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1、广东四校联考读后续写Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. Its like their brain meters are stuck on selfish. This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial estate （宫殿般的) that had belnged to h

2、is family through many generations. He told me stories of gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.From all these, I figured my grandmother must be

3、rich. I had never met her before she came from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon he

4、r return.（下文应该描写的方向）We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like Id seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit.（一个转变） She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I

5、 vowed to be attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends and history as delicate and beautiful

6、 as the designs she created.I listened, fascinated. Her words were a mix of the two languages, so I didnt completely understand everything at first. Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.学生优秀习作：No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a

7、hot griddle.（因为我想要和她一起回日本）I became sensitive to all relevant words about “going back”. Days seemed months to me. Feeling sitting on pins and needles. I needed to become aggressive. Pretending to be casual, I asked her, “ Grandma, what is life in the palatial mansions like?” She stopped her needlecra

8、ft, gazing at me in puzzlement.Then she must have realized my father had shown me some photos . She showed me a photo（存在着一个前后照应）. Beyond my expectation, within the photo, the doors are busted, windows boarded up, and yards overgrown. Lots of refugees gather, with wornout clothes, in rags. A young la

9、dy is distributing porridge. To give them food and shelter,” she said gently, “I sold the estates. All.”（出乎我的意料，在照片中，门被打破了，窗户被封住了，院子杂草丛生。许多难民聚集在一起，穿着破烂烂的衣服。一位年轻的女士正在分发粥。”“为了给他们食物和住所，”她温柔地说，“我卖掉了庄园。）所有（环境场景的描写）My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.（这段运用了修辞）（I nearly suffocated by the disillus

10、ion. I used to have bubbles with gorgeous flowers and aromatic fragrance. But now they exploded, with thunderous noise. The fragrance descended into sour, stale smell from tramps.） She must have known my disappointment. She tapped me, whispering, “ Imagine you were me.”I immersed myself into that er

11、a. I couldnt be blind to the crying from the disabled, the refugees begging for food and the suffering they were enduring. Back to the reality, I found my collar damped. “They taught me needlecraft instead. ” Grandma handed me something. It was a rose. “Rose is given, and fragrance remains.” I could

12、 hear my brain meter working to“Selfless”.（与开头相照应）（绝！主题的升华呼应处理真的好棒！突破了无私，奶奶把房子给卖了。）教师范文No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage. “When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you

13、 take me?” I asked timidly（胆小地）. Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me.“No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?” So I told her about those stories. She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth,

14、 but the war destroyed everything. Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with her family.My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was sta

15、ying with us swept my sadness away.I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan. I soon understood that I didnt need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.八省联考读后续写During this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each

16、 time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help.（主题突破的关键）One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）, and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was abo

17、ut to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.（我们需要帮助但是等了接近三个小时）He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to suppor

18、t it. Then he got a saw（锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and s

19、he was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it,

20、 so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.范文1：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl

21、 asked if Id had lunch. No sooner had I squeezed out a word than my howling stomach indicated the precise circumstance. My face flushed to the root of my hair due to the awkward situation.（肚子饿的描写 尴尬的情况） Nevertheless（尽管如此）， the little girl turned to her mom and suggested in a bright voice that they t

22、ake me together with them to enjoy a meal.Surprise dominated me, urging me to decline（婉拒） their touching and warm-hearted invitation. （惊讶之余，我拒绝了他们的盛情邀请。我拒绝了他们所以才会有后面的纸袋子给我装吃的。）From beyond the trucks end emerged the girls father（人物的出场方式）, who had assisted me with my big Jeep. Wearing a smile （wear这个动

23、词运用巧妙）on his face, he asked his wife to take out a paper bag and handed it to me. He got on the truck and set off with words of best wishes for me.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag lay some burgers and fruit. Sitting in my Jeep, greatly moved and speechless

24、, I took a bite of the very meal. Hardly had I thoroughly swallowed them when tears rolled down my face. A mood of warmth and exhilaration descended on me. （句型结构可以积累 可以套用其他情绪）Silence took over as I was desperate to reflect on the unique experience.Lips twitching with happiness, I was overwhelmed by

25、the Mexican familys kindness. Their angle-like behavior lightened my world, sweeping away all the melancholy and annoyance during caused by the car trouble. I started my Jeep and hit the road, disbelief and mistrust giving way to belief and trust in humanity, with the amber-like sunshine leading me

26、on the road.范文2.When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. Her words reminded me of my empty stomach. To be honest, I was really hungry. I smiled radiantly（我高兴地笑了） and told her I wouldnt. To my surprise, the little girl insisted on my waiting for her for some minutes, rushing b

27、ack to her truck.It was not long before she showed up again, with a paper bag in her hand. “Inside is some Mexican bread from our country. Please try it.” She handed it to me, a little out of breath.（上气不接下气） Brimful of warmth and gratitude, （被某种情绪包围）I thanked her from the bottom of my heart. Never h

28、ad I seen so kind a family before. After waving goodbye to them, the Mexican family jumped onto the truck and left.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. So delicious was the bread that it fueled both my stomach and my heart. Lunch finished, I set off. Hardly had I started my

29、jeep than the familiar truck popped into sight. Why did they come back? The very moment （强调一个时刻）I greeted them，the father put the $20 bill back in my hand, and explained to me patiently.“It seems to me that helping others itself is not worth any payment, so please take it back.” （和前文呼应了）Ashamed and

