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1、2016高考英语书面表达集训（八）【高阶特练】第三部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 按照题目要求或提示来完成下列表述。【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面

2、将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。一、复习建议（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。（二）注重平时的练笔。近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排

3、、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝 2008年奥运会申办、举办成功等。对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。（三）明确写作方向。从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。例如： 书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，

4、这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。（四）注意平时的词汇积累。针对考生平时练习时出现的没词可用，写了不知是否正确等情况，建议考生们采用听、读、写相结合的办法，增加语言输入，扩大存储量。高三年级不可避免地要进行大量的听和读的练习，在做完听力和阅读理解后，可以停下来，用一点时间有意识地增加针对写作的语言输入，比如将听过或读过的表达方式回忆一下并记住，或者将有用的短语标出来，记在笔记本上，以备事后记忆之用。注意选取的资料应与考生自己的写作水平相近，还要提高记忆的准确性。二、解题技巧高考英语书面表达题解题应遵循五步骤的原则进行。2015年普通高

5、等学校招生全国统一考试大纲英语中对写作这样要求：“要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能(1)准确使用语法和词汇。(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。如何写好一篇作文分5个步骤（一）仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。（二）根据要点，遣词造句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用

6、法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。（三）确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，

7、besides(并且)、whats more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ whats worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。But, however, otherwise, though, despite, in spite of.(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the

8、same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of.for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。（四）句式丰富，避免重词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也

9、要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，本人认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)、适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，这些都是有效的途径。比如：When he arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail. Having arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(使用了介词+动名词和现在分词短语，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrive

10、d in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I wont believe what he says.(一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe it.(让步状从句，高级)。（五）认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是高考英语作文网上进行阅卷以来，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁和美观，为争取高分作文做好铺垫。三、修正小误1、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点2、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多3 句子结构错误 双

11、谓语现象句子结构混乱 4 动词使用错误 时态错误语态错误滥用be动词 5 汉语式英语 6. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误 7. 名词单复数错误 8、词义模糊，用词不够准确9、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接. 10、逻辑错误，如：because与so或者although与but等同时出现在同一个句子里。【考点精练】 Test 1假设你是李华，一名高三学生，在网络上看到一所国外大学的招生信息 (admission information), 该大学对中国学生开设30多个专业，你对此非常感兴趣,打算用英语撰写一份个人申请，主要内容包括：1. 想申请的专业；2. 个人优势；3. 进入大学后的设想。注意：

12、1. 词数：100左右； 2. 书信格式已给出；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam, Yours Sincerely, Li Hua Test 2假定你是2015年第九届中国郑开国际马拉松赛的一名志愿者李华，请根据下列表格内容用英语写一篇日记。内容要点：举办日期2015年3月29日开始时间8:30 A.M大赛地点郑开大道参赛人数49.000具体任务搬运物资搭建帐篷清扫街道送水你作为一名志愿者的感悟注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。Sunday, March.29 Fine It is March 2

13、9，2015 and the ninth Zhengkai International Marathon 2015 has been held today._Test 3假如你是校学生会主席李华，学校安排你下周末作为导游带领外籍教师Mr.Smith进行一次近郊游。请你用英语给Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容： 1自我介绍； 2出游的时间、目的地等信息； 3需要提前做的准备工作。 要求：1词数100左右； 2为使行文连贯，可根据内容要点适当增加细节。Dear Mr. Smith,_ Yours sincerely, Li HuaTest 4假如你是李华，你在美国的朋友Mandy给你写

14、了一封信征求意见。请根据这封信的内容给他回一封信。Hi Li Hua, As an ordinary middle school student, I plan to study abroad some day, but when is the properer time, before or after graduation from college? And what should I prepare before I go abroad? Best wishes. Mandy注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。Test 5如今随着

15、智能手机和电子设备的普及，“低头族” 现象兴起。人们沉溺于手机等电子设备，因而忽略了自己和他人的沟通交流，甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机不和长辈聊天, 老人感到失落万分。请根据下图写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：1描述图画内容；2对图中现象加以分析；3针对这个现象提出建议。注意： 1. 词数100词左右；2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。Test 6假如你是李华，今年暑假你将参加“英国名校两周游”夏令营，计划7月份在London逗留三天（7月16-18日），住在Wellington Hotel。你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国Birmingham的学生Charlie见面，请你给他写一封Email。主要

16、内容包括：1. 问候；2. 简单介绍在伦敦的行程；3. 希望见面并商量见面的时间和地点。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Charlie,How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit. _Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaTest 7当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要

17、点写一篇英语短文：1. 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美3.我的看法及理由注意：1.词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。 2.参考词汇：original work 或 book in the original (原著) Film or book, which do you prefer?Test 8 假设你叫李华, 你将作为高三毕业生代表, 根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文做一简短的告别演讲: 1. 对三年高中生活的怀念; 2. 对老师的感谢; 3. 对母校的祝福。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已经给出，不

18、计入总词数。 My dear teachers and fellow students, Test 9假如你是某中学高三学生，学生会的干部，请你根据以下内容写一封倡议书给某英语报社信，叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表白己的看法。 倡议书为了更好地利学习资枓，我们倡议髙三同学在毕业之际捐出用过的书报杂志等学习资料赠送给低年级的冋学。活动意义：增进友爱，鼓励节约，环护保境.深受师生赞扬和支持活动地点：校图书馆-楼活动时间：6月1121日学生会4 月 29 日注意：词数不少于100;可适当加入细节，使行文连贯：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：增进promoteDear schoolmates,Im

