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1、审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。如果审审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。如果审不清主题，就有可能出现不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。的情况。在审清主题的基础上，还需注意要审清文体。在审清主题的基础上，还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准审题不准, , 丢要点丢要点, , 失分惨重失分惨重。例例1:1: A special gift Im looking forward to 强调这份强调这份“礼物礼物”是是“我所期待的我所期待的”，而非而非我已拥有的我已拥有的一份礼物。一份礼物。如果匆忙动笔就容易将文章写成如果匆忙动笔就容易将文章写成 “My favo

2、rite gift”. 例例2: I want to do something for my school I the first personperson want to the simple future tense TenseSomething one thing Key wordsFor my school purpose 例例3：学校的学校的 “English center” 是同学们练习英语的是同学们练习英语的场所。这里的场所。这里的 “teenager hotline” 每天都能收不到每天都能收不到不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿者，请不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿

3、者，请你根据当时的记录，首先描述两位同学遇到的问题，你根据当时的记录，首先描述两位同学遇到的问题，然后给一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因。然后给一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因。主要内容：问题、建议、原因主要内容：问题、建议、原因限制：描述两位同学的问题，给一位同学提建议限制：描述两位同学的问题，给一位同学提建议关键词：关键词：problem、suggestion、reason 1.1.定内容。定内容。2.2.定时态。定时态。记叙文、日记常用一般过去时；记叙文、日记常用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。计划等用一般将来时

4、。3.3.定人称。定人称。用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。4.4.定句型、定词语。定句型、定词语。应依据内容应依据内容, ,先定句型后定词语。先定句型后定词语。 写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序；列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不井然有序；列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细，可以根据题目要求，跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细，可以根据题目要求，考虑你的文章分几段，或者分几个层次，每段的大考虑你的文章分几段，或者分几个层次，每段的大意是什么意是什么, ,计划好文章的计划好文

5、章的整体结构整体结构。列提纲列提纲 Middle 正文正文Ending 结尾结尾concluding sentenceconcluding sentence 结论句结论句对全文的总结和概括。对全文的总结和概括。supporting sentencessupporting sentences支持句支持句用用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。讨论。topic sentence topic sentence 主题句主题句说出文中的要点、核心问题。说出文中的要点、核心问题。Beginning 开头开头英语记叙文的写作的方式例例1 1：利弊型作文利弊型作文Micr

6、oblogMicroblog的利与弊的利与弊Para1: Para1: （综述综述）with the development of internet more and with the development of internet more and more popularmore popularPara2: Para2: （利利）FirstFirst, convenient, anywhere, any time; , convenient, anywhere, any time; SecondSecond, , share with; share with; LastLast, expr

7、ess views free, money-free, express views free, money-freePara3: Para3: （弊弊）However, each coin has two sidesHowever, each coin has two sides. . On the one On the one handhand, a waste of time; , a waste of time; On the other handOn the other hand, not safebeing , not safebeing hackedhackedPara4: Par

8、a4: （总结总结）As a studentAs a student, make good use of it., make good use of it.例例2 2：计划安排型作文计划安排型作文谈假期安排谈假期安排Para1: Para1: （综述）（综述）holiday is coming, plan for this holidayholiday is coming, plan for this holidayPara2: Para2: （正文）（正文）FirstlyFirstly, study comes first. make , study comes first. make pr

9、eparations for the grade 9; preparations for the grade 9; SecondlySecondly, visit tourist , visit tourist attractions; attractions; Last but not the leastLast but not the least, do sports to build up , do sports to build up my body.my body.Para3: Para3: （总结）（总结）I am sure Ill have a meaningful holida

10、y. I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)enjoy my summer vocation.)写作时尽量做到一鼓作气，一气呵成。写作时尽量做到一鼓作气，一气呵成。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。书写时要多套用句

11、型，多用短句。书写时要多套用句型，多用短句。写全文写全文开头常用句型：开头常用句型：1) .plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health. As we al

12、l know, smoking is a bad habit.Many students say smoking is fun, but I dont think so. 1. smokingMany people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I dont think so. I will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life. 2. The Spring

13、 FestivalAs we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say its difficult to learn English.But I dont think so. 3. Learning English1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 甚至甚至_2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although,

14、 though,毕竟毕竟 _4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, 因此因此_5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, 不是，而是：不是，而是：_ on the one handon the other hand;连接词连接词evenafter alland thereforenot but7.表示解释表示解释: for example= _, such as, 那就是说那就是说_换句话说换句话说_8.表示顺序表示顺序: 开始开始:_, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, t

