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1、-英语写作-对比比较-第 5 页Writing A Comparison / Contrast ParagraphAIMS:ordering material using the point-by-point method or the block methodimproving coherence by using transitional phrases common to comparison/contrast writingtaking a step-by-step approach to create comparison/ contrast paragraphsstudying m

2、odel paragraphs to create comparison/ contrast paragraphsComparison shows similarities between persons, places, things, ideas, or situations.Contrast points out the differences between persons, places, things, ideas, or situations.Two Basic Methods for Organizing Comparison / Contrast Paragraphs1. I

3、f you let A and B stand for the two things (subjects) being compared, then you can use the block method in which you tell all about A, then tell all about B. Thus you discuss A in a block and B in a block.2. If you let A and B stand for the two things (subjects) being compared, then you compare them

4、 point by point. Every time you say something about A, you also say something about B right in the same sentence or in the sentence immediately following.The Topic SentenceYour topic sentence should identify both items (subjects) to be compared or contrasted and tell the reader exactly what you are

5、going to say about these items (attitude).e.g., (poor) Our pup, Tuffy is different from our cat, Hector.(good) The difference in temperament between our pup, Tuffy, and our cat, Hector, is a constant source of amusement.The BodyOnce you have decided on a good topic sentence, list all the points of c

6、omparison/ contrast that you can think of. Next, review the list and eliminate any points, which are irrelevant or unimportant. Now, organize your details in a logical sequence, and begin your rough draft.The ConclusionThe most effective conclusion for a comparison/contrast paragraph is usually a fi

7、nal sentence, which reinforces the controlling idea.e.g., If you could see Tuffy and Hector together, you could scarcely help laughing at the contrast between these two household playmates.A Good Example of the Block Method:Students who have Mr. Jones and Mr. Smith are immediately aware of the diffe

8、rence in the lecturing manner of each teacher. Mr. Jones has a pleasant voice, which helps hold the interest of the students. He pronounces clearly in a rhythmic pattern emphasizing key words. His moderate tone and inflected words make his lectures interesting. Mr. Jones also adds humour to his subj

9、ect, and hewel comes questions from students who dont understand the material. He takes his time and explains slowly. He tries to make sure that his students understand a concept before he moves on to something new, and he is very enthusiastic about his subject. Mr. Smith, on the other hand, has a d

10、ifferent tone, pronunciation, expression and attitude from Mr. Jones. He has a booming voice, which commands rather than teaches, and sometimes it is hard to understandbecause he runs his words together. His lectures are not as interesting as those of Mr. Jones, either, because Mr. Smith speaks in a

11、 boring monotone. He also hates to be interrupted; feeling that he must cover everything. Mr. Smith teaches every class in a serious, determined mood. Thus, as the above points illustrate, the lectures of Mr. Jones and Mr. Smith are quite different.A Good Example of the Point-by-Point Method:Student

12、s who have Mr. Smith and Mr. Jones are immediately aware of the difference in the lecturing manner of each teacher. Mr. Jones has a pleasant voice, which helps hold the interest of the students. Mr. Smith, however, has a booming voice, which commands rather than teaches. Mr. Jones pronounces clearly

13、 in a rhythmic pattern emphasizing key words. On the other hand, Mr. Smith mumbles, running his words together. The moderate tone and inflected words of Mr. Jones make his lectures more interesting than those of Mr. Smith, who speaks in a boring monotone. Mr. Jones also adds humour to the subject, w

14、hereas Mr. Smith is always serious about each lesson. Mr. Jones welcomes questions from students who dont understand the material, as compared to Mr. Smith who hates to be interrupted. Mr. Jones takes his time and explains slowly, whereas Mr. Smith rushes through each lesson. Mr. Jones is very enthu

15、siastic about his subject: he tries to make sure everyone understands a concept before he moves on to something new. Mr. Smith, however, is always in a determined mood; he feels that he must cover everything. Each teacher has a different voice, tone, pronunciation, expression, and attitude: and as a

16、 result, their lectures are quite different.COMPARE AND CONTRAST Key Wordscomparison:like similar as same in the same way too both most important have in common the same as similarly as well ascontrast:although yet whereas however but while differ instead unlessunlike on the contrary contrary to eve

17、n though on the other hand the reverseWhen you compare one subject to another, you show how the two are alike, or similar.Example: The dog, like the cat, is a household pet.When you contrast two subjects, you show how they are different.Example: The dog, unlike the cat, is dependent on its master.So

18、metimes, both comparison and contrast are used in the same sentence.Example: Both the dog and the cat make good household pets, but adog requires more attention than a cat.ExerciseRead the paragraphs and answer the questions below. Thousands of years ago the Native people of North America had to bui

19、ld houses that fit their life. One kind of house was a tipi. The Plains people lived in tipis. Tipis were easy to put up and take down. In fact, it only took about half an hour to set them up. This was perfect for the Plains people who spent their time hunting and following herds of animals.The Inui

20、t, who lived in the cold Arctic region, spent part of the year living in igloos. Igloos were temporary homes like tipis. However, they were built for the cold winter months, whereas a tipi could be used year round. Both tipis and igloos had one main room that the family lived in and were usually mad

21、e for a single family. Tipis and igloos were made of very different materials. Igloos were made from blocks of snow stacked on top of each other, while tipis were made from buffalo hide, tree bark, or grass. The shape of tipis and igloos was also different. Tipis were cone-shaped, using three or fou

22、r poles for support. In contrast, igloos were dome-shaped.1. Is this paragraph comparing and contrasting two things?Yes No2. If no, how do you know it is not a compare and contrast paragraph?3. If yes, what two things are being compared?4. Circle the key words in the paragraph that show that the aut

23、hor was comparing and contrasting information. In-class exercise: Using Comparison/Contrast To get some practice using comparison/contrast as a rhetorical technique, prepare to write a comparison/contrast paragraph(s) based on one of the following topics (or come up with one you like better): High s

24、chool and College Raising a pet and raising a child Two career choices or majors youre contemplating Two colleges youve considered attending Two jobs youve had Two books youve read, or two movies youve seen Two close friends Two teachersOnce you decide on your subject, follow the three steps below t

25、o help you practice using this technique.STEP 1: Establish categories to focus your analysis.For example, if youre comparing colleges, your categories might be curriculum, price, location, and social life.Brainstorm and then decide upon several appropriate categories for your topic which will focus

26、how you look at each subject. List them below:STEP 2: Brainstorm raw material by applying these categories to questions about your subject.Based on the categories you arrived at above, ask what is similar and what is different about the two subjects. Write down everything you can think ofyou can rea

27、rrange it later.Comparisons (similarities) between_ and_.1.2.3.4.5.Contrasts (differences) between _ and_.1.2.3.4.5.Step 3: Assemble your analysis.Now examine the points you made and compile your raw material into paragraphs by using one or both of the methods described in Chapter Six (pp. 339-341).

28、 Write a topic sentence to focus your comparison/contrast; it should state your subjects and the assertion you want to make about them as a result of your analysis. After you write your topic sentence, write the paragraph(s) below. Attach extra paper if you run out of room. If you think it will help you get a clearer idea how to assemble your work,