大学英语四级写作收集.ppt

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1、大学英语四级写作专题辅导,大学英语四级作文评分标准,一、评分原则1 CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 2CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Award Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。,4避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括

2、满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 5. 字数不足以应酌情扣分。 二、评分标准1本题满分为15分2阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一份。3阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如 8分)相似，即定为 该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。,分数档,4评分标准2分 (33) 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分 (39) 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 (45)

3、 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分(57) 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分(67) 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。,CET4写作评分标准,高分作文 基本要求：思想表达正确，语义连贯，无重 大语言错误 高分要求： 句型的多样性 经典词组短语的运用 亮点词汇,写作题型,议论文 1.主题型（topic） 健康对人类的幸福必不可少；如何保持健康；结论 2.观点对比型（A I saw; I conqu

4、ered. Julius Caesar Government of the people, by the people and for the people, shall not perish from the earth. Abraham Lincoln Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. Francis Bacon Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested. Franci

5、s Bacon,排比句式 It cannot be denied that technology does help us a lot. Internet provides us with easy access to various aspects of knowledge and information; mobile phones make it more convenient for us to communicate with one another; a growing number of man-made satellites have been launched to prob

6、e into the secrets of the universe. Without technology, the world would stop developing. That is why we should be proud of advanced science and technology in the contemporary age.,排比句式 some discard litters everywhere; some cheat in tests; some waste food on canteens; some throw offensive/insulting r

7、emarks at others; some are always late for classes; some guys even watch pornographic or violent films in dorms.,2009.12 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline giv

8、en below: 1. 建设绿色校园很重要 2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境. 3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该.,1.建设绿色校园很重要 The concept of “Green Life” has gained wide popularity among Chinese citizens. Almost every university has been aware of the importance of building a green campus. Without green environment it is impossible for college students to

9、 have an enjoyable/agreeable life in the Ivory Tower. Furthermore, a green campus is of benefit to broaden/consolidate students awareness of environmental protection.,Creating a Green Campus,2.绿色校园不仅仅指绿色的环境 In addition to green environment, green campuses also refer to decent behaviors. However, tak

10、ing a look around, we can find a good many examples of inappropriate ones: some discard litters everywhere; some cheat in tests; some waste food on canteens; some throw offensive/insulting remarks at others; some are always late for classes; some guys even watch pornographic or violent films in dorm

11、s. In fact, it has become a trend for many students to turn a blind eye to their own bad acts.,3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该 Accordingly, it is imperative/urgent for us to take measures to maintain green campuses. For one thing, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to ban these negative behaviors

12、. For another, we should educate, advocate and encourage our classmates, friends and acquaintances to refuse all uncivilized acts. If we do our utmost to do so, the future of our college life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.,友情提醒：高分句式灵活运用 Nowadays English learning is very popular in China. In re

13、cent decades, English learning has gained/is enjoying wide popularity among Chinese students. Nowadays English learning is more and more popular in China. In recent decades, English learning has gained/is enjoying growing popularity among Chinese students. In recent decades, English learning has fou

14、nd its growing popularity among Chinese students.,首段首尾句句式选择（呼应式写法） 1) _has/have gained (is/are enjoying) wide popularity among_. 2) _has/have found its/their way among _. 3) It has become a prevalent trend for_ to_. It has become a prevalent trend that_. 4) There is a growing trend of_. There is a g

15、rowing trend that_. 注：首句前加上适当的时间状语,2011-06 现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 In the contemporary society, online shopping has gained wide popularity throughout the world. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. It has become a prevalent trend

16、for youngsters to shop online.,In the contemporary society, it has become a prevalent trend for youngsters to shop online. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. Online shopping has gained wide popularity throughout the wor

17、ld.,In the contemporary society, there is a growing tide of youngsters shopping online. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. Online shopping has gained wide popularity throughout the world.,2009-12 建设绿色校园很重要 In the presen

18、t-day society, the concept of “Green Campus” is enjoying wide popularity among universities. Without green environment it is impossible for college students to have an enjoyable and agreeable life in the Ivory Tower. Thus it has become a prevalent trend for universities to create green campuses.,201

19、0-06 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视单词拼写 In recent decades, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. There is a growing trend/tide of learning English in China. However,题目：My View on Double BA Degree 提纲： 1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见 2. 对此，人们看法不一 3. 我对这一现象的看法,练笔,My view on Double BA Degree In the contempora

20、ry society, the system of double bachelors degree has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges. On many campuses it has become a prevalent trend for students to have two majors at the same time.,To this phenomenon, different students take divergent attitudes. Some strongly approve of it

21、 in that a double bachelors degree can broaden their vision, thus putting them in a more favorable position in the job-seeking market. On the contrary, those who stand firmly opposed to it also have cogent reasons. For one thing, two majors make it difficult for them to focus on one particular field

22、; for another, they can expand their scope of knowledge by reading extensively rather than pursuing a double bachelors degree.,Personally, I am slightly negative about double bachelors degree. In this day and age, the more skilled we are in one specific realm, the better we can meet the societys nee

23、ds. Accordingly, it is advisable that we should make the most of our college life to acquire more specialized knowledge and skills to set the stage for our future.,观点对比型模板提炼 To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it in that

24、/as _. On the contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly opposed to it cogently/convincingly contend that _.,To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some who strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it are cogently convinced that_. On the

25、contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly opposed to it contend that _.,To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it. They hold the view that_. Moreover/Furthermore,_. In addition,_. On the cont

26、rary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly opposed to it also have cogent/sound reasons. For one thing,_; for another,_.,(时间状语), _has/have gained (is/are enjoying) wide popularity among_. It has become a prevalent trend for_ to_. Some_ strongly/firmly/constantly approve of

27、/advocate _ in that/as _. (Some_ strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate _. For one thing,_; for another,_.) On the contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly opposed to it also have cogent/sound reasons. According to their point of view,_. Moreover/Furthermore,

28、_. In addition,_.,五彩斑斓的英语句子,什么样的句子更加吸引阅卷老师？ 优美句子的艺术张力何在？ 优美的句子如何形成？,复杂多样 变幻莫测,如何避免句式单调? 被动式 It形式主语/宾语 分词作状语 There be With复合结构 非限制性定语从句 倒装 主语从句 名词化,被动式 人们普遍认为理论与实践是不可分的。 It is widely accepted that theory is inseparable from practice. 学生应该适当重视单词拼写。 Due importance should be attached to spelling. 事情应当按照

29、轻重缓急来处理。 Priority should be given to the urgency of matters. 只有拥有远大的理想与辛勤的努力才能取得成功。 No success can be achieved without aspiration and perspiration.,It形式主语/宾语 不用说 It goes without saying that 值得做某事 It pays to do sth. 不可否认 It cannot be denied that It is undeniable that 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed th

30、at It is generally considered that It is widely accepted that It is universally acknowledged that,(5)很重要 It is exceedingly/extremely important/significant/essential/crucial/vital/ necessary (for sb.) to do It is exceedingly/extremely important/significant/essential/crucial/vital/ necessary that+主语+(should) do/be done (6)很流行/普遍 It has become a prevalent trend/tide (for sb.) to do,make it +adj. +(for sb.) to do,英语习语就其形式可归纳为八种类型： 1.短语动词（Phrasal Verbs）,习语（Idiomatic Expression）,