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1、 图表作文的篇章结构写图表作文时，常采用三段式的谋篇方式。这一结构可简单表述为：第一段：概述图表反映的主题思想第二段：分析产生的原因第三段：展望未来或提出方法或建议图表类作文常见模板第一段总体描述图表指明时间段指出突出变化或不同 常用句型或短语 As is clearly shown in the char/ table/graph, _ According to the figures given in the table/chart/graph, _ It can be seen from the table/chart/graph, _. The figures in the table

2、/chart reflect that _. especially, _指出突出变化 第二段分析原因 There are several factors leading to this change / difference . There are several reasons for _.(引出原因) To begin with, _(原因一) In addition, _原因二0 For example, _举例说明 Last but not the least, _原因三 To sum up简要总结 第三段自己的观点 As for me, _ On the one hand, _ on

3、 the other, _ In brief_ 4.Itpaysto+V（.是值得的。）例句：Itpaystohelpothers.帮助别人是值得的 5.bringhometo+人+事（让.明白.事）例句：Weshouldbringhometopeoplethevalueofworkinghard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值6The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 （.的原因是.） 例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reas

4、on why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。7.Leave much to be desired （令人不满意） 例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired. 我们的交通状况令人不满意四四级作文常见错误分析1.代词在句中的指代错误When he thrust a stick into the rat hole,it ran out and bit him.It 在句中指代的只能是r

5、at hole,而不是rat,由于意义混淆造成指代错误，应将it 明确改为the rat2.代词在句中的指代不明The people whose weekly earnings is obviously more than those who have not received the higher education ,the reason is that they have bigger chance to find a better job.此处的they 很显然指代不明，本意是指学历较高的人，应改为well-educated people此句还有一个明显的错误就是whose引导的是一个

6、定语从句，后面直接是the reason is that，因此people缺少应有的谓语，句子不完整3.代词one和you用于指代意义时的不同If one wants to excel in athletics,you should watch your diet一般规则是，用于泛指意义时，常用he(him,his),用于特定意义时才用you（your）When a person gets married,you take on new responsibilities把you改为he,或者把a person 改为you，与后面一致4.介词to用法不明确They do jobs that ca

7、n be replaced anytime due to their jobs are easyDue to 的to是介词，后面应接词组或短语常见的此类介词短语还有：be / get / become used to 习惯于 be given to 喜欢；癖好be related to 与有关系be addicted to 沉溺于；对上瘾 be devoted to 致力于；忠诚于 5.修饰语错位 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化例 I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world ou

8、tside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末 6.句子不完整 例.There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句 改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspap

9、er五2012年12月英语四级高分范文 Judging from the table, we can see that peoples income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.Judging from 是一个由现在分词转化而来的独立主格结构,在句子单独使用,不受主语的影响.为文章添色不少，可以一下就吸引到阅卷者的注意力 The fact reve

10、aled by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I dont think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it i

11、nstead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelon

12、g learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path. distinctive 有特色的，与众不同的 what引导的名词性从句作介词on 的宾语 which引导了一个非限制性定语从句 In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduates ability and learning habit. what 又引导了一个主语从句 整篇文章机构分明，层次清晰，让人一目了然 第二段的论述也是有理有据，观点很鲜明，on one hand,on the other hand的使用让论述的层次很清楚，所举例子也很有说服力，能较好的支撑所述论点 高级词汇，句型使用也为文章加分不少 16 结束语结束语