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1、学习目标学习目标1、通过回顾所学知识，能够描述人物特征，书面介绍成通过回顾所学知识，能够描述人物特征，书面介绍成功人士。功人士。2 2、掌握掌握书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧 Pen Name: Mo Yan Real Name: Guan Moye (管谟业管谟业) Job: A Chinese writer Place of Birth: Gaomi, Shandong Date of Birth: February 17,1955Personal informationExperience and achievementsWhenWhat he did1955197619812012h

2、e was borndropped out of schooljoined the armyhis first short story was publishedwon the Nobel Prize in literaturewhen he was 12Fryderyk Chopin was a famous pianist and music writer. Today many piano music lovers still listen to his famous works such as Minute Waltz. He was born on March 1, 1810 in

3、a small village in Poland. Everyone in Chopins family was a musician. His father played the violin, and his mother and sister played the piano. When he was 6 years old, he started to take piano lessons. Soon he played even better than his teacher. At that time, he also started to write music, and be

4、gan to give concerts when he was only seven! In 1825, when he was 15 years old, people said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano because his music could touch the hearts of his listeners. In his last years, he was very weak but kept on writing music until he died

5、in 1849. The world lost a musical talent, but his spirit continues to live in his works today. Beginning BodyEnding Describe a personhis familyDate / place of birthappearanceJobName:Beginning: personal informationhobbyFryderyk Chopin was a famous pianist and music writer. Today many piano music love

6、rs still listen to his famous works such as Minute Waltz. He was born on March 1, 1810 in a small village in Poland. Everyone in Chopins family was a musician. His father played the violin, and his mother and sister played the piano.Fryderyk Chopina famous pianist and music writerHe was born on Marc

7、h 1, 1810 in a small village in Poland.Everyone in Chopins family was a musician .When he was 6 years old, he started to take piano lessons. Soon he played even better than his teacher. At that time, he also started to write music, and began to give concerts when he was only seven! In 1825, when he

8、was 15 years old, people said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano because his music could touch the hearts of his listeners. Body whenwhat happenedWhen he was 6 years oldwhen he was only sevenIn 1825In 1849he started to take piano lessons. he also started to writ

9、e music, and began to give concertspeople said he was the best pianist in Warsaw. They called him the poet of the piano. Experience and achievements以时间为序以时间为序一般过去时一般过去时He died.The world lost a musical talent, but his spirit continues to live in his works today. Ending: 评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励Beginnin

10、gBodyEnding name, job, birth,familyappearance (外貌外貌)hobby opinion评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励评价，启示，祝愿，鼓励Experience and achievementsPersonal informationLets have a try！WritingWriting3a.Read the information about John Lennon.A famous pop musician.Then write an article about him.要求：要求： 1. 词数词数 80-100。 2. 字体工整字体工整,语句要通顺

11、连贯语句要通顺连贯 。Useful sentences:hobbyHe likes / loves very much.He is good atAt the age of., heHis favorite. is He is interested in. Experience and achievementsWhen he was.years old, heIn 2008 / ., he When he was a child, heHis hobby is .人物介绍的时态：人物介绍的时态：一般现在时和一般过去时一般现在时和一般过去时 John Lennon,a famous musici

12、an,always loved music.He was born in 1941 in Liverpool in the UK. When he was a child ,he lived with his aunt and uncle. He began to play music at the age of 12 and later he started first music group,The Quarrymen. In 1960 ,The Quarrymen became The Beatles,one of the most famous groups in music hist

13、ory.Two years later,the groups first song,Love Me Do,got to number 17 on the music charts in the UK.Finally,The Beatles broke up in 1970.On December 8,1980,John Lennon died in New York.Not long after his death, his famous song,Imagine,entered the UK charts and got to number 1. He enjoyed great succe

14、ss in music history. His success depends on his talents and hard work.Lets have a try！WritingWritingMake notes about a famous or important person you know.Then write a short article about him/her.要求：要求： 1. 词数词数 80。 2. 字体工整字体工整,语句要通顺连贯语句要通顺连贯 。写作技巧点拨写作技巧点拨1 1、确定话题：、确定话题： 3 3、 细读要求细读要求, ,确定要点确定要点人物介绍人

15、物介绍一般现在时、一般过去时一般现在时、一般过去时1.写前：仔细写前：仔细 题题2 2、确定时态、确定时态: : 2.2.写中：写中： 布局谋篇布局谋篇, , 提纲提纲巧用巧用 结词结词, ,衔接衔接自然自然 首尾首尾，使结构完整使结构完整选好词句，选好词句， 化文章化文章3. 写后：认真检查写后：认真检查加加美美 The person I like Thank You 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准一档（一档（1215分）分）要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语篇结构完整；语言结构丰要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语篇结构完整；语言结构丰富；句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚；

16、语言基本无误（不超过富；句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚；语言基本无误（不超过3处）；书写工处）；书写工整；词数符合要求。整；词数符合要求。二档（二档（911分）分）要点基本齐全，能写出要求中的大部分要点；语篇结构较完整；应用的语言要点基本齐全，能写出要求中的大部分要点；语篇结构较完整；应用的语言结构虽不太丰富，但基本能满足任务要求；虽有一些语言错误，但基本不影结构虽不太丰富，但基本能满足任务要求；虽有一些语言错误，但基本不影响意义表达；书写较工整；词数基本符合要求。响意义表达；书写较工整；词数基本符合要求。三档（三档（58分）分）要点不齐全，只能写出要求中的部分要点；语篇结构不完整；语言结构单要点不齐全，只能写出要求中的部分要点；语篇结构不完整；语言结构单一；语言错误较多，影响意思表达；书写不够工整；词数不足一；语言错误较多，影响意思表达；书写不够工整；词数不足50。 四档（四档（04分）分）只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇；词数不足只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇；词数不足20。凡未答题或抄写试卷。凡未答题或抄写试卷其他文字内容的，一律判为零分。其他文字内容的，一律判为零分。小组合作互批小组合作互批 满分满分15分：分：