人教版(新教材)高中英语选修2Unit5 First Aid优质学案：Writing—A narrative essay about providing first aid.docx

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1、WritingA narrative essay about providing first aidLearning Aims(学习目标)Learn how to write a narrative essay about providing first aid.1. Practice writing one.(重点难点)目标一目标一写作要领技法指导本单元的写作任务是写与急救有关的叙事类文章。此类作文通过完整的故事情节和生动 形象的语言来表达事件。写作时需要把握好记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)、地点(where)、 事件(what)、人物(who)、原因(why)和方式(how)。基本结

2、构：1 .开头交代事情发生的背景。2 .主体表达事件的发生、经过和结果。3 .结尾发表感想或是表达愿望。常用表达Long long ago, there was a.1. Once upon a time, there lived a.2. One day, a woman woke up early.3. On a dark, rainy night.4. On Christmas Day.5. In the end, they found that.6. At last, the boy finished the.7. Fortunately, all the people.8. In a

3、 word, we can learn from the story that first aid makes a big difference.9. As the saying goes.目标二写作实践分步演练假定你是李华，上周日和同学王平去看电影，在去电影院的路上看到一位老人躺在地上。 请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。内容包括：1 .交代事情发生的背景。2 .表达事件的发生、经过和结果。3 .发表感想。注意：1 .词数80左右;2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步审题谋篇R审题H写作要求是写一个故事。写作时应注意下面几点：1 .确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作时应注意记叙文的常规格式。2

4、 .主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。3 .主体人称：由于是写发生在自己身上的故事，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。R谋篇H开头：交代故事发生的背景；主体：表达故事的过程；结尾：表达感想。第二步遣词造句K核心词汇X受伤 get/be injured1. 处在恐慌中in panic去帮助某人 go to one said2. 救护车 ambulance毫不迟疑 without delay3. 急需 in desperate need of/desperately need sth.4. 急救医生 paramedic放松；舒适at easeK连词成句1.上周末我的同学王平和我去看电影。Las

5、t Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film.1 .在我们去电影院的路上，我们看见一位老人躺在地上。On oui way to the cinema, we saw an old man lying on the ground.2 .当我们走近时，我们发现他受了重伤。When we walked closer, we found him badly injured.3 .尽管我们处在恐慌中，但我们立刻就去帮助他，王平叫了救护车。Although we were in panic, we immediately went to

6、his aid and Wang Ping called an ambulance.4 .我们毫不迟疑地对他进行急救。We performed first aid on him without delay.5 .救护车到达之后，我们急忙把他送往医院。After the ambulance arrived, we nished him to hospital.6 .他急需手术，因此急救医生把他推往手术室。He was in despeiate need of an operation, so the paiamedics pushed him to the operating room. 8.当

7、我们看到老人的儿子来到医院，我们都放松了。When we saw the elderly man s son come to the hospital, we were at ease.9 .尽管我们已经错过电影，但我们不后悔。Although we had missed the film, we didn t regret.10 .我们过了多么有意义的一天！What a meaningful day we had!第三步句式升级.将句3改成doing作状语Walking closer, we found him badly injured.1 .将句8改成doing作状语Seeing the

8、 elderly man s son come to the hospital, we were at ease.2 .将句9改成having done作状语Having missed the film, we didn t reg】et.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语 短文。【参考范文】Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film.On our way to the cinema, we saw an old man lying on the ground.W

9、alking closer, we found him badly injured.Although we were in panic, we immediately went to his aid and Wang Ping called an ambulance.Then we performed first aid on him without delay.After the ambulance arrived, we rushed him to hospitaLHe was in desperate need of an operation, so the paramedics pushed him to the operating room.Seeing the elderly man, s son come to the hospital, we were at ease.Having missed the film, we didn t regret.What a meaningful day we had!