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1、-An Unforgettable Lesson 范文-第 11 页An Unforgettable Lesson The story happened when I was quite young. One day after school on the way home I saw a few yards away a young man talking to an elderly lady very loudly and kind of rudely. As I approached them I found out that the young man is asking how he

2、 could go to a local store. The lady was offended and told him just the opposite direction with reluctance and contempt. I thought I would have told the man again the right direction hut I didnt for I was angered by his poor manners too. This example has unmistakably indicated how important it is fo

3、r one to be polite and respectful for both himself and others. Good manners are an essential quality one must have in order to be successful in not merely such a small thing as asking for directions but also promoting his career. Being respectful and well-mannered you can be popular with people arou

4、nd and easily win their support and favor. And in this case you can improve your chance of success and your good fortune. The lesson taught by the young mans case is typically suggestive and impressive. Admittedly I cannot ensure that I can stay polite and respectful to anyone at any place at any ti

5、me. I will try my best to treat people with respect and thoughtfulness for only this can make me feel good and happy.记叙文写作一、 题型分析叙议结合型作文是兼有记叙文和议论文的特点，通常要求考生对某一时间的发生过程进行描述，最后针对该事件谈谈自己的感受或看法并进行相应的评沦。近十四年四六级考试中，此类作文只出现在四级作文中共1次，分别为2003年6月、2003年9月和2005年6月。二、写作思路 段落一 描述背景段 1.概述事件的背景及重要意义；2.说明应对该事件的方式； 3.

6、表明我的态度。 段落二 说明过程段1 承上启下,引出对事件的具体描述；2事件的进展一;3事件的进展二;4事件突出表现段落三 总结观点段 承接上文，引出我的感受启示；我的感受我的行动一;我的感受我的行动二;总结全文，呼应主题。 四级考试中的记叙文一般要求考生叙述一个事件发生的经过，如车祸、同学生病或一次难忘的经历等。 其基本结构是：首先交代事件发生的背景；然后具体描述事件的经过；最后谈谈自己的感受或得到的启示。同是现象解释型，题目中给出的作文提纲不同，其具体行文思路与写作模式也会不同。写作模板模板一：教师节，某人生日等场合 描述背景段： 背景事件will come soon, which事件的重

7、要性或意义There is no more appropriate time than this for相关人员to采取的态度或行动So on this special occasion taking this good chance，I 表明“我”的愿望或打算叙述经过段： Now I will remember clearly主题事件It Was happened事件开始时间，when当时的情形事件的发展一事件的发展二As a result/HoweverSurprisinglyIndeed,事件的突出表现或结果，which left me a deep impression/which g

8、ave me significant lesson in my lifewhich made me feel deep love/great concern或其他感受(from事件主要人物) 阐述观点段： Every time I remind this and其他相关事物，我的感受或得到的启示Above all，感受一 / 行动一11)Besides，Furthermore，感受二/行动二12)I believe提出期望，总结全文 To writ a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teachers DayOutline

9、s: 1)向老师致以节日祝贺 2)从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献 3)我如何报答老师的关爱 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第l点要求引出某一背景，提纲第2点要求由此背景引出一件难忘的事情，提纲第3点要求谈谈自己的感受，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述事件背景：教师节即将来临，向老师致以节日祝贺；叙述一件难忘的事说明老师对“我”的关爱；谈谈“我的感受，说明“我”要如何回报老师。1)The once per years Teachers Day will come soon，which is a quite important day and deserv

10、es attention from the whole society. 2) There is no more appropriate time than this for us students to express our special recognition and respect to all our teachers. 3) So on this special occasion, I want to show my esteem and thanks to my dearest teacher, Mr. Wang, for all the work he has done fo

11、r me. (描述背景段) 4)Now I still remember clearly the lesson on cheating he gave me. 5)It happened at the end of one term, when we were having an exam. 6)I was copying answers from one of my classmates. 7)Just at the moment, Mr. Wang came in and found my cheating behavior. 8)As a result, he didnt critici

12、ze me but talked about the importance of honesty and told me that dishonest behavior is very harmful even if it was not in an exam, which gave me a significant lesson in my life. (叙述经过段) 9) Every time I remind this and what he has done for me, I feel that I should return his great love with my achie

13、vements. 10) Above all, I will study harder to become a real talent. 11) Furthermore, I will, as he does, devote myself to the development of our country. 12） I believe that is what he expects me most. (阐述观点段)模板二：对一次突发事件的见证描述背景段 简要介绍“我”的情况（可有可无）.事件发生的时间，I witnessed 总述目击事件./ I (and相关人物) 总述所经历的事件. 事件给

14、人印象深刻之处，which is still vivid inmymind. 该事件 was so 事件的突出特点 that I was left a deep impression.叙述经过段 It was/happened 事件开始时间，when 当时的情形. Suddenly, 事件的发展一. 事件的发展二. 事件的发展三. As a result, 事件的最终结果/影响。 阐述观点段 第一种:Many factors/reasons contributedto该事件. 事件的表面原因. But inmyopinion, (it was more because) 深层次原因一. 11)

15、 Besides/In addition, 深层次原因二/进一步说明深层次原因一. 12) Therefore, 提出期望/建议. 第二种： 该类事件 brings/ bring great influence/effects on 影响的对象. For one thing, 影响一. 进一步 说明影响一. 11) For another, 影响二. 12)Therefore, 提出期望/建议。 第三种： 该事件 brings/bring great influence/effects on 影响的对象. Therefore, it is high time/quite urgenttotak

16、e effective measuresto解决该类事件带来的问题. On the one hand, 措施一. On the other hand, 措施二. Only in this way/through these measures 问题才能解决(倒装句). 模板三： 叙述过去某段经历 描述背景段： 背景时间， 背景事件. 进一步描述背景事件. It/The news 事件带来的影响/受关注的程度/重要性。 叙述经过段： At first, 开始时的情况. Then/However, 接下来的情况. 事件的进展.Andit impressed me most 事件的突出表现. As a

17、 result/Thanksto., 事件的结果. 总结观点段：Such an incident teaches us an important moral, that is, “我”的感受/得到的启示. 感受一/行动一. Furthermore, 感受二/行动二. In conclusion, I do believe that 总结全文.Writing Task TwoMothers Day1. 母亲节受到全世界的关注；2. 母亲节之际，列举能为母亲所做的事：3. 总结全文。Writing Task 3Directions: For this part, you are allowed 3

18、0 minutes to write a composition on the topic Thanks and Congratulations to My Friend. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)朋友生日即将来临，祝他或她生日快乐 2)从一件难忘的事回忆朋友对你的关爱 3)友谊的重要性Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

19、a composition to express your feelings after seeing a disabled young girl overcome all the difficulties to practise swimming. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)简单介绍一下你在游泳馆见到的情形2）具体描述一下事件的经过3）谈谈你的感受A Disabled Young Girl with Strong Will