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1、如有侵权，请联系网站删除，仅供学习与交流专升本英语作文参考【精品文档】第 5 页作文（一）Luxurious Buildings On Campus1. 近年来，一些大学建起豪华楼舍来提升形象；2. 有人赞同，有人反对；3. 谈谈你的观点。【范文】With a view to improving their image and , many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions. Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more

2、 comfortable environment could let students apply themselves to academic studies. The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities. Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of t

3、he modern students. But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope univers

4、ities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements. 【点评】 首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述人们对此现象各持己见；第三段陈述自己的观点，并提出建议。 范文首段提出大学楼舍“豪华风”这一普遍现象；第二段指出赞同者认为舒适的环境能让学生更好地投入学业

5、中，反对者认为这不仅浪费钱，而且扰乱了正常教学活动；第三段给出自己的观点-旧楼的拆除破坏了校园原有的历史意义；奢华的趋势使得大学教育商业化，给大学生带来负面影响。最后提出建议，希望大学能注重提高自身的文化内涵，加强学科建设。 第一段中With a view to意为“为了”，后面接v.-ing；第二段中apply themselves to academic studies意为“全身心投入学业”；第三段中construction of specialties 意为“专业队伍的建设”，improvement of their cultural connotation意为“提高自身文化内涵”。作文

6、（二）On Buying Graduation Thesis1. 毕业论文买卖成风；2. 有人认为本科生没必要写毕业论文，有人认为有必要；3. 你的看法。【范文】Since graduation thesis serves as a role of evaluation, college students are required to write academic essays focusing on their major before graduation. Afraid of not getting their degree, buying graduation thesis has

7、become a prevailing practice. Consequently, heated discussion on the issue has been arisen. Some dont think it is necessary to write the graduation essay while the others support the current educational system.However, the main argument for scrapping essays is because most of them are of such a low

8、quality. As this work is usually assigned in the last term, exactly when they are starting to hunt for jobs, it is no wonder that they are not fully focused on the task. Furthermore, the communication between student and tutor is far from adequate. Nevertheless, I still believe that thesises are som

9、ething from which students can gain a lot if they put their heart into the task.【点评】 文章首段通过毕业论文的用途引出社会现象-买卖论文成风；第二段指出不同的人对此持有不同意见；第三段结合自身观点，分析现象产生的原因：毕业论文一般是最后一学期完成，而学生忙于找工作导致论文质量低，另外学生和导师的沟通不够，最后给出自己的观点-毕业论文对于学生而言很重要，如果用心去做，学生可以从中学到很多。 第一段中serves as a role of evaluation意为“起着评估的作用”；第二段中Consequently意

10、为“随之产生，因此”；第三段中are of such a low quality意为“质量低”，fully focused on意为“集中精力关注于”。作文（三）The Spirit of Lei Feng1. 雷锋精神学了半个世纪，雷锋却越来越少；2. 当下我们该如何弘扬雷锋精神？【范文】Lei Feng, a heroic model in China who was known for his altruism and devotion to the country, has been taken as a role model over past 50 years. But in re

11、cent years, some people have abandoned their long-held ways of learning from Lei Feng and become too selfish to helping people in need.In todays diverse society, where individual interests are given more emphasis, the image of Lei Feng seems to have lost its appeal to some people, and is even met wi

12、th cynicism. But everybody can do the basics: show more compassion, have a stronger sense of obligation and try to do good, no matter how small it is. Furthermore, governments should pay more attention to morality construction, raise peoples willingness to help others, let them realize that altruism

13、 is always necessary for a harmonious society and provide fuel to the flame so it can burn more brightly.【点评】 文章第一段通过介绍雷锋，说明雷锋精神，引出社会现象：有些人变得自私，不愿帮助那些需要帮助的人；第二段指出过分强调个人利益使得雷锋形象失去原有魅力，为弘扬雷锋精神，个人应该有强烈的责任感，勿以善小而不为，政府应该加强道德建设，提高人们助人为乐的意识。 文章第一段中altruism意为“无私，利他主义”，devotion意为“奉献”； taken as a role model意为

14、“作为榜样”；第二段第一句中涉及where引导的定语从句，修饰先行词society，cynicism意为“冷嘲热讽，玩世不恭”，sense of obligation意为“义务感，使命感”；Furthermore表示递进。作文（四）Influence of Digital Products on College Students1. 数码产品种类多，更新快，大学生人均拥有数码产品的数量越来越多；2. 这种现象对大学生来说是有益还是有害？3. 你的看法。【范文】Currently, college students are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of

15、digital products, such as digital cameras, laptops, cell phones and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and quantities. Many students continuously update their equipments to meet their over-growing needs. Meanwhile people show great concerns about the influence of those products. There is

16、no doubt that digital products make things more convenient for college students. For instance, computers and Internet enable students to collect information with greatly improved work efficiency. Whats more, digital items widen students scope of eyesight and make their life more colorful. Although t

17、hese items also cause negative effects, as they may waste their precious time and cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life. Neverthless, I cherish a belief that with the help of digital products, college students can benefit a lot and the world will have a wonderful future.【点评】文章第一段指出

18、现在的大学生不可避免的接触各种数码产品，并且根据需求不断更换产品，这一现象引起人们关注于产品给大学生带来的影响。第二段首先指出数码产品的优势，并列举一种产品进行说明；之后分析了产品带来的负面影响，并给出作者自己的观点。第一段中unavoidably意为“不可避免地”；are exposed to意为“接触”；in an increasing categories and quantities 意为“种类和数量不断增加”。第二段中There is no doubt that 意为“毫无疑问”；For instance表示列举；cultivate a generation more isolate

19、d from the real life意为“培养出与现实生活脱节的一代人”。作文（五）Free Blood Donation1. 无偿献血的意义；2. 作为一名大学生，你认为该如何做？【范文】Free blood donation refers to healthy donators voluntarily giving a small amount of blood. It doesnt harm the donators health as their bodies could make quick adjustment. It is a kind of way by which peo

20、ple can make contribution to society and realize self-value. However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood.As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation. First of all, a nation-wide campaign should be launched to

21、 educate people scientific knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood. Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns. Last but not the least, government at a

22、ll levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve peoples current spiritual civilization.【点评】文章第一段从献血的定义入手，提及献血对人体的影响以及献血的意义，最后一句指出问题所在-有部分人不愿加入献血的队伍。第二段从自己作为大学生的角度，提出自己的意见：首先需要开展运动，向人们传授献血方面的科学知识以及血液疾病预防知识；其次，开展提高公共意识的活动；最后各级政府部门应该创建和谐健康的社会。第一段中 make quick adjustment 意为“快速调整”；make contribution to society 意为“”为社会做贡献”；realize self-value意为“实现自身价值”。第二段中多次使用被动语态，measures与动词take搭配，campaign与动词 launch搭配，activities 与动词 carry out搭配；表示列举，First of all“首先”，Last but not the least“最后但并非最不重要”。