人教版(新教材)高中英语选修1Unit 1 People of Achievement精品学案：Writing——人物介绍.docx

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1、Writing人物介名解勒单元写作点拨写作技巧 一、写作分析人物介绍是记叙文体的一种，主要是写名人或伟人的生平及事迹。在文章篇幅安 排上要对被描述对象的生平进行简要描述，主要篇幅要表达其事迹或在某个领域 作出的特殊贡献，最后简要地对该人物进行评价。二、篇章结构.开头段：简要介绍生平（出生年月、出生地点、家庭背景等）1 .主体段：具体描述人物外貌、性格特点、教育经历、主要事迹等.结尾段：对人物作出整体评价三、语言特点.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点 信息通常是写作的目的所在，比方求职信要重点突出学历、工作经历，新闻报道 要重点突出事迹，人物介绍类文章要突出人物

2、的特点。1 .注意正确运用时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而介 绍人物的出生时间及地点、教育背景、工作经历和主要事迹那么常用一般过去时。积累写作素材.年龄He was born in 1996 and is 24 years old now.Born in 1999, he is now a 21 yearold student, studying in a university.He began to make a living at an early age.In his fifties, he began to feel his age.1 .外貌特征She is a

3、lovely girl, with big eyes, white teeth and long hair.He is a handsome man, with a thick moustache.He is a tall man, with blue/bright eyes and blond/brown hair.2 .家庭背景、教育状况He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life.He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.He went

4、 to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated 4 years later.He got his bachelor5s/masterdoctor9s degree in mathematics from.3 .生平事迹He devoted his lifetime to.He won a prize in.He made up his mind to.He made great progress in.4 .对人物的评价He is one of the most outstanding persons.He is honoured/re

5、garded/considered as.He has made great contributions to.He sets an example to.例如分步写作假定你是李华，你校开展了一次主题为“用英语讲好中国故事”的英语写作比赛 活动，你对出生于普通农民家庭的诺贝尔文学奖获奖者莫言非常钦佩，请根据下 列内容写一篇文章。莫言生平本名管谟业，1955年出生于山东省，小学五年级辍学后从事 务农工作，一直酷爱阅读中国经典名著莫言作品红高粱、蛙，2011年凭借小说蛙获得茅盾文学 奖，2012年获得诺贝尔文学奖你的感悟注意：1 .词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：红高

6、粱Red Sorghum ；蛙Frogs ；茅盾文学奖Mao Dun LiteratureAwards第一步审题谋篇体裁夹叙夹议文时态记叙局部以一般过去时为主， 议论局部以一般现在时为主主题介绍莫言生平事迹，抒发自己 切身感受人称记叙局部以第三人称为主，议 论局部以第一人称为主布局简要介绍莫言的人生经历 简要介绍莫言的伟大成就 表达个人感想第二步要点翻译1 .结果，他小学五年级就辍学了。As a consequence, he dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school.2 .出于对文学的强烈爱好，他全心全意投入到各种中国经典名著中。Out

7、 of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics.3 .使莫言如此非凡的不仅是他著名的作品，还有他对自己所钟爱的事情的投入。 What makes Mo Yan so extraordinary is not only his works but also his commitment to what he loves.第三步词句升级1 .用whose引导的非限制性定语从句合并句子。Mo Yans real name is Guan Moye.He was born in an

8、ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.-Mo Yan, whose real nam。 is Guan Moye, was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.2 .用when引导的非限制性定语从句合并句子。Mo Yan was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955,At that time people didnt live a rich life and attached l

9、ittle importance to school education, f Mo Yan was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955, when people didnt live a rich life and attached little importance to schooleducation.3 .用while doing结构改写句子While he was working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literatur

10、e, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories, f While working as a young peasant out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. 第四步连句成篇Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was

11、 born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955, when people didnt live a rich life and attached little importance to school education.As a consequence, he dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school.While working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he c

12、ommitted to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. Mo Yan created many famous literature works , including Red Sorghum and Frogs.Frogs won him Mao Dun Literature Awards in 2011 and he won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 2012.In my opinion, what makes Mo Yan so extra

13、ordinary is not only his famous works but also his commitment to what he loves.演练话题美文请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍中国工程院院士、著名呼吸病学专家钟南 山。内容要点如下：1. 1936年10月出生于一个医学世家，福建厦门人；2. 1960年毕业于北京医学院（今北京大学医学部）；3. 2003年他是抗击“非典”的英雄，2020年他在抗击新型肺炎疫情中做出了突 出贡献；4. 致力于呼吸道疾病的研究和治疗，受到中国人民的高度评价。注意：1 .词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中国工程

14、院院士 academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering； 呼吸道疾病respiratory diseases；新冠病毒肺炎COVID 19K参考范文Born in a medical family, in Oct.l 936, Zhong Nanshan comes from Xiamen, Fujian Province.When he was young he had a strong passion for medicine.Zhong Nanshan, who graduated from Peking University Medi

15、cal School in 1960, is one of the academicians of the Chinese Academy of Engineering.In 2003, he was a hero in fighting against SARS, managing the SARS outbreak.In 2020, he made an outstanding contribution when fighting against COVID 19.Zhong Nanshan has devoted much of his life to researching and t

16、reating respiratory diseases, whose work is highly thought of by all Chinese people.微技能句式升级之三动作或事件1 . 基石出表达： The student looked at the teacher and said nothing when he was asked why he cheated in the exam.升级表达： The student, when questioned why he cheated in the exam, just looked at the teacher and s

17、aid nothing.2 . 基石出表达： Thousands of people have died in the war which broke out a year ago. 升级表达： The war, which broke out a year ago, has claimed thousands of lives.3 .基石出表达： When he was young, he always had a day dream, so he achieved nothing. 升级表达： When young, he used to build castles in the air

18、and thus achieved nothing.4 .基础表达：As a new graduate, he doesnt know how to start his own career.升级表达： As a newly graduated student, he doesnt know what it takes to create his own career.赏析：状语从句放在句中，句式多变。其中省略表达Mien questioned也为句子 增分。赏析：不用通常表述的多少人死亡，而是用战争宣告了上千人死亡 (claimed thousands of lives), 让人感觉与众不同。赏析：When he was young升级为省略形式 When young ；用习语 build castles in the air 替代 had a day dream o赏析：升级表达中运用了宾语从句what it takes,使句子结构更复杂；并用 create 替代 start