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1、精品_精品资料_一、教学对象高三短文改错专项复习课教学设计可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_泰宁一中高三 6班同学.二、教材内容分析短文改错是全国高考卷的写作部分第一节试题.此题型是将错误置于100 字左右的篇章中,考查考生在短文所供应的语境情形下辨析并订正错误的才能.本节课主要以2022年至 2022 年全国高考及部分省份高考真题为课堂使用材料,采纳分解,归类等方式进行材料的利用.并且结合泰宁县的旅行特色进行信息挖掘和资源整合,以求到达学问与情感的结合.三、教学目标本堂课作为高三总复习阶段的专项复习课,旨在通过一系列任务的设计和完成来帮忙同学：（ 1）明白短文改错题型的特点和要

2、求,提高“词法、句法和语篇规律”才能.（ 2）熟识解题思路,深化的懂得和内化课堂所学学问.3发挥团队协作和学习的精神,共同完成各项课堂活动任务.四、教学过程Step I: Preparations(I) T plays a“ Name Guessing” game with the students, aiming to clear the obstacle between T and Ss. 意图说明 老师通过嬉戏,与同学熟识,为增强明白和互动性做一个铺垫.(II) Rules for Group Work1. The whole class will be divided into 5 g

3、roups.2. Many tasks need to be performed by groups.3. Each of you is supposed to participate.4. For each task, if you answer the questions or complete the task, you will win points for your group.5. The group which wins the most points will get prizes.Group1G2G3G4G5ParticipationTotalIn all the activ

4、ities, group competition is employed to arouse Sst. interest to take parStep II: Leading-inTshowsa pictureaboutthegame“Findingdifferences ” toleadinthetopic“Proofreading ”. 意图说明 老师通过 “找茬”嬉戏引出这节课的主要内容-“短文改错”,引导同学进行该题型的特点分析.Finding differences in the following two paragraphs.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_Mo

5、m has a full time job, so she has to do most of the housework. She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We got up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping . When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.Mom has a full time

6、job, but she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother.Both Dad and I planned to do something on Mothers Day. Weget up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went shopping . When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in his hand.T asks Ss to point out the correct usag

7、es in the paragraph:1. Housework;2. Both and ;3. got up;4. went shopping;5. his hand.Step III. Introduction of Proofreading第四部分 写作第一节短文改错 10 分下面短文中有 10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处 .请在有错误的的方增加、 删除或修改某个单词.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并下面加上该加的词.删除：把余外的词用斜线划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.留意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均 仅限一词.2. 只答应修改 10 处,多者从第 11

8、 处起不计分近三年高考短文改错考点分布表可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_Rules for proofreading:考查点形容词动词及非谓语主谓可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_试卷冠词名词代词介词连词或副词时态动词一样可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_2022 年全国卷1111131102022 年全国卷1130013102022 年全国卷1112113002022 年全国卷1122102102022 年全国卷1104121002022 年全国卷1112202011. 转变形式以8:1:1“实词”居多2. 添删以“虚词”居多3.多“改正”少“添删

9、”4. 改后要保持原意不变Skills for proofreading:Step 1. Skimming通读全文 , 把握大意 , 确定时态 Step 2. Scanning可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_1逐句研读,细查语法;2由动词入手,留意句型和搭配.3由易到难 , 各个击破 ;Step 3. Checking复核答案,标准答题.留意“三不改 ”：A 、 标点 ;B、纲外词汉字注释词C、词序Step IV: Observing rules for proofreading and making summaries.T takes NOUNS for example to

10、 show how to do group work for observing rules and making summaries.1. As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxialandformin China, Golden Lake of Tainingattracts many visitors every year.2. As I told you last time, I made threefriend here.3. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.4. Your knowled

11、ges of Greece can help the whole class.5. The popularity made for thegrow in the porcelain industry. My summary1单复数的使用依据句意、主谓一样、限定词2可数、不行数 3词性正确使用1When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for goodcup with handles to suitBritish habits.From the time I was about four until I was about

12、six, I destroyed each of my toy.(2) My parents are glad every time I make progresses.(3) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Group work:Ss are dividedinto 6 groups and willbe handed out differenttasks before class. They are supposed to finish task one and have a discussion in cl

13、ass to find the rules for each part, then make a summary.Teacher s example:1. As one of the top seven most beautiful Danxia landform in China, Golden Lake of Taining attracts many visitors every year.2. As I told you last time, I made three friend here.3. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.4. Y

14、our knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.5. The popularity made for the grow in the porcelain industry. My summary:These mistakes are the ones about NOUNS 名词 . In my opinion, the rules are about:1单复数的使用依据句意、主谓一样、限定词2可数、不行数 3词性正确可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_使用 . Consolidation:(1) When tea got pop

15、ular in Britain, there was a crying need for goodcup with handlesto suit British habits.From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of mytoy.(2) My parents are glad every time I make progresses.(3) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Challenge yourselve

16、s.Task oneYou are supposedto finishthe followingexercise andhave a discussionwithyour group members. Thenmake a summary about the rulesfor this part.Verbs:1. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.2. If you are me, would you talk to them about the problem.3.

