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1、中学生创新英语大赛写作范文版权归LZM所有，此篇作文仅作例如，不参加此次征文比赛。假设比 赛组有发现比赛中有雷同作文请严肃处理。Scientists have long tried to find ways to communicate with other species and have had very limited success with primates, such as chimpanzees and gorillas. But what if we found a way to greatly improve communication, what might we disc

2、over?Write an essay with no less than 300 words about the species you would like to communicate with and what you would say to them. You can add a title by yourself.Run! Animals, Run!Announcing they are on top of the food chain, human beings have been becoming more and more savage to their best frie

3、nds animals. Itsextremely heartbroken every time I see the bloody scenes on the TV, however, I can do nothing but close my eyes and cross my fingers, praying for them desperately. Had I the superpower to speak to animals, the first word would beRUN!Run! Whales and dolphins, run! As the marine animal

4、s with superb wisdom, do you know that you are the biggest target that people are tracing? The Creator gave you the most beautiful curves and edges, the fanciest way of living and the kindest mind, whereas he didnt warn you to stay away from people. The polluted water is taking away your habitat and

5、 the harpoons are awaiting you to come out of water. For the sake of safety, please go as deep as deep as you can!Run! Sheep and cattle, run! Do you feel comfortable because you have adequate food and enjoy the greatest care? Then you are wrong, my friend! People are doing all this just for keeping

6、your meat in a high quality to make more money. Just tonight, please leap over the fence and run to the prairie that you are supposed to belong to! Run! Minks and foxes, run! I know you are bom to be aggressive, which is not your fault. However, people are using your nature to kill you and peel off

7、your skin cruelly but clamming that theyre doing good for human. Please stay away from peoples life and go to the nature! Believe me, real nature can meet all your demands for living. Run! My friends, run away till human can never find you! Dont let them get interfered with your life and rebel your

8、liberty!Directions:Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthqua

9、ke to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especia

10、lly the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer

11、 work right now! 陈茜 江苏省哈尔滨市第三中学高三18班 Dear grandfather: How are you?I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a volunteer in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai. We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work. And you are welcome

12、d by all our team members owing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture. Please dont tell me you are too old to do this job. I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explanation of the importance of the volunteer work.Nowadays, voluntee

13、r work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becoming more and more popular throughout the world. As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary, whats more, its interesting and pleasant! It help us develop ourselves .Firstly, for individuals, especially tho

14、se young, to do volunteer work is an availabe way to gain social experience. By doing volunteer work, they can meet various people and they may run across all kinds of troubles. They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems. You know, no pains, no gains. Also, individuals

15、will realize that they do make a difference in someone elses life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be revised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.For families, if youre the side that received the help of the volunteers, of course your issue will be more easily de

16、alt with. If youre the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that a virtue deserves another because youll get the best present - smile deeply from ones heart, in the whole world.It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each

17、 other in communities by taking part in volunteer work. Their team spirits, their co-operation will be great improved. So, why not?The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know

18、 there are so many people are willing to help others although they cant get money from it. It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families.My dear grandfather, come on! Join us and help introduce our great Chinese culture to the world. 21 century i

19、s on open century. You can trust yourself and please trust us, too! Well help you and we need you help! Lets make the world a better place by being a volunteer! Its a small step for us but it is a large one for the whole world! Love you.Your granddaughter.专家建议：句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位，建议多练练关联词的用法。词汇 不够丰富，句型变

20、化不多，建议多看些范文，多练一些经典句型。专家点评：文章立意很好，整体结构清晰，语言大体流畅，还能够引经据典，显 示出有一定的英语文化底蕴。To be a volunteer , Bring a ray of sunshine 陈天悦山东省济南市山东省齐钢高级中学高三4班Dear Tom:It is a great pleasure for me to have the wonderful chance to put pen to paper and send my greetings to you. You said that you wanted to be a volunteer and

21、 didnt know whether you should or not. I want to help you analyze it.In my opinion. I think it is not only a good chance to help others but also a good opportunity to make self-improvement. Youd better participate in the volunteer work. If we compare youth to flowers, as is often the case, then the

22、young volunteers are the most beautiful flowers. By joining in the volunteer work, you will learn how to help others and how to love others. Whats more you can also find it out that there are many people suffering from disaster and then you will value your comfortable life. Although you may feel ver

23、y tired as a volunteer and it may cost you much time to help others, I still insistthat you should be a volunteer because the advantages bright about by volunteer work overweigh the disadvantages.If all the people refused to be volunteers, the people suffered from the May 12 earthquake could lose he

24、art and most of them wouldnt have the chance to survive from that disaster. If none of the people wanted to be a volunteer, the Beijing Olympic Games would be a failure. If every people didnt feel like being a volunteer, there would be no people cleaning the environment and protecting the beautiful

25、scenery automatically. It was terrible! From all mentioned above,volunteers play a very important part in our daily life. To be a volunteer will gain glory for China. As is known to all, Chinese children are always laughed at for lack of practice. So to be a volunteer is a good chance to compensate

26、for it.From my point of view, its high time that you became a volunteer and learned to help others. If everyone makes a contribution to helping others, the world will be much more beautiful!At last, wish you all the best! Yours sincerely. Lily.专家建议：一篇文章的结构是评判该文章优劣的重要参考标准，但结构显然不够 简洁清晰，所以建议作者能在平时多阅读英文

