2016高考英语二轮复习大专题综合测专题2短文改错.doc

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1、专题二短文改错Passage 1(2015东北三省四市二模)Dear Mum，This afternoon, our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us. I write down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly，isnt it? It is three years when I became a high school student. Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really ap

2、preciate for your support. I know that without your properly guidance，I would not have done so well. However, what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand. I really need your help. Kate答案：Dear Mum，This afternoon, our teac

3、her asked us list what our parents had done for us. I down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly， it? It is three years I became a high school student. Looking back on the that I have made so far, I really appreciate for your support. I know that without your guidance，I would not have done so wel

4、l. However, what still makes me is how to make my dream to go to top university come true.Please continue to lend a hand. I really need your help. Kate文章大意：本文是一封书信。Kate按照老师的要求，给妈妈写了一封信，表达自己的感激之情。1命题立意：考查不定式作宾语补足语。解析：list前加toask sb. to do sth.请某人干某事。2. 命题立意：考查动词的时态。解析：writewrote根据上文语意，此处应该为发生在过去的动作。3

5、. 命题立意：考查反意问句。解析：isntdoesnt本句的谓语动词是实义动词passes，故反意问句中用助动词doesnt。4. 命题立意：考查时间状语从句。解析：whensinceIt is一段时间since.为固定结构。5. 命题立意：考查名词。解析：progressesprogressprogress为抽象名词，不可数。6. 命题立意：考查动词。解析：去掉forappreciate为及物动词，可直接接宾语，不需要介词。7. 命题立意：考查形容词和副词。解析：properlyproper此处应用形容词来修饰名词guidance。8. 命题立意：考查分词作宾语补足语。解析：puzzling

6、puzzled此处应用过去分词来补充说明“me”自身的感受。9. 命题立意：考查冠词。解析：thea此处应用不定冠词表示泛指，意为“一所”，而非特指。10命题立意：考查代词。解析：Ime此处应用人称代词的宾格me来作lend的宾语。Passage 2(2015东北三省三校第二次联合模拟)The Magic Tree House series are among the most popular book series ever writing for Children. It tells a story of two kids, Jack and his sister Annie，seem t

7、o be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. A tree house is magic and can transport him to various places and various times in History. It turned out that King Athur from Camelot needs help.However，Jacks head librarians，Morgan le Fay，sends him and Annie to help.They end up go to many

8、different places and time periods through history on their adventures，which attract to readers a lot. The series so far has had over 40 books and is likely to grow.答案：The Magic Tree House series among the most popular book series ever for Children. It tells a story of two kids. Jack and his sister A

9、nnie, seem to be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. tree house is magic and can transport to various places and various times in History. It out that King Athur from Camelot needs help.，Jacks head ，Morgan le Fay，sends him and Annie to help.They end up to many different places and

10、time periods through history on their adventures，which attract to readers a lot. The series so far has had over 40 books and is likely to grow.文章大意：本文是一说明文。本文主要介绍了The Magic Tree House神奇书屋，这本书深受孩子们的喜爱，它描述了一对小兄妹杰克与安妮的冒险故事。1命题立意：考查be动词辨析。解析：areisThe Magic Tree House series是一本书的名字，作主语，动词用单数。2命题立意：考查动词的过

11、去分词。解析：writingwritten过去分词表被动，因此writing改为written。3命题立意：考查非限制性定语从句。解析：seem前加who先行词是人，非限制性语从句引导词用who。4命题立意：考查冠词辨析。解析：AThea表泛指，the表特指。前面已经提到过的，再次提到用the表特指。5命题立意：考查代词辨析。解析：himthem这里的宾语指的是Jack and his sister Annie，因此代词用them。6命题立意：考查时态。解析：turnedturns叙述故事全篇都用一般现在时态，这里用第三人称单数形式turns。7命题立意：考查连接词辨析。解析：HoweverT

12、herefore/ThusHowever“然而”表示转折，根据语意应该“因此”或者“这样”，因此改为Therefore/Thus。8命题立意：考查名词辨析。解析：librarianslibrarian根据语意这里的名词指的是Morgan le Fay一个人，所以应该用单数librarian。9命题立意：考查动词形式辨析。解析：gogoingend up doing以结束。10命题立意：考查及物动词用法。解析：去掉toattract是及物动词，因此to删除掉。Passage 3(2015甘肃省二诊)Recently, smog weather has became more and more s

13、erious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial production and punish those factories what ignore th

14、e protection. Second, we should develop environmentallyfriendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.答案：Recently

15、, smog weather has more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid poisonous air. To settle this problem, series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict on environmental protection to regulate the industrial production and punish those factor

16、ies ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentallyfriendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit using green products saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, environment will become .文章大意：雾霾天气越来越多，我们应采取措施

17、，行动起来。1命题立意：考查时态。解析：became becomebecome的过去分词形式是原形。2命题立意：考查被动语态。解析：forced前加are people是force的动作承受者，故forced前加are。3命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：breathebreathingavoid避免，后跟ving形式作宾语，故breathe breathing。4命题立意：考查冠词。解析：theaa series of一系列。故thea。5命题立意：考查名词。解析：lawlawslaw是可数名词，无限定词，应用复数形式。故lawlaws。6命题立意：考查定语从句。解析：whatthat/whi

