2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习天气与环境.docx

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1、2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（八）天气及环境一、相关话题天气（Weather）、自然（Nature）、世界及环境（The world and the environment）二、及专题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：（天气）七年级上Unit 4 Seasons；（自然、环境）七年级上Unit 3 The Earth；七年级下Unit 4 Save the trees；Unit 5 Water；八年级下Unit 5 Save theendangeredanimals2.相关词汇：高频词：（关于天气）seasons, weather, plant, spring, summer, autum

2、n, winter, sunny, rainy, snowy, foggy, grow, rain, swim,（关于自然、环境）the Earth, the moon, forest, river, mountain, field, environment, pollute, pollution, protect, destroy, dirty, clean, burn, waste, gas, area, pour, nearby,serious, public, improve,；endangered,save;高频短语：（关于天气）get warm, turn green, heavy

3、 snow, go to the beach, fall from the trees, go on a picnic, take a trip, play in the snow,（关于自然环境）pollute the water,throwaway,put waste/ rubbish into rivers and seas, take in harmful gases, fight against pollution, cut down, stop doing sth. , plant trees, dig holes, water the plants, as a result, t

4、urn the tap off, have a bath, take a shower,in the wild, lose ones home, killfor., millions of, thousands of,in danger, stopfrom, turn off;拓展词及词语：shower, muddy, the importance ofin our lives, decrease, valuable, drinkable,the WorldWild Fund for Nature, a nature reserve, live in harmony with nature,

5、atmosphere, environmental problem.3.经典句型：（关于天气）I like(season) best. / My favourite season is.The wind blows gently / strongly.The sun shines brightly.Its exciting to take a trip in spring.Its nice/exciting to do sth.（关于自然环境）The Earth provides us with air, water and food.The Earth is our home.Trees a

6、re important in our daily lives.Trees are home to birds and animals.There is a lot of pollution.We burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air.What can we do to protect the Earth?We must stopWe must do our best toWe mustnt throw rubbish into the river. The fish will die if the river is pollute

7、d.We should write to factories and ask them to stop polluting the river.We can take our own shopping bags to the supermarket.Remember not to waste or pollute water.The problem is very serious. People often.We cant live withoutThey throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously po

8、lluted.We should use the both sides of papercollect waste paper.Dont buy caps or boxes which people can use only once.Turn off the lights when you are not using them.Youd better ride a bike instead ofdriving a car.Youd better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a bus or a taxi if youre traveling a

9、 short distance.Something must be done to stop the pollution.Panda are strong enough to protect themselves.Its important for us to protect the endangered animals.It is cruel of people to kill animals.二、经典例题：（2010年广州市中考题）你校准备举行“节约用水，从现在做起”的英语征文比赛，你打算投稿。请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文。必要性没有水人类就无法生存不良现象不关水龙头（tap）；洗澡时

10、间很长；没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉。建议（你的2-3个建议）注意：1.词数80左右（计划的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2.不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不予评分。Act now to save waterWater is important to us解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有6 个要点b.时态主要采用一般现在时c.人称是_第一人称_2.可能用到的短语和句型a.主要连接词but , so , in my opinion,b.主要短语句型_some.,some. others_cant live without, turn off, throw away3.成文：Act

11、now to save waterAs everyone knows, water isimportantin our dailylife.One canlivewithout food for a week,but one can no longerexistwithout water in three days.Nowin the world, water isfewer and fewer.We should not waste even a drop of water.There are many examples of wasting water ,such as notturnof

12、f the tap after using it,haveatoo longshower andthrowbottlewithwater.In my opinion,peopleshouldstart out small to savewater. Try to use the water again and again.For example,after washing clothes,you can use the water to mop. So please dont wait .Act now to save water. We will have a brighter future

13、.点评：1）、从内容上须写23个建议，学生只写了一个。2）、本文出现一些可以避免的语法错误，如水是不可数的，不能用fewer and fewer等。3）、还有些中式的英语，have a too long shower.4)、最后一段人称比较乱，有I, you, people和we,改为用第一人称更好，5）、整篇文章描述比较流畅，用到较好的句子如One canlivewithout food for a week,but one can no longerexistwithout water in three days.所以整篇文章得分：5+4.5+2.5=124.检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.

14、如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局及内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句5.分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6-5554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语 法6-5.554.54-3.543-2.521.510词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构3-2.52-1.5210.50000自评总分：6.参考例文：Water is very important to us. Without water, people cannot li

15、ve. But in our daily life, we can see many people waste water. Some people do not turn off the tap after using it. Some take long showers and others throw away plastic bottles when there is still water inside. To save water, we should always turn off the tap when we are not using it. We can wash our

16、 clothes twice a week instead of every day. And wed better flush the toilets with used water.The last drop of water could be our tear, so take actions from now on to save water.四、实战演练：环保和建设“美丽中国”是2013年我们国家热门的话题。作为广州市的一名小市民，针对广州目前出现的灰霾问题，请你根据以下四个方面的提示向广州市环保局局长写一封以建设“美丽广州”为主题的倡议信。1.主要问题：灰霾（haze n.）天气。

17、2.原因：工厂和汽车排放废气、工地(building site)产生粉尘。3.重要性：健康问题4.相应的措施。禁止工厂排放废气、工地释放过多的Spring Festival粉尘，小车限行。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3.可适当发挥。Dear SirEnvironmental protection and building beautiful China have become Chinese hot topics in 2013becausethere is a serious airpollutionproblem._Sincerely

18、 yours,Debbie注意：1.词数80-100个，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入词数。2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3.可适当发挥。解题思路：审题：本文共有个要点时态主要采用人称是_可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）_可能用到的句型_成文：_检查思路：完成作文自查表：如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局及内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句参考例文：Dear SirEnvironmental protection and building beautiful China have become Ch

19、inese hot topics in 2013becausethere is a serious airpollutionproblem. In Guangzhou, haze weather appears. Factories, cars and the building sites produce too much dirty and dusty air. Therefore its important to solve this problem because air problem can lead to health problems. To build beautiful Gu

20、angzhou, we should make a great effort to do the following things. On one hand, we should prevent the factories and the building site from giving out the harmful gases On the other hand, we should keep too many cars from running on the roads every day. If we improve these two situations, Guangzhou will get more and more beautiful.Sincerely yours,Debbie7 / 7