19、 a student of Senior Three in a high school ._Students UnionSpril 29thTest 10 假定你叫李华，是一名高三学生。在一位名叫Worried的学生的博客上，你看到如下内容：I am a high school student in Senior 3. My parents always expect me to go to a key university, which makes me very sad. Though I work hard, I find it difficult to live up to their

20、 expectations. What should I do?请根据以上博客的内容，给这位学生进行回复。内容要点如下：表示对父母的理解；陈述自己的看法；提出几点建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Worried,I am Li Hua, an eighteen-year-old high school student. _ _ Yours truly, Li HuaTest 11假定你是李华，将要在2015年组织佛罗里达冬令营，请你给Joe回一封电子邮件，介绍冬令营的相关情况。内容主要包括：1. 时间

21、：2015年1月27日至2月13日；2. 活动内容（英语课程，与接待家庭度周末，参观迪士尼乐园等）3. 预期收获（语言，文化等）注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：佛罗里达冬令营Florida Winter Camp; 迪士尼乐园 Disneyland Dear Joe, _ Yours truly, Li Hua Test 12学校将为2015届学生举行毕业典礼，邀请你作为学生代表发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点如下：1.表达感谢；2.简述对学校生活的感受；3展望未来。注意：1.词数 100字左右；2. 不要

22、逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不能出现自己的真实信息。Dearteachersandschoolmates，Goodmorning! Itisagreathonorformetodeliveragraduationspeechonbehalfofmyclassmates. Test 13假定你是李华，你所喜爱的实验报创刊十一周年（总100期）之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编Mr. Wang写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点：1) 国内外教育新闻 2) 学习经验交流及名人成功故事 3) 学生习作3提出建议

23、注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr Wang, Congratulations on the 11th anniversary of Experimental Newspaper! Test 14假如你是李华，你向美国笔友Jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况，大致内容介绍：1、活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周二 的三点钟以后。2、通过参加活动，你们的收获。3、你的感受。注意：1、词数不少于100；2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Jack, Thank you for you

24、r letter asking about the club activities in our school.Test 15假设你是铁人中学的李华，将参加主题为“Please ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.目前汽车带来问题。2.骑自行车的益处。Good morning, everyone,Thank you!【高阶特练】2016高考英语-书面表达集训（八）答案Test 1Dear Sir or Madam,I have recently noticed the admission information of your university

25、on the Internet. Im writing to apply for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.For one thing, I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university. For another, I have been the monitor during my school years, which has promoted my organi

26、zing ability. Having organized a few school activities successfully, Im determined to be a manager as my dream job. Therefore, my plan is to join the Students Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to learn some advanced management experience.Im looking forward to hearing from yo

27、u soon. Yours Sincerely, Li HuaTest 2Sunday, March. 29 Fine It is March 29，2015 and the ninth Zhengkai International Marathon 2015 has been held today. I am lucky to witness the event as a volunteer for it. The race began at 8:30 a.m. and about 49.000 runners took part in it. In the early morning, I

28、 and other volunteers gathered at the starting point, ready to work. We carried supplies, set up tents and cleaned the streets. When the runners ran along Zhengkai Avenue, we volunteers were busy serving the bottle water. In addition, we tried our best to help keep order. What a tiring but rewarding

29、 day! I have found happiness in the process of helping others.Test 3Dear Mr. Smith, It is my honor to introduce myself to you. Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of our school. And I was asked to act as a tourist guide for you on next weekend. The schedule and details are as follows： Well have

30、 a wonderful and well-organized trip, not far from the downtown. Since you are new here, you will be amazed at the scenery and surroundings there. In terms of the meeting time, 8 oclock on the morning of Saturday will be fine. And at that time, I will be waiting for you at the school gate. Remember

31、not to take too many things. Just a bottle of water, some pieces of bread or other kinds of food, a cap or a pair of sunglasses will be enough. Also, youd better wear a pair of sports shoes. Looking forward to seeing you. I believe well have a good day. Yours Sincerely Li HuaTest 4Dear Mandy, I am d

32、elighted to receive your letter. And I am willing to share my opinions with you about the time to study abroad. My advice is staying in the USA to get your bachelors degree and then going abroad for your masters, because this means you will be a little older and more able to appreciate the differenc

33、es between life in your country and life overseas. The older you are, the greater your experience is, the more you will understand the differences and be able to form opinions about what youre seeing.You should concentrate on your language if you hope to go to a non-English-speaking country and ther

34、e are no specific preparations except to have spirit of adventure and to be ready for new experiences.Best wishes. Li Hua Test 5As can be seen from the picture，a big family get together to have a big dinner. But when they sit down to table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellph

35、ones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worse still, addition to cellphones might

36、 also leads to teenagers poor performance at school, which adds to elders worries. As far as Im concerned, its necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.Test 6D

37、ear Charlie,How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit. Hows everything going with you and your family? My parents and I miss you very much. This summer vocation, I will join in a two-week camp to visit some of the famous universities in the UK. Its scheduled that we will stay i

38、n London from July 16th to 18th. Were planning to have a tour of London on the first two days, when well visit some popular tourist attractions such as the Tower of London, Westminster Abby and Buckingham Palace, etc. I want to see you very much. I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon o

39、f July 18th at Wellington Hotel, where well be staying. We wont have any planned activities then. Please let me know if it is convenient for you.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaTest 7Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is tha

40、t it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a si