小学英语六年级作文范例-喜好习惯介绍.docx

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1、小学英语六年级作文范例-喜好习惯介绍请写一个你最宠爱的季节，要写出你喜爱的缘由。 My favorite season My favorite season is summer. Its hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I dont go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the bea

2、ch with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation. My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is?

3、Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? Whats your favourite food? My Favourite Food 是一篇很胜利的文章，

4、小作者并不是简洁地列举出自己最喜爱的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词精确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是专心了。 同学们，你肯定有许多的爱好，请你写一个你的爱好，字数不少于60个单词。 My hobby My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮). There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After sch

5、ool I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much. My hobby I am Cindy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I of

6、ten play with them. I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body. Whats your hobby? Can you tell me? My Seasons We have f

7、our seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when its wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time. I often go swimming.

8、It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and ma

9、ke a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature. 写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是依据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最终阐述自己最喜爱的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己宠爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中

10、的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农夫在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采纳一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。留意：在写作内容上，不行以像以往的内容那么简洁，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子依次要正确，在写作中还要留意关联词的运用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不行以同时出现。词量要限制在80个词以内。 写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是依据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后

11、再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最终阐述自己最喜爱的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己宠爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农夫在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采纳一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。留意：在写作内容上，不行以像以往的内容那么简洁，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子依

12、次要正确，在写作中还要留意关联词的运用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不行以同时出现。词量要限制在80个词以内。 I often go to Zhongshan Park. In the park you can see many trees and flowers. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. You can see a hill in the park, too. At the foot of the hill, there are several paths. A l

13、ot of people in my city like going to the park. Some young people like taking a walk there. Some old people like singing there. Some children like dancing or playing games there. Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation.www.#* 生单词： 1. several:几个 2. relaxation:放松中国教#育出版网* 点评：陈祖新小挚友的这篇作文简洁

14、明白。首先，作者向大家简洁地描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人们在公园里的活动：青年人在公园里漫步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园里玩嬉戏，多么欢乐的一组画面啊！最终，作者作出总结：中山公园真的是一个放松心情的好地方！ Li Ying s Hobby Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV on

15、ly on Saturday evening. Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy. 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有详细写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话

16、，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。 小挚友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是详细地描绘；二是和上面小挚友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中运用一些问句，运用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避开了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是非常不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。 描写一种你最宠爱的动物，要对它进行外形描写。 My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. Its very small. Its white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. Its lovely. Its my best friend. I like the rabbit.