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1、作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错 误，仅有个别小错。 The Objective of Study After entering colleges, students hold quite different opinions about the destination

2、of study. Some of them hold that (1)_ _. In their opinion, (2)_ _ _. This idea may be the reason why (3) _ _.第一种观点理由相应的做法 But a good many college students are inclined to challenge this belief. They argue that (4) _ _ _. For this purpose, (5) _ _ _. For my part, I think (6) _ _ _. Only in this way c

3、an we (7) _ _ _. (4)第二种观点(5)相应的做法(6)我的看法(7)理想的做法对立观点型论说文常用句型 点明文章主题的常用句式 1. has become a hot topic among people recently. Opinions vary from person to person. 2. There is an argument (much disagreement) among people concerning (over / as to / on) 3. Nowadays, people are divided on the question as to

4、 whether 4. Different people have different views on 5. When being asked about different people will offer different answers. 6. There is a public debate (discussion) today about the problem of 7. The issue of whether or not has been widely argued (debated) currently.具体介绍两种对立观点的常用句式1. Some people su

5、ggest (maintain / hold) the opinion that . However (But / While) other people hold a different point of view 2. Some people are inclined to think that On the contrary (In contrast), there are still many people who wont agree, and they claim 3. When it comes to some people think (believe) that Others

6、 argue (claim) that the opposite is true.4. Those who criticize (oppose to /object to) argue that But people who advocate (favor) , on the other hand, maintain that5. Nowadays, an overwhelming majority of people think that Nevertheless, there are still some people for the opinion that 陈述自己观点的常用句式For

7、 my part (As to me / As far as I am concerned), Id like to agree to the former (my favor goes to the first) view. I agree to the latter opinion to some extent.Im in favor of ( Im on the side of )In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we we should take into consideration all aspects of the

8、problems and then make the right decision.There is probably some truth in both arguments (statements), but 范文 The Objective of Study After entering colleges, students hold quite different opinions about the destination of study. Some of them hold that having a diploma is certainly the objective of s

9、tudy in college. In their opinion, the diploma will guarantee favorable opportunities in the job-hunting campaign. This idea may be the reason why their college lives are almost focused on reading books, which helps them pursue decent scores in exams. But a good many college students are inclined to

10、 challenge this belief. They argue that it is the most important to develop the personal interests and specialties in the college study. For this purpose, they often have every reason to pride themselves on excellent academic achievements in the subjects they take great interest in, while they may f

11、lunk in other courses in which they seem rather uninterested. For my part, I think it is quite necessary that we develop wide interest in computer, foreign languages or any other practical disciplines rather than just confine ourselves to textbooks. Only in this way can we keep on learning throughou

12、t our lifetime and always keep pace with the times.说明利弊型论说文 My View on Reference Books 1. 各种各样的参考书给学生们的学习提供了一 定的帮助。 2. 但是过分依赖参考书会产生许多负面效应。 3. 我认为 说明利弊型论说文的常用句型说明事物优点的常用句型1.There are several advantages in (of ) The first (biggest) advantage is that 2. Nothing (Few things) can equal (match with / be c

13、ompared with) in terms of 3. For all (In spite of / Despite) the disadvantages (side effects), it has its compensating advantages (beneficial effects).4. has a positive impact (influence / effect) on peoples lives.5. is playing an increasingly important role in peoples lives.说明事物缺点的常用句型nHowever, , j

14、ust like anything else, has its negative side as well.nOf course, the disadvantages can not be ignored.nHowever, it still has some drawbacks.nHowever, just as everything has two sides, also has many disadvantages.5. However, may also cause (bring about / lead to / result in /contribute to) some prob

15、lems.6. Everything has two sides. is no exception.7. As the proverb goes, every coin has its two sides (no garden without its weeds / every medal has its reverse), is no exception.8. However, the negative aspects are also apparent (obvious / evident). To begin with,To make matters worse, Worst of al

