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1、-中考满分作文是如何练就的中考满分作文是可以练就的内外兼修文段表达(15分) 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。(2010年北京中考真题)Hi! Liu Jing, My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he wo

2、uld like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can go anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, TonyHi! Tony,Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. _ _If you have

3、 more questions, please ask me. Yours, Liu Jing假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。（2010年北京中考真题）Introduce the good bus service in Beijing正文线索：convenient, considerate, fast and cheap可用结构：1. so that 2. It is + adj./n. for/of sb. to do sth.3. it is a good idea to do sth.4.

4、spend some time in doing sth.5. too to do sth.6. be good/bad for 连贯词：并列 bothand转折 but/however/whereas/on the other hand选择 eitheror/or递进 not only but also/whats more/in addition/ 原因 because/since/as/for结果 so/therefore/as a result回答问题Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is really good now

5、.convenientThere are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can take you to every corner of the city.ConsiderateBesides, special seats which are painted yellow are offered on buses to make sure the old and young can take the bus safely.FastWhats more, the interval between two buses is so short that pe

6、ople do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus.CheapIn addition, the price of the tickets is the lowest in China while the service quality of the conductors is the highest.In a word, I think the bus service in Beijing is convenient, considerate, fast and cheap. I like taking a bus. Its also

7、 good for the environment. So its a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus when he visits Beijing.Dear Tony,lm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is really good now. There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you

8、to a small village. Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap.I like taking a bus because I think its comfortable and also good for the environment. So its a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing.If you have more questions, please ask me. Liu Jing如何避免写作中的低级错误一人两态一单一复两写-第 5 页-