27、报纸上的文章，有意识地 观察规范的英语文章是怎样设计结构的。专家点评：文章二三段的结构很混乱，建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总 的形式更能突出文章的逻辑性，并在“分”的局部也一条一条分开写， 而不是都堆在一段内，让人分不清哪句是观点哪句是论证，很混乱。另 外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富，比方文章中屡次出现的帮助 他人就都是使用：help others就显得过于单一了The importance of volunteer work崔静远辽宁省鞍山市鞍山市第一中学高三18班In my opinion, volunteer work is quite an important part o

28、f the modern society. The reasons are as follows.In the modern time, thanks to the development of economy and technology, material enjoyment 13 earned both in higher quality and larger quantity. At a price of this, individuals are taking the risk of losing their own values and even sparing no effort

29、 to make their failure even at the price of the interest of the society. So the volunteer work has been playing an important part as a spiritual comfort not only to the receivers but also to thevolunteers, promoting the well-being of the love-givers, making extra value for others and keeping a perfe

30、ct balance of the whole society.In families, volunteer work will help to emphasize the importance of morality, meet emotional needs and even become a vivid educational lesson. Parents, who are widely regarded as the first and most important teachers of their children, are teaching their children thr

31、ough the activities which must truly touch the deepest part of the young souls, instead of serious, traditional critical words. Also, during the process, in which every member shows us true love, other members are able to recognize him from a difference point of view. This kind of awareness is promi

32、sed to promote the communication of the family in the future. In the whole world, the volunteer work can be considered to be an appropriate part of the globalization, during which the中学生创新英语大赛写作范文及评分细那么吴昌荣四川省平昌中学WritingNowadays a lot of Chinese celebrate Western festivals. Some people are afraid tha

33、t this would lead to the loss of Chinese culture. What do you think? Write an essay of about 400 words.The Celebration of Western FestivalsNo one can have failed to notice the fact that Western festivals gain ever-increasing popularity in China. An increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebratin

34、g Western festivals today. On Valentines Day, many people, especially the young, give flowers or chocolate to the one they love; when Christmas approaches, nearly every store put on decorations like Santa Claus, snowflakes and even Christmas trees, not to mention the millions of people immersed in t

35、he thrilling atmosphere of festival on Christmas Eve; even such holidays as Halloween and the Easter Day are becoming known and celebrated by more and more Chinese. In comparison, such traditional Chinese festivals as the Spring Festival, the Festival of Lanterns and the Mid-Autumn Day seem to be lo

36、sing their attraction.In view of such a situation, many are worried that Chinese culture will be ignored or even ruined by the invasion of Western festivals. Personally, I believe that we neednt be over worried. Actually, the increasing popularity of some Western festivals in China is nothing accide

37、ntal, but some thing justifiable.First, it is a part of cultural globalization. With the development of communication science and technology and along with more and more nations opening up to the outside world, the world today has turned into a global village, with many national things becoming inte

38、rnational. China is no exception. While we are absorbing advanced science and technology from foreign countries, we are also taking in different cultures.Secondly, it is a sign of Chinas rejuvenating. As a nation boasting a civilization of 5,000 years, Chinese have been known for their spirit of acc

39、ommodation or open-mindedness. China used to be a melting pot of cultures as the U.S. is today. In the prosperous Tang dynasty, China was host to travelers and settlers from over the world. Actually, being accommodating is a sign of any thriving nation. Therefore, we should be pleased rather than up

40、set to see Chinese people embracing foreign festivals.It is true that some traditional Chinese festivals are losing their appeal to many people, but this does not necessarily the ruin of Chinese culture. Actually, a closer inspection reveals that most Chinese celebrate Western festivals merely out o

41、f the wish to seek novelty, to find a new way to entertain themselves or to express their identity in the face of the older generation. On the other hand, most Chinese have not ignored their native festivals. A convincing proof is that the Spring Festival still sees the largest flow of population in

42、 the world as most Chinese rush to their homes for family reunion.In a word, while we are giving priority to the preservation and development of traditional Chinese culture, we needt worry too much about the inflow of foreign culture.Some people claim that, in the age of television, reading books is

43、 not as important as it once was and that people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write an essay of about 400 words.Books Speak as Loud as TVThis is an era filled with various scientific achievements, and television

44、is one of the most flamboyant among them, influencing several generations1 behavior by molding them into the same mindset regardless of their race, gender, and background. Intoxicated by the superficial success of TV culture, some throw the irresponsible statement that reading is not as important as

45、 it once was, for people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books. This is far from the truth. Though television has become an integral part of our daily lives, the role that books play is still irreplaceable and merits further advocating.Admittedly, television gives us

46、an option to traditional education through reading and classroom teaching. Indeed the vivid images it produces succeed in the education of children, who are much more inclined to accept visual information than abstract letters or characters. Television also raises our consciousness by providing the

47、latest news and discoveries, extending our horizon by such documentary programs as National Geographicn and Discovery”, whose contents might otherwise be unapproachable in an entire lifetime.Despite all these advantages, the shortcomings of televisions are equally, if not more, apparent. Television

48、stations operate as profit enterprises. Consequently, television programs are profit-based, and their commercial orientation drives them to be entertaining more so than educational, for the latter are typically less profitable.Furthermore, watching television can neither provoke abstract thinking, w

49、hich is most crucial in advanced scientific research, nor can it teach effective management and adequate control of written language. Written language carries the utmost importance in inheritance and dissemination of knowledge. Books contain the collective human experience, knowledge and wisdom. Human talents of abstract thought, logical dialogue, philosophy and writing style can be acquired only through the reading, digesting, and rumination of nove