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1、-四级作文和六级翻译-第 8 页第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长微博干涉孩子过多。第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。第三段：采取措施解决此现象。How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Lets take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was a

2、ccepted by the university of her mothers choice with pride. The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture。What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, Ill venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy

3、 in China has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. In addition, parents dont believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. There are some suggesti

4、ons given to our parents。For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I contend

5、 that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents role in their childrens growth.

6、You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words。提示：这篇文章的主题可以写成“技术是否能代替学校”。 思路：第一段描图；第二段正反议论型(现象解释型)；第三段个人观点。Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cellphone in his hand is asking his

7、mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school?Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the pub

8、lic wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our development. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when children have questions, “baidu” instead of “teacher” will be t

9、he first to come to their minds。To my knowledge, school learning should go hand in hand with technology. While cellphones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”， “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personali

10、ty and allow us to adapt to the real world。As is vividly depicted in the picture, there is a boy playing a phone happily at home, not wanting to go to school, with his father begging him to give up playing games and go to school worriedly. Furthermore, there is a caption under the picture, which rea

11、ds “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?” The drawers intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking。 Admittedly, phone plays an essential part in this information era. We should not, however, neglect the significance of learning

12、 independently. To begin with, learning independently is the tradition of our culture. Not only should we inherit from our ancestors, but also we should hand down to our descendants. It is the spirit of learning independently that makes us better and stronger. What is more, learning independently, o

13、ne of the greatest fashionable themes of our era throughout the history of mankind all around the world that I have ever known in my whole life, which is the greatest that there ever was and the greatest that there ever will be, is momentous and fundamental to people what the soul is vital and signi

14、ficant to us. If it had not been for learning independently, we could not have been success。Judging from the reams of evidence, it is safe for us to conclude that learning independently is a critical quality for success. Only if we acquire this quality and work hard toward our goals, can we achieve

15、success。破题思路：第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。第二段：分析该现象的原因。第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night. What the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people. New products are being invented eve

16、ry minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over people in some respects。However, in all these technologies and products, computers have exerted the most important influence on people. Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that

17、 computers have made life easier and more convenient. Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble studying， I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. Howev

18、er, Internet can make some problems at the same time。In a word, in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful, I feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part of everyday life。新东方：This modern lifeAs is shown in the above pictur

19、e, people sit in front of the computer all day and night, even in their dreams theyre still playing computer games. Such thought-provoking phenomenon is, especially among young people, prevail in our modern life。Its true that the computer has brought great convenience to our modern life. However, as

20、 is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. To begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation emitted from computers may cause many health problems, like insomnia, headaches, and even cancer. In addition, when people imm

21、erse himself in the world of computer, they tend to pay less attention to the surroundings, and excessive use of the computer means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with people who populate their real lives。In conclusion, while computers have contribute a lot to making our life more con

22、venient, we should use them appropriately。命题思路：2015年6月的大学英语四级考试刚刚落下帷幕，作为打头阵而出现的作文题目一直是令广大考生备受瞩目且头疼不已的专项。此次考试还是沿续之前的出题风格，以图画的形式来考查，要求考生写一篇不少于180个单词的议论文。由于是花卷形式出现，所以涉及到多个题目。本次四级考试已知的三道作文题目是：1. 人与电脑(电脑对人所产生的影响)2. 人与手机 (人对手机的过分依赖性)3. 父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用从作文题目来看，在话题的难度上并不是很大。这里，文都英语老师主要从以下三方面对今年的四级作文真题给以解读。一

23、、命题形式与考研接轨。熟悉考研的同学会发现，考研英语一的大作文主要考查图画作文，英语二主要考查图表作文，而近两年，至从四六级大纲革以后，四级的作文更改了考查形式由原来的话题作文，书信作文变为图画作文，由原来的至少完成120个单词，现在变成了不能超过180个单词，足见在难度上加大。二、内容紧紧围绕社会热点话题。现在最为热门的话题就是科技给人们生活带来的便利及影响，其中科技就涉及到手机，电脑，网络。此类话题通常会有正反两面性。便利需要侧重好的方面进行描述，而影响则需侧重不好的有害的方面展开。如果图画的倾向性不明显的话，可以采用正反对比的形式。而这次四级考试有两个题目一个是人与手机，另一个是人与电脑

24、，从图画的侧重点来看，都是负面性的。此类话题，对于广大考生来讲，比较容易驾驭。因为不会涉及到太难的生词。三、考查重点是语言用词。英语作文一贯的考查目标是是否能够用正确丰富的语言来表达思想。各位考生需要注意的是，在写句子时，首先得保证句子是对的，其次再考虑用不同的字眼表达同一概念，也就是同意替换的能力。因此建议各位考生朋友以后在备考英语时，要有意识地培养用英文表达的相关能六级翻译：汉朝是中国历史上最重要的朝代之一。汉朝统治期间有很多显著的成就。它最先向其他文化敞开大门，对外贸易兴旺。汉朝开拓的丝绸之路通向了中西亚乃至罗马，各类艺术一派繁荣，涌现了很多文学历史哲学巨著。公元100年中国第一部字典编

