浙江省2022年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达（材料写作）解析版.docx

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1、浙江省2022年中考英语真题分类汇编：书面表达（材料写作）一、书面表达1.假如你是李雷，上周参观了以Working ihcWasicinlo Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写 一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。What were on showWhat they are made of / fromWhat you think*clothesKhairsmociel planesA.waste paperAplastic bottlesiised wood and glassACreativeave.A .注意：1）短文须介绍至少吧项展品，可适当发挥；

2、2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3）词数：80100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! Id like to tell you something about the show Working the Waste into Magic.【答案】Possible version ：Hello, everyone! Id like to tell you something about the show Working the Waste into Magic.A number of creative works were on show, including

3、 clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the

4、 zipper of jeans on the top. two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求以李宙的身份，根据表格内的信息，介绍你上周参观以“Working ihcWas

5、ic into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一 股现在时和一般过去时为主。写作时要注意文章的内容要包含所提示的信息，内容要充实，表达要符合英语 的习惯。耍注意上卜文的连贯，条例清晰。注意单词拼写的正确性，语法运用的准确性。【点评】考查材料作文。范文首先介绍了展出的作品，然后介绍了感兴趣的物品是什么制成的，最后一段表 达自己的观点。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。高分亮点：短语：a number of, be made oiYfrom. feel amazed at help to do 等； 句

6、型： Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles.（定语从句）；I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use.（宾语从句）2.假设你是李华，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our OutdoorClassroom项目式学习(COOC Project),经过分组讨论，你们形成了 Plan A与Plan B两个实施方案(见下 表)，请你选择其中一个方案，用英文写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所

7、选的方案的内容和又是 进行汇报。Create Our Outdoor ClassroomAdvantages improve our EnglishOn the right is a map of the school gardenFlwm 工 Gtwhod【答案】Possible versions:Plan ADear classmates. Im very proud io share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is naming the plants in English.There are mainly two steps.

8、 Well first do a survey to find out information about the plants. We can surf theInternet, or ask our teachers ibr help if we meet with difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. Welldescribe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, a photo of the plant will be in

9、cluded in each card.We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to lean) about nature and improve our English. I cant wait to see it coine into practice.Thats all. Thank you!Plan BDear classmates. Im very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is creating an E

10、nglish coiner.The first thing well do is to choose an area tor it. As you see in the map. the grassland makes a good choice. Well decorate it with several tables and chairs, so that we can have comfortable talks. A shelf of English books and magazines will also be pul there. Then were going to make

11、some rules. For example. Wc need Io take care of things, and of course, speak English only.Im sure this comer will become a popular place lor us to improve our spoken English, and make more friends as well.Thats all. Thank you!【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定以学校花园为载体，以“Create Our Outdoor

12、Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project),让你对你们形成 Plan A与Plan B两个实施方案选择其 中个方案，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选的方案的内容和又是进行汇报，写作中要包含你们所选的 方案进行汇报。根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列词的使 用以及主谓一致问题，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将方案细节逐一介绍，内容切题，表达连贯，意思完整，时态运用灵 活准确，如连词For example的准确使用以及一般将来时will的使用，表达较为准确，使文章更加流畅、自 然。3.假如你是陈华，你的英国

13、朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写 邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见卜.表)回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补 充至少一项活动。Activities for the Chinese music club,Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.Share stories of Chinese singers.注意：【)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tracy.Glad to hear from you. Its

14、 great to know youve got a Chinese music club in your school.Hope youll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.Yours,Chen Hua【答案】Dear Tracy,Glad to hear from you. Its great to know youve got a Chinese music club in your school.Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club me

15、mbers to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so i(s surely a meaningful activity.Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to th

16、e club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.Hope youll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.Yours.Chen Hua【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计

