How to

5、measure nonresponse bias. How to analyze the qualitative data.Conclusion: This paper has some practical innovation, but insufficiency in theoretical innovation, besides should strengthen research methods.2.Limitation of the paper and the recommendations of review experts.Firstly, the research scope

6、is too large, but the depth is not enough. My suggestions on this aspect are select one point of the current works and give detailed research. Then put forward more theoretical problems and give depth study, the framework and implementation of the whole paper should base on the exploratory research.

7、Secondly, the paper should give literature review on selected direction, summary and evaluation of current theoretical research both of the progress and shortcomings.Thirdly, increase the methods introduction chapter, covering study design, data collection, and introduction of qualitative data techn

8、ology, how to control the validity and reliability of research methods.Fourthly, According to the research questions, the paper should have a chapter in depth discussion about research found.Fifthly, in the chapter of conclusion, you should summarize the research from both theoretical significance and practical significance, and puts forward the research shortcoming and future research direction.