25、撰完成，收入9000个字，提供释义并列举不同的写法。期间科技方面也取得很大进步，发明纸张水中日晷sundials，以及测量地震的仪器。汉朝经历了四百年，但统治者的腐败导致了它的灭亡。 解析：中国古代文化是六级考试的热点话题。之前也考过关于清朝与明朝的话题，因此同学们见到这样的话题会比较熟悉。 第一句话：“汉朝是中国历史上最重要的朝代之一。”看到谓语动词“是”字就可以确定这句话是主系表结构，“.的之一”应该表达为“one of +名词复数”，这一点在今年的四级考试中也出现了。汉朝我们可以效仿明朝“Ming Dynasty ”写成“Han Dynasty”,注意字母大写：The Han dynas

26、ty is one of the most important dynasties in Chinese history. 第二句话“汉朝统治期间有很多显著的成就。”这句话我们可以用“there be”结构来表达“有”；显著的可以用“remarkable”、“prominent”来表达；在汉朝统治期间可以写成“during the reign of this dynasty”，因此这句话可以写成：“There are a lot of remarkable achievements during the reign of this dynasty.” 第三句话“它最先向其他文化敞开大门，对外贸

27、易兴旺。”这句话我们可以理解为“他是最先向其他文化敞开大门的国家，并且对外贸易兴旺。”因此就改成了一个并列句：It was the first dynasty to open the door to other cultures, and its foreign trade was also thriving. 第四句话“汉朝开拓的丝绸之路通向了中西亚乃至罗马，各类艺术一派繁荣，涌现了很多文学历史哲学巨著。”这句话的主句部分是“丝绸之路通向了中西亚乃至罗马”，“汉朝拓展的”是丝绸之路的定语部分，因为在定语部分出现了“拓展”这个动词，所以定语部分可以用定语从句来表达:The Silk Road

28、which was explored in Han dynasty reached the West Asia and Rome.后半句我们可以处理成并列句，用and来连接。各类艺术可以表达为“all kinds of arts”,繁荣可以表达为“thrive”, “涌现”就可以理解为“出现”-emerge 的意思。但是这个句子中已经出现过谓语动词了，所以emerge 需要用非谓语的结构来表达：and all kinds of art thrived during the Han Dynasty, many great works on literature, history and phil

29、osophy emerging in that period. 第五句话“公元100年中国第一部字典编撰完成，收入9000个字，提供释义并列举不同的写法。”主句部分为“公元100年中国第一部字典编撰完成”，可以译成“The first dictionary in China was compiled in 100 BC”，“，收入9000个字，提供释义并列举不同的写法。”是对字典的进一步解释，可以用非限定从，也可以用现在分词做后置定语: “embodying 9000 words, providing meanings and displaying different ways of char

30、acters.” 第六句话“期间科技方面也取得很大进步，发明纸张水中日晷sundials，以及测量地震的仪器。”这句话的主干部分为“有很大进步。”没有主语，因此我们可以将技术补充上来当我们句子的主语部分；发明纸张水中日晷以及测量地震的仪器可以另起一句来翻译，注意句子里的被动态以及“的”字结构用分词表达的方式：At the same time, technology made great progress. Paper, sundials in water and instruments used to detect earthquake were invented. 第七句：汉朝经历了四百年，

31、但统治者的腐败导致了它的灭亡。 汉朝经历了四百多年，就是汉朝持续了400年；导致我们可以选用“result in” “lead to” “attribute to”等等：The Han Dynasty lasted 400 years. Unfortunately, rulers corruption resulted in its dying out. 译文：The Han dynasty is one of the most important dynasties in Chinese history. There are a lot of remarkable achievements

32、during the reign of this dynasty. It was the first dynasty to open the door to other cultures, and its foreign trade was also thriving. The Silk Road which was explored in Han dynasty reached the West Asia and Rome and all kinds of art thrived during the Han Dynasty, many great works on literature,

33、history and philosophy emerging in that period. The first dictionary in China was compiled in 100 BC, embodying 9000 words, providing meanings and displaying different ways of characters. At the same time, technology made great progress. Paper, sundials in water and instruments used to detect earthq

34、uake were invented. The Han Dynasty lasted 400 years. Unfortunately, rulers corruption resulted in its dying out. 中国传统的待客之道要求饭菜丰富多样，让客人吃不完。中国宴席上典型的菜单包括开席的一套凉菜及其后的热菜，例如肉类、鸡鸭、蔬菜等。大多数宴席上，全鱼被认为是必不可少的，除非已经上过各式海鲜。如今，中国人喜欢把西方特色菜与传统中式菜肴融于一席，因此牛排上桌也不少见。沙拉也已经流行起来，尽管传统上中国人一般不吃任何未经烹饪的菜肴。宴席通常至少有一道汤，也可最先或最后上桌。甜点和

35、水果通常标志宴席的结束。 The Chinese traditional custom of treating guests requires the dishes to be plentiful, which are not possible to be finished by the guests. The typical menu of Chinese dinner includes a set of cold dishes as the starter and the following hot dishes, such as meat, chicken and duck, veget

36、ables, etc. In most cases, the whole fish dish is considered to be a necessity except that seafood has been served. Nowadays, the combination of western food and Chinese traditional food is very popular among Chinese people, therefore it is not rare that stake is served at the dinner and salad is al

37、so becoming more and more popular in spite of the fact that uncooked food is not preferred in China traditionally. A soup, which can be served at the beginning or the end of the dinner, at least is needed. Normally the serving of dessert and fruits marks the end of the entire dinner. 综上，通过本次六级考试，可以发现，考生们需要大量掌握文化、社会、历史、经济等四个话题的专业词汇，打牢词汇基本功之后，需要把握翻译的基本要领，即找准句子的结构，精做真题，找出翻译中存在的问题，对症下药，从而提升自己的六级成绩。