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1、一、邀请信1 .假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内 容包括：2 .时间；3 .活动安排；4 .欢迎他表演节目。注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。二、其他应用文2.假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1 .比赛信息：2 .赛前准备；.表达期待。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2 .书面表达假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1 .表示歉意；.说明原因；2 .另约时间。注意:I .词数100左

2、右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关 习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：（1）到达时间；（2）合适的礼物；（3）餐桌礼仪。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。三、申请信5.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请 做志愿者，内容包括：1 .写信目的：2 .个人优势；.能做的事情。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2 .结束语已为你写好。参考答案:1. Dear Allen.How is everything going? Ou

3、r school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start al 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitel

4、y welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎 他表演节目。第二，根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival, in the school hall, The

5、 opening ceremony 等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our fesiival.定语从句。提升了 文章档次。2. Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that wc will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our s

6、chool gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to (rain for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to

7、 Friday.Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua 【解析】【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写封邮件告知 队友有关比赛的信息。【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、 地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三 那么要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【点睛】

8、本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句;In order to win the match 不定式作目的状语。文章语 言流畅，上下文转换自然。3. Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important cla

9、ss meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday moming? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If it convenient fbr you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you bes

10、t. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】试题分析：题目要求写一封抱歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob抱歉，使用第一人称和一 般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使 作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句Iha have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon 和 ihe change will not cause you too muc

11、h trouble； 目的状语从句 so that weUl have more time to read and select books；条件句 If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of som

12、e relevant details.Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, tabic manners arc also what you should pay attention

13、 to. For example, you arc not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比拟熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点： 一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一

14、般 现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以 提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。点睛：本文虽然看起来比拟容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比拟困惑的。原因为：1.看起 来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100单词左右，写出到达 时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文 化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这 样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要

15、的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到， 中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一 种能力。4. Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to apply to be a volunteer fbr the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified fbr this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides,

16、I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.I would be very grateful if you could ofler me the opportunity. Fm

17、 looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。【详解】.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般 现在时。1 .谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事， 最后一段总结。2 .关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunieer, a Chinese Painting Exhibition, advantages, I am good at., I c

18、an help with./Fil devote myself to.o通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语 法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with, moreover, as for me, Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当， 内容完整,同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for, be fluent in, be beneficia

19、l for 等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood 此处使用 了 原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用 了 非限制性定语从 句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用 了 条件状语从句。