17、的活动来回复邮件，要提出你 对这些活动的看法及理由，并补充一项适合该社团的活动。写作时要以第二人称为上，时态采用一般现在 时工作文可采用四段式：第一段用已给出开头引出话题；第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由； 第三段补充合适的社团活动：第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。【点评】这篇短文详细、全面阐述了自己对于社团活动的看法，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用 /一-些固定句式，如 ihcrebe 句型(There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those i

18、n western counlrics)； 原因状语从句 (because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally ) 等； 以及短语，如the background of； inlroducck.“： differenl from等。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，富有逻 辑性。4.假如你是Li Hua,你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结 合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的羟历，回一封邮件，供他参考。注意：1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥：参考词汇供选择使用：2）

19、文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3）词数：80-100：4）邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计人总词数：正文首句仅供选择使用。内容要点参考词汇Things needednotebook, dictionary.Attitude（态度）to takehard-working active, happy,.Relationship to developrespect, get along with,.Others1E文首句：Im glad to know youre coming lo study in our schoolDear Frank,Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua【

20、答案】A possible version：Dear Frank.Im glad to know youre coming to study in our school. Here is something Id like to share.To begin with, you need to get ready some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard

21、. But whalcvcr happens, stay active, even when you fail.And respect the teachers as its a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, il is a good idea to develop some hobbies io make your life better and more colourful.I hope my advice will work.

22、 Looking forward to seeing you!Best wishes.Yours.Li Hua【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。要求给外国好友Frank写一封回信，与他分析你初中阶段学习、生活方 面的经验。从表格中可以看出涉及需要为新学期准备的东西，对待学习的态度，培养与同学间的关系和补充 内容四个方面。一些可能涉及到的单词表格中也已经给出，注意选择恰当的时间词将所有内容有序的连接起 来，表格中的信息不能缺失，使文章自然流畅。【点评】考查提纲作文。所给例文开门见山，用“Here is something Id like to share.”宜接过渡到表格内容。

23、lo begin with,译为首先，在此处使用的比较恰当,用短语get ready sth.引出需要准备的东西，比起用especially 进行强调，文笔自然流畅，并且用because从句解释了这样做的原因。用Besides.Jastly引出了所要陈述的其 他方面内容，文章逻辑严谨。it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful. 一句强调了自己建议的重要性，起到画龙点睛的作用。5.毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“ My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的

24、理想，选择下表中个职 业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。内容要点参考词汇What do you want to be when you grow up?a teachera scientistWhy do you want to be a(n).?1 be good at communicating1 work with childrenI be interested in science1 invent new productsHow are you going to do that?1 get a good education1 learn how to teach c

25、hildren1 study science hard1 do scientific researchWhere arc you going to work?1.1.When are you going (o start?1.1.注意：I）文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用:2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3）词数 80700“My dream job【答案】Possible version:My dream jobWe all have drcam jobs. As for me, i drcam to be a scientist. I have al

26、ways been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve peoples life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.To be a scientist. I need to take actions right now. First, Im going lo study science really hard. Second, 1 plan to doscientific research. And most important

27、ly, Ill read as many books as possible. If 1 become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate wilh more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这篇作文耍求选择表格中的一个或自行确定一个职业，以“My dream job”为题,写一篇短 文，为校报投稿。人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般将来时为主。写作时要注意文章的内容要包含表格中的 所有要点，还要结

28、合自己的实际情况，内容要充实，表达要符合英语的习惯。要注意上下文的连贯，条例清 晰。注意单词拼写的正确性，语法运用的准确性。【点评】考查材料作文。范文采用两段式来写的。第段谈论了自己梦想的职业和原因；第二段谈论了怎样 实现自己的梦想以及未来工作的时间和地点等。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明。序数词firsi, second的使用增强逻辑关系，使行文更加连贯流畅。高分亮点：短语wani/hopc/nccd/plan io do sth, as.as possible, live in 等。句型： I want to invent new products to improve peoples life and 1 also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.（并歹峋）：.If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts.（状语从句,定语从句）；I believe my dream will come【rue if I work hard.（宾语从句）。