17、My dream school look like a big garden.4. We must found ways to protect our environment.5. Traditionally, Tea in China drunk from cups without handles. Consolidation:1. Today, I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm go off.2. I was only four when my grandmother passes away.3. T

18、he early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.4. The CD was so popular that it was sold very well. Non-infinitive:1. It s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.2. Locat

19、ing in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, which is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.3. It s difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s out.4. We ve been spending a lot of time sing in Karoake bars.5. Have tea in the late afternoon provid

20、es a bridge between lunch and dinner, which might not be served until 8 o clock at night.Consolidation:1. It is impossible give without expecting anything in return.2. I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.3. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and l

21、ooking at the view.4. Golden Lake of Tainting is a state-level Grade 4A tourist zone, a national forest park, and was awarding Global Geo-Park in Feb. 2022.Adjectives & Adverbs:1. Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_2 Muc

22、h rare animals are dying out.3. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help.4. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field.5. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain 瓷器 industry.6. Visitorscan admire wonderfullynatural

23、 scenery and experience unique culture as well in Taining.Consolidation:1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.2. The teachers are kind and helpfully.3. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.4. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even notice the ticket-owner be

24、fore.5. I learned early in my life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. Prepositions:1. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.2. On the ancient town of Taining, one can find the best-kept residential buildings of the Ming and Qing D

25、ynasty.3. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening music.4. We appreciate your apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.5. Please help with me and give me some advice.6. Mysoccer coach retired in last week, I wanted to do somet

26、hing special forhim at his retirement party.Consolidation:1. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities.2. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.3. Hello, boys and girls. Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire a

27、larm goes off.4. The book I m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.5. Although we ve been delighted to have you as neighborsr,ewheoping to settle something that bothersto us.Articles:1. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.2. In the morning, drivers are often seen

28、to go in hurry.3. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.4. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.5. My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time. Consolidation:1. That day I didn t learn much about animals, i

29、nsects or trees, but I learned asiimveprlesson可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_about gravity.2. As result, the plants are growing everywhere.3. My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the problems I will turn to her for help.Pronouns:1. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and

30、tasty. There are so many that we often share it with our neighbors.2. Then everyone in the carriage began searching for the ticket, which was eventuallyfoundunder a seat several rows from his owner.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_3. My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So whenI have a proble

31、m I him for help.4. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others into our small town.ll turnto可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_5. Located in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, that is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.Consolidation:1. I was happy when

32、the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.2. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.3. My soccer coach retired last week, I wanted to do everything special for him at his retirement party.4. Having tea in the late afternoon provides a b

33、ridge between lunch and dinner, that might not beserved until 8 o clock at night.For each part, Ss will be invited to present their answers in class. Each group will gain points for their performance. Then a passage is provided for students to employ what they learn.Task TwoYou are supposed to finis

34、h the following exercise using what you have talked about.When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my

35、mother would have had a drinkwhileshe prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. Whilethey chat, myfather would liftmy sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there.My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Ste

36、p V. Further discussion among T and Ss.T willmake a finalsummary about morphology词法 , then introducingthe other two important factors, which are syntax 句法 and the contextual logic with the help of examples.真题展现可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though

37、 not very big, but the Restaurant is popular in our area . Every day he makeetshastufrresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. 2022 全国 My classmates and I are talking abouthow to do during the holiday. Ifawt heosmtaey, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. 2022全国 I

38、IOthers:1. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2. The dishes what I cooked were Mom s favorite. Exercises for Ss:1. There the air is cleanthe mountains are green.2. In fact, I don t like to go,I m afraid I ll lose their friendship.3. Althou

39、gh we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,we have never had any insect attack problems.4. She said that she and my schoolmates all wishedme success, but it didn t matter would win or not.5. difficult the work may be, we must go all out to finish it ahead of time.6. Please e

40、xcuse us for notable to say goodbye to you. T s summary about grammatical rules for sentences:(I) 从句包括并列句 , 复合句如 , 名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句等.重点考查 1.连词的挑选 2.关系代词、关系副词的运用;(II) 句式结构省略是否有误 / 疑问词是否运用恰当 / 句子结构是否完整When it comes to the problems about logic, T shows some sentences in which mistakes do not exist witho

41、ut a certain context.What s wrong with the following sentences.1. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.2. We didn t need to do so much homework.3. Some People even had to wait outside.4. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.5. However, the buildi

42、ng groups of relics and the well-maintainedstreets and alleys are also great choices for visitors.Contexts for each sentence.1. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easily see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom was

43、also splendid. Closeto the school there was a beautiful park withmany trees around them. Fartherinthedistance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.2. My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn t need to

44、do so much homework.3. Myuncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.4. No one in the carriage had previously spoken to or even notice the ticket-o

45、wner before. they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.YetRestaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times.SomeAs for the last sentence, T leads Ss to recall the following sentences, and find the correct answer for it:Golden Lake of Taining(1) As one of

46、 the top seven most beautiful Danxia landforms in China, Golden Lake of Taining attractsmany visitors every year.(2) Located in Taining County, it was a man-made lake, which is about 60 kilometers long, and has a capacity of 8700 million cubic meters.(3) Golden Lake of Tainting is a state-level Grade 4A tourist zone, a national forest park, andwas awarded Geo-Park in Feb. 2022.(4) Visitors can admire wonderful natural scenery and experience un