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1、广州一模作文讲评广州一模作文讲评高明二中 谭艳嫦基础写作评分说明基础写作评分说明 基础写作主要考查基础写作主要考查学生语言结构的应用能力学生语言结构的应用能力：能够：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题本试题要求考要求考生使用生使用5个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容，能个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容，能够够-1-适当使用适当使用定语从句定语从句或者或者同位语同位语结构表述结构表述同同一事物的几项相关信息一事物的几项相关信息 e.g. 1. White Tea, which gets its name from its silver-white

2、color, is regarded as one of the six major types of tea in China. e.g. 2. White Tea, one of the six major types of tea in China, gets its name from its silver-white color. 2-适当使用适当使用分词短语分词短语e.g. 2. Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and

3、Taiwan.e.g. 1. Named for its silver-white color, White Tea is regarded as one of the six major types of tea in China. e. g. 3. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.3-正确使用正确

4、使用thethe 比较结构比较结构4-能将能将多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来 5-巧妙巧妙运用不同词汇或短语表达合适的意义运用不同词汇或短语表达合适的意义 e. g. be famous for /is famed for/is best (well) known fore. g. White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects.The longer it is preserved,

5、 the better effect it has.评分时，应注意以下几个方面：评分时，应注意以下几个方面： 1.按照评分标准，实行按照评分标准，实行分析法分析法评分：按评分：按语言语言、内容内容和和连贯连贯分别给分；分别给分； 2.在在语言语言方面，方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确否正确、用词是否规范用词是否规范；考生是否使用了；考生是否使用了合合适的句子结构适的句子结构； 3.在在内容内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达了方面，重点评判考生是否表达了所所提供的全部信息提供的全部信息；如果考生在表达完整的内；如果考生在表达完整的内容时，容时，适当添加一些内容适当添加一些

6、内容，不扣分；，不扣分； 4.在在连贯连贯方面，重点评判方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。一篇连贯的短文。 White tea, _gets its name from its silver-white color, _(regard) as one of the six major Chinese tea types._ back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has _long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous _

7、its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its _(medicine) effects. The _(long) it is preserved, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if _(drink) frequently and can be used in preventing diseases _high blood pressure and _(help) relieve the pain of toothache and fe

8、ver. 参考范文参考范文 White tea, which gets its name from its silver-white color, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shap

9、e, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects. The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.读写任务评分说明读写任务评分说明 读写任务是读写任务是有材料作文有材料

10、作文：要求考生在阅读的基础：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的语篇概括考查考生的语篇概括和语言表达能力和语言表达能力。本试题本试题要求学生就要求学生就“节俭节俭”的话题的话题谈谈看法，内容包括：谈谈看法，内容包括：1 概要：要求能概括短文概要：要求能概括短文三个部分的主要内容三个部分的主要内容，并在概，并在概要中要中有条理地整合有条理地整合以下要点：以下要点：第一部分：第一部分： family never liked to waste money;第二部分：第二部分： was deeply in debt; 第三部分：第三部分：being t

11、hrifty is being smart with your moneyfind ways to do everything for less.2 正文正文：写作：写作内容应包括内容应包括： 对节俭的理解；对节俭的理解； 对节俭的重要性的论述；对节俭的重要性的论述； 就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。评分时应注意几个方面评分时应注意几个方面 1，按照评分标准，实行，按照评分标准，实行分析综合法分析综合法评分。评分。 2，概括概括应应包括上述要点包括上述要点，并且，并且用适当的方式用适当的方式进行信息整合进行信息整合。 3，写作的内容应该对应回答以下三个问题：，写作的

12、内容应该对应回答以下三个问题：1）Whats being thrifty?/what does thriftiness mean?/What does a thrifty person do?2)Why is being thrifty important to you?3)What should we do to be thrifty?/What are some thrifty tips?参考范文参考范文Version 1 In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his familys thrifty tradition and

13、 eventually met with financial difficulty. This helped him realize the importance of thriftiness and start to practise thriftiness again. To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things. Thrift is an old and da

14、ted concept to many young people. As life has become a lot easier, people tend to indulge in a luxurious lifestyle. Thats why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before. Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, its simply a matter of being more

15、 thoughtful in our everyday life: turning off lights when leaving the room, not using the air-conditioners unless necessary, bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending money on soft drinks, using public transports to avoid needless driving and parking, ordering just enough food when ea

16、ting out and so forth. To do these might mean doing things others wont do and controlling our desires. But remember, a smart person is not one who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth, but one who spares no effort to save for the future and for others.Version 2 The writer recal

17、ls the stress and economic problems he had after moving to a big city, forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth and wasting all his money. At last, he learned his lesson and became thrifty once more. I think a thrifty person is someone who uses only what they need and avoids waste. Being thrifty c

18、an save us money, but more importantly, it is necessary if we want to save our planet. In the face of growing environmental problems, I believe it is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution each individual produces. If we fail to control the amount of waste we produce,

19、 our society and our planet are doomed and this concern must overweigh any short-term satisfaction we get from buying and consuming more. It is for this reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible, rather than packaged food, which requires much more energy to produce and adds to our pollution p

20、roblems. I also try to cycle or walk everywhere I go, or at least use public transport rather than getting a taxi or depending on a private car. Actions like these keep me fit and healthy, help the environment and leave me with more money in my pocket! Why dont you try these too? You might really enjoy the results.