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1、一、四、六级作文高分要领（评卷标准、样卷分析、最新动态）评分原则1 CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四、六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2 CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法，阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward scores), 而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，
2、包括满分：该给低分给低分，包括零分，一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。评分标准：本题满分为15分1、阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。2、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为及某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。不得加或减半分。3、评分标准2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一
3、些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文及题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。14 points 漂漂亮亮型 11 points 清清楚楚型8 points 马马虎虎型5 points 稀里糊涂型2 points 一塌糊涂型作文的Range finder 窗体顶端 Teachers Day 14 points 漂漂亮亮型Teaching is the most glorious and respectable career. On Teachers D
4、ay, Id like to express my innermost appreciation and gratefulness to all the teachers in the world!Teachers are the elevators of human souls. I still remember how my teachers pulled me through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first preparation test for the college entrance examination and I
5、 was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue! Patiently, my English teacher analysed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on. My Chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learni
6、ng. Their help enabled me to survive the competition and will surely benefit me in the future.Perhaps Ill never have a chance to repay all that I have received from my teachers. But Ill try to be a useful person and become their pride.窗体底端窗体顶端11 points 清清楚楚型Teachers Day is coming. On this occasion,
7、I want to deliver my genuine gratitude to all the teachers.I will never forget my class teachers devotion and care to me. Before National Entrance Examinations, I was so nervous that I couldnt focus on the books. I wasnt confident about my ability. The idea of giving up even occurred to me. My teach
8、er noticed my anxiety. Then she encouraged me and advised me a lot. She told me how she overcame the obstacles of life when she was faced up with important affairs. Her words touched me a lot. And I began to face the exam with full courage and confidence. Luckily I achieved my exams successfully. I
9、know its the result of my teachers love and care.I will cherish the words of her through my life. I will try to face the difficulties in my life without hesitation. Thats the best way to return her love. 窗体底端窗体顶端8 points 马马虎虎型Today is teachers day. I want to give best wishes to my teachers, who assi
10、st me to learn and who shape the world to me.I remember it was in 2001, I would have the chemistry olimpic competition for high school students. As the only one girl in my class, I didnt have confidence to compete with my boy classmates. Mr. Wang who was my classmaster always encouraged me: “remembe
11、r girls can do all things what boys can do.” Besides, he helped me with my studies. Even during the winter vacation we could do some interesting small experiments at Mr. Wangs home. What he made us known are not only some difficult questions but also the core for science, the love for science and th
12、e courage to think and to ask questions. In berief, Mr. Wang made us enjoy scince rather than work just to win the game.Today I am studying in university. Ill always remember what Mr. Wang taughter us, I will work hard on my studies and remind myself to work for the benefit of humans.窗体底端窗体顶端5 point
13、s 稀里糊涂型 Today is Teachers Day. Happy Teachers Day, my teachers.In the evening, all of my classmates and I make a party for our teachers. In the party, each of us give prerents to teachers and hope them feeling happy and heathy. Then, teachers and us play together. All of us feel very happy.I also re
14、member when I was in my midschool, my English teacher help me to study English. At that time, my English is very very poor. Although I studied it day and night, it seemed worthier and worthier. Then my English teacher told me that the way I studying is worry. He told me the right way and help me fri
15、endly everyday. With his help, my English became better and better. Teachers are also friends for us. I think I must study hard to repay my teacher.窗体底端窗体顶端2 points 一塌糊涂型Teachers Day. Happy Day. I hope teachers feel luck. I believe it is time we elevated the teache to the space where it belongs, the
16、reby setting an example to the people to the teachers attitude. Remember, when I was a young boy, I am a outrageous boy, In the classroom, I have been observed to throw something across the court without conside such a move might have angry someone in their seat. Therefor, my teacher Mr. Li always s
17、mailed to me. She offen talk to me. You like athletic,like jodan. I feel happy. She tall me when class is over, dont do it in class. We can play together when our class is over. Not so just, I sometimes throw something at someone, yet. But, I can remmber my theachers words. Dont do it!Is there enoug
18、h helps to help secure me futute? I certainly thisnk so. Thanks, Teacher.Theacher, you may soon see and possibly feel difference in your reaction I am going to a teache to help some students like me. Actually, I will become students good freinds. 窗体底端窗体顶端2、考生在写作中常见困境及应对策略一、滔滔不绝“意识流” 二，无话可说真难受三，真情流露没
19、必要四，英语表达憋得慌五、处于被动要包装六，字数不够时间紧窗体底端窗体顶端3、四、六考试考场作文典型错误剖析纵观近年来的阅卷情况，学生的作文主要有以下几个方面的问题：第一、英语语法结构知识欠缺，语句问题严重。第二、积极词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清，用词贫乏。第三、表达思想不清楚，汉化现象严重。窗体底端窗体顶端案例1：（中文直接汉化，影响意思的表达）1. Teachers Day Happy! 2. Thats in junior, My first love had been false. （用词不当）It made （用词贫乏） me a low emotion so that my s
20、tudy bring down （汉化）quickly. Until that day, my headmaster talked with me many many things. （汉化）She told me: The false is the mother of success. What can I do for the society in the future and how to meet the love and so forth. （汉化导致意思表达混乱）窗体底端窗体顶端案例2 （常见的连续汉化问题，逗号一路贯穿）3. Last month, I was ill, had
21、to live I hospital, my mother worried my class was delaied, because there was an exam in resently. 4. Now I had grown up, a senior student, after 3 years I will leave university for communication and society, I hope I will become a teacher like my teacher, take my love to every student, live on thei
22、r spirit.窗体底端窗体顶端案例 3（汉化中式谚语或名言，令人啼笑皆非）5. “one day as teacher, my parents all life.” 6. candles are burnt out while your tears are dried.7. The teacher likes the cow, eat grass, squeeze the milk.8. Teachers like the people who watered the flowers in the park. They teach us, need no back.窗体底端窗体顶端案例 4
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