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1、ii目录contents0101字数续写内容为150词左右材料350词以内要求续写两段，每段的开头语已经给出体裁记叙文故事类逻辑性较强01融洽度高衔接合理语法&词汇丰富&准确结构紧凑0202提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效信息有效信息原文信息Asthegraduationceremonysclassspeaker,VerdaTetteh,asenioratFitchburgHighSchool,hadjustfinishedherspeechandtakenaseatwhentheschoolmadeanexcitingannouncementthatVerda had been awa

2、rded Fitchburg High schools General Excellence Scholarship,valuedat$40,000.Shehadafewmomentstoreflectastheceremonycontinued.Tenminuteslater,sheknewwhattodo.Shereturnedtotheplatformandapologizedforinterrupting.Thenshemadeanannouncementthatshockedthecrowd.She refused the scholarship and requested that

3、 the funds instead be awarded to a student who needed it more than she did.02提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效信息有效信息原文信息“Iamverygratefulforthis,butIalsoknowthatI am not the one who needs this the most,”Verdasaid.Para1-2故事情节已很清晰：毕业典礼上Verda作为学生代表讲完话入座，这时母校宣布Verda荣获本校卓越奖学金（4万美金）。可是她当场做了一个出乎所有人意料的决定，她重新回到主席台，宣布自己要把这笔

4、奖金让给比她更需要这笔钱的学生。02提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效信息有效信息原文信息Hergenerousgestureshockedtheaudience,madeupofherfellowclassmates,theirfamiliesandfaculty(全体教员)members.Her mother,Rosemary,loudly cheered her daughter on from the audience.Para3 观众都被她这一举动震惊了。她的母亲(Rosemary)在观众席为女儿大声欢呼。(表明母亲的态度是非常支持的。)02提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效

5、信息有效信息原文信息VerdaisplanningongoingtoHarvardUniversityinthefallasapre-med(医学院预科的)student.Thestraight-AhonorstudenthasalreadybeenawardedafullscholarshipforherIvyLeaguecollegeeducation.However,she could have used her schools scholarship to help pay for additional expensessuchasbooks,computersandlivingexp

6、enses.Para4 成绩全优的Verda打算去哈佛，这位优等生也已经获得了常春藤盟校的全额奖学金。即便如此，家庭并不富裕的她本可以利用母校给的这笔奖学金来支付书本费、电脑费和生活费等额外费用的。(自己不是不需要钱，但仍然做出了这个无私的决定，去帮助别人。)02提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效信息有效信息原文信息Verdaknew,though,justhowimportantacollegescholarshipistoastudentwhosefamilyisfinanciallystruggling.Hermotherearnedherbachelorsdegreefromalo

7、calcommunitycollegeatage47,whileraisingherfourchildrenandholdingdowntwojobstosupportherfamily.Her mothers determination to get an education despite her financial hardship inspired the young womans selfless decision.Shewantedthefundstogotoastudentpursuingacommunitycollegedegree,justashermotheroncehad

8、.Para5 母亲母亲47岁带着四个孩子，打两份工，坚持考社区大学的经历，让岁带着四个孩子，打两份工，坚持考社区大学的经历，让Verda明白奖学金对于一个家庭困难的学生来说，是多么重要。正是母亲明白奖学金对于一个家庭困难的学生来说，是多么重要。正是母亲困境求学，重视教育的决心激发了她，让她做出了这个无私的决定困境求学，重视教育的决心激发了她，让她做出了这个无私的决定。(深受母亲的影响，两方面，一个是对教育的重视，一个是爱心激发，要去帮助困难中求学的人。)02提炼原文提炼原文情节情节，解读解读有效信息有效信息原文信息Thatday,Rosemary took pride in her daugh

9、ter.“Now Im 100%sure she is ready to go into the world on her own,”shesaid.Para5 母亲为女儿骄傲，确信女儿是真的长大了。03优秀课件PPT公开课优质课PPT课件读后续写（以浙江高考题为例）(共25张PPT)03提示语一：提示语一：Verda also admired her mother and kept in mind what her mother taught her._解析：意思是解析：意思是“Verda也很钦佩母亲，并且牢记母亲的教诲。也很钦佩母亲，并且牢记母亲的教诲。”那么，母亲有什么值得钦佩的地方？又

10、教给了她什么？母亲说那么，母亲有什么值得钦佩的地方？又教给了她什么？母亲说过什么，做过什么，是怎样影响过什么，做过什么，是怎样影响Verda的。因此，这一段就要围的。因此，这一段就要围绕绕“What exactly did her mother teach her?”来写，把母亲来写，把母亲重视重视教育教育的思想的思想(教育可以改变命运，可以争取教育可以改变命运，可以争取更多人生更多人生机会等机会等)，要，要去去帮助有困难的人帮助有困难的人的思想都包含进来。的思想都包含进来。03提示语二：提示语二：The young woman expressed no regrets over her de