15、hen/and then, finally, in the end, at last;9.表示强调表示强调: also, 此外，而且此外，而且_, actually, in fact, 最为重要的是最为重要的是_10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, in short, generally speaking, in conclusion 最后但也同等重要的是最后但也同等重要的是: _for instancethat is to sayin other wordsto begin withbesides, whats moremost im

16、portantlylast but not the least Everyone needs to eat and live. Without food, people will die.So food saftety is much more important than anything else in peoples life. But what should we do to make sure what we eat is safe? As far as I am concerned, first of all, we are supposed to keep food safety

17、 in mind all the time and pay more attention to what we eat. We must refuse to eat unhealthy food, such as fast food, drinks and so on. Besides what we eat, we should also care about where we eat and how we eat. As students, we are supposed to eat mostly in the dinning hall instead of outisde. If po

18、ssible , we need to eat at home. The food at home or in the dining hall is much cleaner and fresher . Whats more , we should try our best to eat cooked food rather than raw food so that we can keep As time goes by, I often imagine what my life will be like in ten years. First of all, I will be a wri

19、ter. I will write many nice stories. Even my book will come out. And in my spare time, I will travel to some places. While I travel, I will enjoy some fascinating sights. Whats more, I will have a warm family. There will be three members, my husband, my son and me . Most importantly, We love each ot

20、her! What a wonderful life it will be! I will try my best to achieve it! As time goes by, I often imagine what my life will be like in ten years. First of all, I will be a writer. I will create many nice stories with beautiful words. Even my book will come out. And in my spare time, traveling to som

21、e nice places will help me relax. While traveling, I will not only enjoy some fascinating views, but also learn about some different customs and cultures. Whats more, I will have a warm family. There will be three members, my husband, my son and me included. Most importantly, We love each other! Wha

22、t a wonderful life it will be! I will try my best to achieve it!记叙记叙文常用的句子间连接词：文常用的句子间连接词：At first; at last; in the endthen/next/after thatwhen/while/as soon as/not until行文中连接是关键行文中连接是关键at the same time; at times; once in a while;so thatto ones surpriseluckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a

23、 word/in all 议论文常用连接词表示并列的：表示并列的：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的：表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats worse; 表示原因的：表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; 表示结果的：表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; 表示目的的：表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to;表示对比的：表示对比的：while; on one hand + on

24、the other hand; each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;表示转折的：表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as; like; 表示总结的：表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/muc

25、h influence on sb.; 表示喜爱的：表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; put ones heart into; 表达个人想法的：表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：其他： to be honest; to tell the truth; make up ones mind to do;1. 1. 与开头呼

26、应，再次重申自己的观点与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, , 注意避免注意避免重复句式。重复句式。2. 2. 结尾经典词组、句型：结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally . At last/ Finally . 最后最后 In a word, . In a word, . 总而言之总而言之 In short, . In short, . 简言之简言之 We hope thatWe hope that 我们希望我们希望 Lets try our best to .Lets try our best to . I believe if we can., . will be . I b

27、elieve if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.! What a .! / How.!Lets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.Keeping healthyHelping othersLets try our best to be an environ

28、ment protector. In one word, its necessary for us to protect the environment.How beautiful Beijing is!Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?BeijingTo be an environment protector常见的作文类型模板：1 1 书信书信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter -Best wishes! Yours, Lucy 书信开头常用语书信开头常用语 I am very glad to re

29、ceive your letter (hear from you). Hello, Jane! How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . 书信结尾常用语书信结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good l

30、uck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.2 2 图表、数字比例型图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点表达出不同看法或观点）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法表达个人看法

31、） As a student, I agree to Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点优点1 Besides, 优优点点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点缺点2In my opinion,个人观点个人观点 3 3 说明利弊型说明利弊型4 4 不同观点型不同观点型We made a

32、 survey about whether we should 提出矛提出矛盾问题盾问题. Different people hold different ideas.Some believe 正方观点正方观点. . First, 原因原因1 Besides, 原原因因2While others dont agree. They think反方观点反方观点. On one hand, 原因原因1 On the other hand, 原因原因2As for me,个人观点个人观点 5 5 解决问题型解决问题型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法方法1 Secondly, 方法方法2 2 Finally, 方法方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.