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1、关于在语言欣赏与运用中提升学生写作能力第一页，讲稿共三十页哦 高考书面表达新评分标准的要求 提高学生写作自信心的要求 实现英语写作水平提高的要求 新课程理念对写作教学的要求 语言欣赏与运用的必要性语言欣赏与运用的必要性第二页，讲稿共三十页哦 新新 教教 材材 语语 言言 美美 的的 体体 现现一、词语美一、词语美生动形象性 丰富性过渡衔接功能二、句子美二、句子美句子的句法结构美 句子所描绘的意境美 句子的内涵美 句子的功能美 分步理解分步理解 综合运用综合运用重点欣赏重点欣赏个别操练个别操练/高档性第三页，讲稿共三十页哦 教教 材材 语语 言言 的的 综综 合合 运运 用用2模仿教材例句，进行

2、造句组段模仿教材例句，进行造句组段3.激活语言积累，进行一句多译激活语言积累，进行一句多译1.整理文章信息，运用语言复述整理文章信息，运用语言复述4.利用单元话题，完成写作任务利用单元话题，完成写作任务5综合所学语言，润色修饰短文综合所学语言，润色修饰短文 第四页，讲稿共三十页哦第五页，讲稿共三十页哦高考书面表达新的评分标准的第5档要求：覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言应用能力。有效使用了语言的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第六页，讲稿共三十页哦 教育部2003年颁布的普通高中英语课程标准（实验稿）倡导

3、体验、实践、参与、合作与交流的学习方式和任务型的教学途径，培养学生的综合语言运用能力。第七页，讲稿共三十页哦 Willis1996总结了语言学习的4个基本条件：要有语言环境，有大量的、真实的语言输入。有使用语言的机会，要能使用语言做事情，交换信息。要有使用语言的动机。理想的状态，应该有教学的条件，也就是有机会注意语言的形式。第八页，讲稿共三十页哦 心理学家认为，学习者的自我感觉对学习会产生重要的影响。如果学习者对自己有自信心，他们就会确定乐观的目标，而这种自信心是建立在他们能逐步地用所学的语言知识做成一些事情、完成一些任务的基础上(龚亚夫：2003）。第九页，讲稿共三十页哦例1:Our leg

4、s were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice.(B1 Unit 3)例2:A huge crack that was eight kilometers long and thirty meters wide cut across houses,roads and canals.(B1 Unit 4)词语的生动形象性 例3:Slowly,the city began to breathe again.(B1 Unit 4)第十页，讲稿共三十页哦例2:But I was happy to help because I knew

5、 it would help us achieve our dream of making black and white people equal.(B1 Unit 5)例1:I am fond of my sister but she has one serious short-coming.She can be really stubborn.(B1 Unit 3)(determined,not change ones mind,make up ones mind,insist,not give in.)词语的丰富性(reach ones goal/realize ones dream/

6、live ones dream/make ones dream come true)第十一页，讲稿共三十页哦 词语的过渡衔接功能例2:At first the river is small and the water is clear and cold.Then it begins to move quickly.It becomes rapids as it passes through deep valleys,traveling across western Yunnan Province.Sometimes the river becomes a waterfall and enter

7、s wide valleys.After it enters Southeast Asia,its pace slows.It makes wide bends or meanders through valleys to the plains where rice grows.At last,the river delta enters the South China Sea.(B1 Unit 3)例1:Anyhow,my goal is to provide humans with a life of high quality As a result I totally changed m

8、y shape.(B2 Unit 3)第十二页，讲稿共三十页哦例:(B1 Unit 3)However,the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.In the valleys colorful butterflies flew around us and we saw yaks and sheep eating green grass.At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter.It was so quiet.There

9、was almost no wind-only the flames of our fire for company.句子所描绘的意境美 第十三页，讲稿共三十页哦 句子的内涵美例1:As a matter of fact,every country wants the opportunity.Its a great responsibility but also a great honor to be chosen.(B2 Unit 2)例2:“You should pay more attention to the rainforest where I live and appreciate

10、 how the animals live together.No rain-forest,no animals,no drugs.”(B2 Unit 4)第十四页，讲稿共三十页哦例1:Who Am I?(B2 Unit 3)Para1:Over time I have been changed quite a lot.Para2:Theses changes only became possible as my memory improved.Para3:Since the 1970s many applications have been found for me.句子的功能美例2:In

11、Search of the Amber Room (B2 Unit 1)Frederick William I,the King of Prussia,could never have imagined that his greatest gift to the Russian people would have such an amazing history.第十五页，讲稿共三十页哦Using languageHelp my son describe his journey to XinjiangWhat/do:climb mountains/make camp/sing&dance/tak

12、e photos/What/see:lakes/butterflies/sheep/clear sky/glacier/grasslands/rapids/How/feel:surprised/tired/excited/Last autumn I took a trip with my parents to Xinjiang,the place I had always dreamt of.第十六页，讲稿共三十页哦例：呆在户内太久之后，我对自然变得狂热起来。1.Having stayed indoors for a long time,I became/got interested in n

13、ature.2.I had stayed indoors for so long that I became crazy about nature.3.After I stayed indoors for a long time,nature began to keep me spellbound.4.Staying inside for so long made me excited about nature.5.I was dreaming about experiencing nature after being inside for so long.6.After being insi