11、cision togiveawaythemoney._解析解析：意思是：意思是“年轻的年轻的Verda说自己捐出这笔钱，一点儿也不说自己捐出这笔钱，一点儿也不后悔。后悔。”这段的主体不再是母亲，而是这段的主体不再是母亲，而是“the young woman”，也，也就是就是Verda,那么，她捐出这笔钱之后，内心是怎么想的，又说那么，她捐出这笔钱之后，内心是怎么想的，又说了什么了什么(What did Verda say about it?)她对未来有哪些期许？我她对未来有哪些期许？我们要把结尾升华为一种正能量的传递，一个温情的结局。要揭们要把结尾升华为一种正能量的传递，一个温情的结局。要揭示

12、文章主旨，挖掘深度思想。示文章主旨，挖掘深度思想。0404tip3tip1tip2写作体裁：夹叙夹议写作体裁：夹叙夹议写作时态：一般过去时写作时态：一般过去时写作篇幅：每段平均写作篇幅：每段平均75个词个词，大概，大概6句句话话tip4写作写作时间：时间：25-28分钟分钟04Verdas mother always stressed to her the importance of having an education.1.母亲总是对母亲总是对Verda强调教育的重要性。强调教育的重要性。emphasized the important role ofplaced emphasis ona

13、ttached great significance tohighlighted the value of042.Verda常被教导，教育能给她提供更好的机会常被教导，教育能给她提供更好的机会。Verda was taught that education could provide her with better chances.offer her better opportunitiesbring her a better chance043.母亲母亲教导她，她应该为自己树立目标，并尽最大努力教导她，她应该为自己树立目标，并尽最大努力去实现它去实现它。Her mother taught h

14、er that/She was taught thatshe should set up/build up/establish a goal for herself and try her best to pursue/seek/achieve it.044.另外，还要有一颗善良的心，帮助那些需要帮助的人另外，还要有一颗善良的心，帮助那些需要帮助的人。In addition/Moreover/Whats more/Besides/Furthermore（表示递进或补充的过度词）表示递进或补充的过度词）she should have a kind heart,and help those who

15、 needed help/in need.045.她她自强不息，努力实现自己的梦想，并去帮助尽可能多自强不息，努力实现自己的梦想，并去帮助尽可能多的人的人。She strived to achieve her dreams and help as many people as possible.struggled to realizeworked hard to make her dream come true046.她很高兴看到这些钱可以帮助那些需要帮助的人她很高兴看到这些钱可以帮助那些需要帮助的人。She was happy to see the money could help thos

16、e who needed help.was excited/glad to seeIt delighted her that047.她她希望她所做的能改变他们的生活希望她所做的能改变他们的生活。She hoped/wished/expected that the things that she did could change their life.what she did（主语从句）（主语从句）048.她很感激母亲支持她的决定她很感激母亲支持她的决定。She was thankful to her mother for supporting her decision.was grateful

17、 that her mother supported her decision.She really appreciated that049.校长校长对他的学生赞不绝口，认为对他的学生赞不绝口，认为Verda将是一位伟大的将是一位伟大的女性女性。The headmaster had high praise for his student and thought Verda would be a great woman.The headmaster spoke highly ofThe headmaster praisedVerda won high praise from05Verda als

18、o admired her mother and kept in mind what her mother taught her.Hermotheralwaysimpressedtheimportanceofhavinganeducationonherdaughter.Verdawastaughtthateducationwouldofferherbetteropportunities.Hermothertaughtherthatsheshouldsetupagoalforherselfandtryherbesttoseekit.Inaddition,sheoughttohaveakindhe

19、artandhelpthosewhoneedhelp.Sheneverforgotthevaluablelifelessons.Shestruggledtoworkhardtoachieveherdreamandhelpmorepeopleaspossible.05para1The young woman expressed no regrets over her decision to give away the money.Shesaidthatshewasexcitedtoseethemoneycouldhelpthosewhoneededhelp.Andshewishedthatwhatshedidcouldchangetheirlife.Shesaidshewasthankfulthathermothercouldsupportherdecision.Shewashappythatfacedwiththemoney,shehadthestrengthtodothat.Shewouldfinishhereducationonherownefforts.TheheadmasterhadhighpraiseforhisstudentandthoughtVerdawouldbeawomanwhowasgoingtochangetheworld.05para2