30、greatly moved, I bowed to them to show my sincere gratitude and respect. On that day, I learned that there are really some people born with a kind heart to help others, and I should carry on their spirit.（主题的突破）范文3：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. Her twinkling eyes s

31、uggested she was willing to extend an invitation, but I didnt want to bother this warm-hearted family any more. Nevertheless, before I could say “Yes”, my stomach had let out a noise as a reminder, which betrayed me. With a radiant smile on her face, she excitedly asked her parents to invite me to l

32、unch.Failing to resist their hospitality, I joined them in lunch in a restaurant nearby. Never had I had a grander meal before. The parents were nice and the lovely and kind girl never ceased to （总是让我笑）amaze me. In the end, the wife wanted to get something from the truck. A few minutes later, she ca

33、me back with a paper bag as a gift for me, telling me not to open it until they left.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Lying in the bag was a $20 bill, which I had offered in return for their help and a folded note . Unfolding（打开） the note, I saw the words left for me “Th

34、anks for your time and fun being with my family!”A ripple （涟漪）of warmth mingled with （混合）happiness ran through my mind. The words and experience served as（“就像”运用了比喻修辞） the gentle and bright sunlight in the morning, melting the ice in my heart. Seeing the truck disappearing from sight（消失在眼前）, I felt

35、the distrust in humanity vanish without trace. Its a foreign, complete stranger family that assisted me regain the trust in the glowing human nature - helping others in need.（重拾对光辉人性的信任）范文4：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. All of a sudden（代替suddenly）, a deafening（震耳欲聋

36、的） sound produced by my empty stomach burst out, indicating my helpless and hopeless 3-hour waiting had claimed my lunch time.（形容肚子饿+此时此刻的心情） With an exhausted smile squeezed out, I answered her that I hadnt. At this moment, this friendly family invited me to enjoy a simple lunch with hospitality（wi

37、th结构，可以强化人物性格特征）.That triggered a warm current welling up in my heart.（一股暖流流入了我的心里） Then the girl handed me a home-made sandwich, which would definitely bring me back to life. After wolfing down the food, I was about to say goodbye again when the girl pressed a paper bag into my hand, and then she j

38、umped into the truck, waving me goodbye.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Hardly had I caught a clear glimpse of the content inside when I felt tears blurring my vision.（泪眼朦胧适用于多种情感）（Hardly had Iwhen语法知识倒装结构的运用）It was the $20 bill I gave to the mother just now, along with

39、 a brief but sincere note written in English,saying, “Kindness presented is from the bottom of the heart, and it needs no payment.”（主题升华句，平常可以多加积累）These simple words really touched me, like a glimmer of sunlight spilling into my heart, as well as illuminating my world.（作用句+个人成长） Not only did it swee

40、p up the darkness blanketing my helpless experience before, but it fueled my determination to help anyone in need unconditionally, decorating the world with kindness. Do bear it in mind that every kind act counts.（最后一段的结尾许多语料可以多加积累，适用于社会奉献，乐于助人的主题当中）范文5：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl aske

41、d if Id had lunch. Yes I said, looking away trying to pretend that I was not hungry. Embarrassingly（副词应用得当 会更加形象生动） my stomach wouldnt take my side and it sent off a few grumbling sounds. She quickly jumped out of the truck and pulled down a food box on the back. Her mother handed over（给，代替give） to

42、her a paper bag and in a flash（眨眼间）, the two of them stuffed（塞） the bag full - so full that it looked like a paper balloon.（形容这个纸袋子被塞得很满） When I accepted it from her hand, I thought to myself, thank goodness, her mom accepted the twenty dollar bill.（照应前文）We then waved goodbye to each other.After the

43、y left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. There was a bottle of water, two avocados, some biscuits and a twenty-dollar bill. It lay quietly in the bottom of the bag,plain but glowing with colors.（平淡但是闪耀着色彩） My throat tightened.（体现人物情绪的语句） I had been measuring the help from a stranger in t

44、erms of money, and I had overlooked the nature of kindness.The Mexican family had a truck that was smaller than my Jeep, yet they had a bigger heart and opener arms towards strangers.（对比运用巧妙） From that instance on I stopped complaining of the unkindness of man and started to spread the kindness I ha

45、d enjoyed from the Mexican family. And if you can believe it I found many people of the same kind - we are there to help.自我练习The Last ProjectJohn had been a carpenter since he graduated from high school, and he was living with his old wife and three kids in a small shabby house in the countryside. I

46、t had never been easy for John, the only bread-earner, to support his family since his wife Mary was out of work to take care of their kids.Decades of toilsome（辛苦的） work wore him out.（使筋疲力尽） The highly skilled carpenter lost count of the number of times he selected quality materials for constructing

47、 houses and he couldnt remember how many splendid and sturdy（坚固的） houses he had built. It was his two rough and swarthy（皮肤黝黑的） hands as well as his tanned wrinkled face that manifested（显示、证明） his devotion to the job.With time he grew old and felt that his body was not as that strong as it used to be

48、. So, he decided that it was time for his retirement from all that hard work. He would miss his work, but he felt it was time to spend his time with the people who were important to him.He went to his boss Henry and informed him about his retirement, telling his employer-contractor of his plans to l

49、eave the house building business and live a more leisurely（从容的） life with his wife enjoying his extended family（大家庭）. The boss was sorry to see his good, reliable worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personal favor, and promised that would be his last project.John didnt reply at once and he would like to discuss it with his wife back home. His wife Mary, seated in a worn-out sofa and looking at the hoary and old ma