18、chwhat不引导定语从句，定语从句中缺少主语，先行词为factories，故whatthat/which。7命题立意：考查介词用法。解析：byofform a habit of 养成一种的习惯，故byof。8命题立意：考查连词。解析：orandor前后是并列关系，不是选择关系。故orand。9命题立意：考查代词。解析：theirour根据从句的主语是we，应用our作environment的限定词。故their our。10命题立意：考查副词。解析：去掉more或moremuch根据more本身是比较级，可与多音节词一起构成比较级，但不可修饰比较级。故去掉more或moremuch。Pass

19、age 4(2015甘肃省部分普通高中第一次联考)In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But Chinas human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat

20、in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the pandas habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people li

21、ve. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas. 答案：In China, people and giant pandas been living together for thousands of y

22、ears. But Chinas human population has been growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most result of development has been that it ha

23、s divided the pandas habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas people live. The result is that the giant pandas connect with one another to mate and have babies.， to our relief, there is still some good ne

24、ws that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas. 文章大意：文章讲述了随着人类的发展，熊猫的栖息地越来越小，它们的生活和繁衍受到严重影响，但让人欣慰的是人们正在帮大熊猫建保护区。1命题立意：考查谓语动词的时态和语态。解析：hadhave此处指人们和大熊猫到“现在”为止已经生活了几千年了。所以谓语动词应选用现在完成时“have done”。2命题立意：考查形容词和副词。解析：greatgreatly该句意思为：中国人口已经大幅度的增长，此处greatly 修饰谓语动词“have been

25、 growing”，故用副词。3命题立意：考查谓语动词的单复数。解析：meanmeans根据上下文可知此处应为一般现在时，又因该句主语为“it”，故用第三人称单数。4命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：live前加to此处为不定式作宾语补足语，force sb./sth. to do sth.，迫使某人或某物做某事，是固定用法。5命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：damageddamagingdamaged被破坏了的，damaging有破坏性的，此处为分词作定语，修饰result，表示有破坏性的结果。6命题立意：考查名词的单复数。解析：pandapandaspanda前面由many修饰，故用复数。7

26、命题立意：考查连词。解析：because of去掉of because of后面接名词、动名词或what引导的从句，because后面接除what以外的词引导的从句。8命题立意：考查定语从句。解析：whichwhere或which前加in或live后加in此处先行词areas在后面的定语从句中作地点状语，故选用关系副词where或in which或在不及物动词live后加in。举一反三：1.I grew up in the small village where I was born. (where引导定语从句，先行词是village，且在从句中作地点状语)2I grew up in the

27、small village which I was born in.(which引导定语从句，先行词是village, 且在从句中作in的宾语)3I grew up where I was born.(where引导地点状语从句，且在从句中作地点状语)9命题立意：考查上下文语境。解析：cancant或can后加not分析上下文可知此处意为“结果就是大熊猫不能够与另外的配偶联系、不能够繁殖”。10命题立意：考查副词。解析：BesidesHowever上文在说不好的结果，但下文说“让人欣慰的是”，表转折。Passage 5(2015广西南宁市二模)I threw my magazines into

28、 a waste basket and decide to join in Malaysian life. Then everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day passed fast. I looked at my watch but was surprised that it was 300 pm. Soon the train pulled up at Butterworth. I looked at the people all arou

29、nd me. They all looked beautifully. When my uncle arrived at with a smile, I threw my arm around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this ago. He seemed surprising and then his weatherbeaten face warmed up with the huge smile. We walked arm in arm to her car. 答案： I threw my magazines into a

30、 waste basket and to join in Malaysian life. Then everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day passed fast. I looked at my watch was surprised that it was 300 pm. Soon the train pulled up at Butterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They a

31、ll looked . When my uncle arrived at with a smile, I threw my around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this . He seemed and then his weatherbeaten face warmed up with huge smile. We walked arm in arm to car. 1命题立意：考查时态用法。解析：decidedecided根据前文的threw说明应用一般过去时，故decidedecided。2命题立意：考查固定短语。解析：t

32、he first前加forfor the first time第一次，故the first前加for。 3命题立意：考查连词用法。解析：butand根据but前后分句是并列关系，故将but改为and。4命题立意：考查形容词用法。解析：beautifullybeautiful文中look是系动词，应用形容词，判断应将beautifully改为beautiful。5命题立意：考查介词用法。解析：arrived后的at去掉at为介词，没宾语，应省去介词。故去掉at。6命题立意：考查名词用法。解析：armarms根据下文arm应用复数形式，故arm改为arms。7命题立意：考查副词用法。解析：agob