16、l, 表明事物利大于弊的常用句式nAs to me, I think the advantages outweigh (carry more weight than) the disadvantages.nAnyway, I still believe has more advantages than disadvantages.nBut for me, I think what is more important is its positive side.nThe advantages of (derived from) far outweigh (are much greater than

17、) the disadvantages (problems).模板 My View on Reference Books Nowadays students constantly find themselves flooded with all kinds of reference books. Reference books themselves are of no harm. Generally speaking, most of them (1) _ _. For example, (2) _ _ _.参考书的好处(2) 举例说明 However, depending too much

18、on reference books has many negative effects. To begin with, (3) _ _. Besides, (4) _ _. Worst of all, (5) _ _. In my opinion, we should (6) _ _ _.(3) 弊端一(4) 弊端二(5) 弊端三(6) 我的态度 范文 My View on Reference Books Nowadays students constantly find themselves flooded with all kinds of reference books. Refere

19、nce books themselves are of no harm. Generally speaking, most of them (1) are helpful and beneficial to our studies. For example, (2) when we are teaching ourselves a foreign language, good reference books are really a good teacher. However, depending too much on reference books has many negative ef

20、fects. To begin with, (3) armed with keys to all the questions, some students seem to know all, and then they will be less attentive in class. Besides, (4) some reference books published in such haste that they occasionally provide students with wrong answers, thus making students confused about som

21、e knowledge. Worst of all, (5) merely copying from the reference books, students gradually become lazy and get into passive learning habits which will definitely do great harm to their creativity. In my opinion, we should (6) make proper use of the books and never overuse them by merely copying with

22、out thinking. 问题解决型论说文 College English Teaching in Chinau有人认为中国的大学英语教学很不成功（如：大学毕业生英语说不好，听不懂，写不出）u认为失败的原因是u你的建议 写作模板 Nowadays, there are more and more people complaining that (1)_ _ _. After four-year English learning, most graduates (2)_ _ _. 提出一些人对大学英语教学的看法进一步说明问题的现状 To some extent, I think, it is

23、reasonable for those people to say so. To begin with, (3)_ _. Secondly, (4) _ _ Finally, (5) _ _. For instance, (6) _ _.(3) 失败原因一(4) 失败原因二(5)失败原因三(6)举例进一步说明 In conclusion, Chinese college English teaching is to be reformed. (7) _ _ _ _ _ _.(7) 提出解决方案 范文 College English Teaching in China Nowadays, th

24、ere are more and more people complaining that English teaching at college is a complete failure. After four-year English learning, most graduates cant properly communicate with foreigners, nor can they translate between languages, let alone write in English. To some extent, I think, it is reasonable

25、 for those people to say so. To begin with, English teaching at college is, to a large degree, teacher-centered. (It is not uncommon in the classroom that the teacher explains every language point in detail, while students take notes at times.) Secondly, culture is neglected in English teaching beca

26、use of poor text design. (With a great deal of grammar and structure exercises in the textbook, students are misled into memorizing a large vocabulary and a lot of English rules. Few students know how, when and where to use them properly.) Finally, test-oriented education, in a sense, misleads and i

27、mpedes college English teaching in China. For instance, college English Test Band Four/Six is so overemphasized in some colleges that teachers strive to meet the needs of the test, sacrificing learning for the sake of test results, and students only learn how to pass the examination. In conclusion,

28、Chinese college English teaching is to be reformed. English teaching should be student-centered, culture should be introduced in language teaching, and textbooks should be well designed to arouse students interest in learning to communicate in English. 问题解决型论说文常用句型l引出话题的常用句式lNowadays, has become a p

29、roblem we have to face.lNowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problemlAlthough has brought convenience to us, many people have begun to realize that it is the source of trouble as well.lRecently, the rise in the phenomenon of has drawn (aroused/ captured) worldwide attention.lNowada

30、ys, more and more people come to realize (be aware of) the importance of lOne of the urgent (pressing) problems (issues) we are confronted with is that 7. With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.8. Thanks to Chinas reform and op