14、de for long,I found it so exciting to learn about nature.第十七页，讲稿共三十页哦 随着社会的发展，英语在中国人的生活中起着越来越重要的作用,学习英语的人也随之增多，但仍有部分学生认为学英语用途不大且很难学。中学生英文报就此内容开展征文活动，请写一篇短文陈述你的观点，内容须包括以下要点：1陈述存在的现象；2阐述学习英语的理由；3提出提高(improve)英语的建议。注意：词数100个左右，文章的开头已给出，不计词数。第十八页，讲稿共三十页哦 With the development of society,English becomes m

15、ore important in our life.More and more people are learning English now.But there are a part of students still think learning English is difficult and not useful.I think learning English is very important.English is used all over the world.We can talk with foreigners.We can get much information and

16、make our life interested.There are many ways to learn English,such as listening to the tape,keeping an English diary,speaking English with a foreigner and reading English novels.第十九页，讲稿共三十页哦 With the development of society,English is playing a more important role in our life than ever before.The num

17、ber of English learners is increasing rapidly.However,some students havent realized the importance of English and have some trouble learning it.Actually English is the most widely used language in the world.With its help we can communicate with people from different places easily.We can learn about

18、cultures in English-speaking countries and enrich our life.So its necessary to learn English well.Here Id like to share some ways of learning English with you.First,we should listen to the tape frequently.Secondly,Wed better keep an English diary and set down what we go through and how we feel.Besid

19、es,we can make friends with a foreigner to practice speaking English.In a word,little and often is the way to learn English.If you put your heart into it,youll find its fun to learn and use English.第二十页，讲稿共三十页哦 _（破坏）（破坏）An earthquake _(袭击袭击）the city.shook/hit/struckdestroyed/ruined/damaged第二十一页，讲稿共三

20、十页哦What will happen in an earthquake?Many buildings will fall down.Huge cracks will cut across roads,houses and canals.A large number of people will be hurt and will even be killed.Water,food and electricity will be hard to get.The whole city may lie in ruins.injured第二十二页，讲稿共三十页哦 At 3:42 am on July

21、28,1976,the greatest earthquake of the 20th century shook Tangshan in Hebei Province.Tangshan earthquakeTangshan earthquake第二十三页，讲稿共三十页哦What happened before the earthquake?For three days the water in the village wells _ and _.The well walls had deep _ in them,out of which a smelly gas came.In the fa

22、rmyards,the chickens and pigs were _ nervous _ eat.Mice ran out of the fields _ places to hide.Fish jumped put of their bowls and ponds.At 3:00am on July 28,1976,bright lights appeared in the sky.The sounds of planes could be heard even when no planes were in the sky.Some water pipes _ and _.rosefel

23、lcrackstoo tolooking forcrackedburst第二十四页，讲稿共三十页哦A huge crack _ houses,roads and canals.Steam _ from holes in the ground.Hard hills of rock became rivers of _.A large city lay _ in 15 seconds.The number of people killed or _ reached 400,000.Everything was _.Most hospitals,factories and buildings _.B

24、ricks _ the ground like red autumn leaves.Two dams and most bridges _.The railway tracks were now _ pieces of steel._ cows would never give milk again.Half a million pigs millions of chickens were dead.Sand filled the wells _ water.Some rescue people were _ under the ruins.Water,food and electricity

25、 were_.cut across burst dirt in ruins injured destroyed were gone fell down uselessWhat damage did Tangshan earthquake cause?coveredTens of thousands ofinstead oftrapped hard to get It seemed as if the world was at an end.were trapped:were kept in a place from which one couldnt escape.All the people

26、 were very surprised.shocked.第二十五页，讲稿共三十页哦Slowly,the city began to _again.All hope was not lost.The army _ teams to _ _ those who were trapped and to _ the dead.They built _ for survivors whose homes had been destroyed.Fresh water was taken to the city,too._ _ _ people were helped and most of the mi

27、ners were saved from the coal mines.dig out burybreatheorganizedsheltersHundreds of thousands ofrescued Not all hope was lost.What did the soldiers do to help the rescue workers?第二十六页，讲稿共三十页哦What words and expressions do you appreciate most?Why?What words and expressions do I appreciate most?Why?1.B

28、ut the one million people of the city,who thought little of these events,were asleep as usual that night.4.A huge crack that was eight kilometres long and thirty metres wide cut across houses,roads and canals.3.Then,later that afternoon,another big quake which was almost as strong as the first one s

29、hook Tangshan.2.In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in ruins.5.Slowly,the city began to breathe again.6.A night the earth didnt sleep.第二十七页，讲稿共三十页哦Which sentences do you think are the most impressive?Why?Why do I think the following sentences are most impressive?4.Everywhere they looked nea

30、rly everything was destroyed.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.All hope was not lost.5.It seemed as if the world was at an end.No matter where,Anywhere,Jim entered the classroom excitedly./Not all hope was lost.It seemed as though第二十八页，讲稿共三十页哦Retelling 20th 3:42 15 400,000 75%90%Tens of thousands of Millions of 150,000第二十九页，讲稿共三十页哦感谢大家观看感谢大家观看第三十页，讲稿共三十页哦