33、eforeago应用在表示时间段的名词后，表示从现在算起的时间段之前；before可独立使用，也可用在时间段的名词后，表示从过去的时间算起的过去，故ago改为before。8命题立意：考查形容词用法。解析：surprisingsurprised根据前文应是感到吃惊的，故此处将surprising改为surprised。9命题立意：考查冠词用法。解析：theaa huge smile一个大大的微笑，故the改为a。10命题立意：考查代词用法。解析：herhis根据前文的his uncle和he判断此处应用his，故将her改为his。Passage 6(2015广西省桂林市、防城港市联合调考)D

34、ear Jerry，Im glad to receive your letter ask me what Id like to be in the future. To be honest, I had dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine. I hurt one of my leg one day, that made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more. Unluckily, I was able to leave my bed a month later thanks t

35、o a doctor, who was very friendly and carefully. He gave me the courage I needed to recover. Besides, while in hospital, I see many sick people. Since then Ive decided to be the doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in need my help. I believe my dream will be come turn one day if I s

36、tudy hard now.Yours，Luo Wei答案：Dear Jerry，Im glad to receive your letter me what Id like to be in the future. To be honest, I dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine. I hurt one of my one day, made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more. ， I was able to leave my bed a month later tha

37、nks to a doctor, who was very friendly and . He gave me the courage I needed to recover. Besides, while in hospital, I many sick people. Since then Ive decided to be doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in need my help. I believe my dream will be come turn one day if I study hard no

38、w.Yours，Luo Wei1命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：askasking根据句意以及语法，此处为your letter的后置定语，your letter与ask之间为主动关系，故应该用ask的现在分词形式作后置定语。2命题立意：考查动词的时态。解析：hadhave根据本句的时间状语since I was nine(从我九岁起一直到现在)可知，此处应该用现在完成时。3命题立意：考查名词的数。解析：leglegs“one of可数名词的复数形式”为固定句型，表示“中的一个”。4命题立意：考查非限制性定语从句。解析：thatwhich根据句意以及语法，此处指代的是前面的整个句子所述的事实，

39、在逗号后面的句子中作主语，故应该用关系代词which来引导非限制性定语从句。5. 命题立意：考查副词。解析：UnluckilyLuckily根据句意，下面陈述的是朝着好的方向发展的事实，故应该用表示积极意义的评价性副词Luckily来修饰后面的整个句子，表示“幸运的是”。6命题立意：考查形容词。解析：carefullycareful根据与之并列的形容词friendly可以推知，此处应该用形容词作表语，表示“细心的”。7命题立意：考查动词的时态。解析：seesaw根据其时间状语while in hospital(在医院期间)可知，此处叙述的是过去的事实，故应该用一般过去时。8命题立意：考查冠词。

40、解析：thea根据句意，此处表示“一名医生”，应该用不定冠词a。9命题立意：考查固定搭配。解析：need后面加ofin need of为固定搭配，表示“需要”。10命题立意：考查短语动词。解析：come前面的be去掉come true为不及物动词词组，没有被动语态。Passage 7(2015海南省5月模拟)Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I cant give you the exactly definition of it, but Im sure if you love and help others, youll g

41、et it.Ill never forget an old lady. She lives a small house alone. Its said that her husband and her son were died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helped others with a smile. Wherever it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several

42、children living nearby. I am one of those. I often remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is lucky, but I think she is a happy person. Her life full of laughter and love.答案：Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I cant give you the definition of it, but Im

43、 sure if you love and help others, youll get it.Ill never forget an old lady. She lives a small house alone. Its said that her husband and her son were或in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often others with a smile. it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She

44、 looks after several children living nearby. I am one of . I often remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is ， but I think she is a happy person. Her life full of laughter and love.1命题立意：考查固定短语。解析：去掉on the earth中的the根据on earth究竟in the world。故on the earth去掉the。2命题立意：考查

45、形容词。解析：exactlyexact根据definition是名词，需要形容词修饰。故exactlyexact。3命题立意：考查介词。解析：lives后加in根据lives是不及物动词，应加介词in。4命题立意：考查语态。解析：were died 去掉were或者改成were killed根据die是不及物动词，不能用被动语态，kill是及物动词，可用被动语态。故were died 去掉were或者改成were killed。5命题立意：考查时态。解析：helpedhelps根据上下文的时态，应用一般现在时，主语是the old lady。故helpedhelps。6命题立意：考查连词。解析

46、：WhereverWhenever根据从句的谓语动词snow判断应是“无论何时”，故WhereverWhenever。7命题立意：考查代词。解析：thosethem根据前文的children。故thosethem。8命题立意：考查介词。解析：去掉about根据短语tell sb. a story给某人讲故事。故去掉about。9命题立意：考查形容词。解析：luckyunlucky根据前文是不幸的。故luckyunlucky。10命题立意：考查系动词。解析：full前加is根据full of laughter判断需要系动词。Passage 8(2015河北衡水中学测试)Alexander was

47、 a military genius or great explorer. But he also had a great ambition. He wanted to rule a country that people couldlive in peace with one another. From 330 to 327 BC. , Alexander led his soldier east, through Afghanistan and into Central Asia. As he travel, he built more cities. He ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here. In 326 BC. Alexander turned south, into India. But by now his men were tired and weak. They were far home in an unkn