31、ening-up policy, the past two decades have witnessed great economic development and social transformation.9. With the rapid (amazing/ fantastic) development (growth/ improvement) of economy, great changes have taken place in 10. Recently, the issue (problem/ question) of has been brought into focus

32、(brought to public attention/ posed) among public attention.11. Once in a newspaper, I hit upon (came across) a report that l分析原因的常用句式lHere are many (several/ a number of/ a variety of) reasons for it. First SecondFinallylThe reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing, For anotherlWhat has poss

33、ibly contributed to this problem? In the first place In the second placelPerhaps the main (primary/ most important) reason islis also (partly/ chiefly) responsible for the problem.lOne may attribute (owe) this problem tolA number of factors could account for (lead to/ contribute to/ result in)8. Thi

34、s problem may result from (be largely due to) a combination of factors.9. The explanation for this phenomenon involves many complex reasons. For one thing, For another,10. It will exert a far-reaching (profound) impact (influence/ effect) on 11. Admittedly, it may create (give rise to/ bring about)

35、a host of problems.l提出解决方案的常用句式lThe first key factor to solve this problem is Another key factor islPeople have found many solutions (approaches) to dealing with this problem.lWe can figure out many ways to relieve the present crisis.lThen, how should we solve this problem? Here are some suggestions

36、, which may be of some help.lFaced with , we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.lIt is high time that Here are a few examples of some of the measures that might be taken immediately.7. Obviously, if we ignore (are blind to) this problem, the chances are that (it is

37、 most likely that/ there is every chance that) will be put in jeopardy.8. It is essential that proper actions (effective measures) should be taken to reverse this situation (trend).9. There is no easy (immediate) solution (approach) to the issue of, butmight be beneficial (helpful).l不熟悉题材不熟悉题材Marria

38、ge and Partner RelationshipMarriage is certainly one of the most beautiful dreams of life. In this highly competitive society, it is a harbor of grown-ups. Whenever one is in trouble, he may go back home to be comforted by his beloved one.Marriage is beneficial for both parties. Though the marriage

39、license is only a piece of paper, it ensures the legitimacy of the relationship between a man and a woman. However, some people think that one must take on the never-ending responsibilities and obligations and mind chores of the family. They believe partner relationship is much relaxing. They wont h

40、ave any heart burden. Whats more, it is also quite romantic to meet only on weekends. But although it is romantic, it often produces an awful sense of imperfection. When it breaks up, one party will be deeply hurt by love.As far as I am concerned, Id like to have a family when I am sufficiently prep

41、ared for a successful marriage. Before that, I would choose to live with a partner, and then make the lifestyle of Dinks. But as long as we love each other, life could be equally beautiful.l1 经济l2 安全 l3 环境 l4 效率 l5 健康 l6 性格 l7 情感 l8交流l9兴趣 l10方便 l11成就 l12他人 l13经验 l14 耐久 Test for National Civil Servan

42、t1. 近年来兴起了一股国家公务员热, 你对这一现象的理解；2. 公务员考试热的原因何在；3. 你的观点 6. 句子连贯性和变化、用词总结关系过渡词语 in general, to some extent, in my view, as for me, as far as I am concerned, obviously, in brief, on the whole 比较对比关系过渡词语 similarly, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, otherwise, in sharp contrast, but, how

43、ever, yet, nevertheless 列举关系过渡词语 as a case in point, such as, first of all, to begin with, furthermore, besides, in addition, for one thing, for another 因果关系过渡词语 because (of), since, for, owing to, thanks to, as a result of, consequently, for the reason that, therefore, hence 让步关系过渡词语 although, even

44、 though, in spite of, despite 强调关系过渡词语 surely, obviously, particularly, in deed, needless to say, most important of all 递进关系 in addition, also, moreover, besides，whats more 时间顺序 immediately, meanwhile, presently, shortly, since, soon, temporarily, while 方式手段 as, as if, the way，by 目的关系 so that, in order that 7.建议检查：n每个句子是否都有谓语动词；动词的时态和语态； n主谓搭配是否恰当；n词性 n句子不完整、不断句n拼写、标点符号、大小写。