“读后续写”（2016年浙江卷真题）讲解课件- 高三英语二轮复习.pptx

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1、县长在全县审计工作会议上的发言_1县长在全县审计工作会议上的讲话同志们:县委、县政府决定召开审计工作会议,主要目的是进一步提高对审计工作的认识,把我们各部门、各单位、各街镇的思想统一到县委、县政府的要求上来,高度重视审计工作,主动配合审计工作,确保我们有限的财政资金能够用好,用出成效。这次会议的主要任务是总结近年来全县审计工作,安排部署今年审计工作任务。这次会议非常重要,在央要求转变工作作风,尽量压缩会议的大背景下,我们其他方面的业务会议都进行了认真整合、压缩、合并,就审计工作专门召开一次会议,这可见县委、县政府对审计工作的高度重视。刚才云生同志代表县委、县政府对审计工作作了认真的回顾总结,同

2、时也安排了今年的审计工作任务,应该说云生同志的讲话不仅总结了我们这些年的审计工作,肯定了审计工作取得的成效、发挥的作用,同时实事求是地对我们这些年来审计部门在审计工作发现的问题进行了认真的梳理总结,对大家作了一些通报,希望全县各部门、各单位、各镇街以及学校、医院等单位,一定要认真贯彻好本次会议精神,回去以后要结合本单位工作实际,认真进行总结,认真进行整改。下面,我再讲四点意见:一、充分肯定,读后续写的具体要求,给文： 350词以内，(多为记叙文) 有段落开头语(各一句) 要求： 接续原文（150词左右), 故事合理、完整，衔接度高,2,读后续写的高分攻略,评分标准,第五档：21分-25分第四档

3、：16分-20分第三档：11分-15分第二档：6分-10分第一档：1分-5分,续写扣分理由,一、书写潦草，卷面涂改；二、上下文的连贯性差；三、错词错句多，好词好句少；四、没有丰富和生动的细节推动情节的发展；五、与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度差六、无逻辑性，故事主题跑偏。,获得高分的写作技巧,Tip 1: 故事要围绕着主要人物展开。,Tip 2: 详细刻画角色及其情感。,Tip 4: 使用恰当的修饰词以使描写更加生动。,Tip 3: 使用恰当的衔接词以使故事更有连贯性。,Tip 5: 做到首尾呼应以使故事更加有条理。,Tip 6: 确保第二段和第一段的衔接有逻辑。,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进

4、行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。(2016年10月浙江高考试题) One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said t

5、o Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned,示例,around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mo

6、untain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop

7、for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could,hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a

8、 stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard

9、 a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右

10、；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _ Paragraph 2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _,课前检测：,1. On _(see) me, he gave such a start of surprise that he dropped all the things in his hand.2. He w

11、as so surprised _he stood there _ his mouth open.3. Maybe _ (ashame) of what he had done, he was about to turn away _ I seized his arm quickly.4. I stared_ him for several seconds and broke the silence, _(say) “Roy, trust me. I am willing to help you.” 5. _ (regret) what he had done, he couldnt hold

12、 back his tears, bent down and burst out _(cry) with his head buried in his hands.,seeing,that,with,ashamed,when,at,saying,Having regretted,crying,6. _ (feel) a sense of relief, Roy cant wait _ (apologize) to our teacher for his behavior.7. In front of the office, he hesitated _ (knock) at the door.

13、8. _(encourage) by me, he eventually made it.9. Roy pulled out the money and handed it to the teacher, _ (apologize) for his behavior.10. Once your outgoing personality left a deep impression _ us. 11. You are blessed _ such a good friend.12. _(step)out of the office, we felt a sense of relief with

14、the sun _ (shine) down over us.,Feeling,to apologize,to knock,Encouraged,apologizing,on,with,Stepping,shining,Read,步骤？,Think,Write,2) organization,3) language,关键词,开头语,Predict the plot properly,2) Feelings情感,3) Surroundings环境,Get the main idea,读线索5W1H,Jane was lost,they quarreled,Jane, Tom,one weeken

15、d in July,in the forest,main idea?,On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.,In what order is the material developed?,读结构,With no path to follow, Janewith复合结构, she turned around, hoping to 分词作状语Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry

16、 and thirsty. 形容词作状语If only she had not left her mobile phone 固定句式Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 倒装,读语言,Beginning,Climax,Ending,quarrel,angry,saw helicopters,was rescued?,process,lost,confused，tired,构思,Para. 1: Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark. 续写部分: 简当时的感受？ 简是如何过夜的？ 简睡着了吗？Par

17、a. 2: ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. 续写部分：简获救了吗？ 谁救了简？ 怎么救的？ 她当时的感受？,A: actions 动作的丰富性F: feelings 情感表达的多样性S: surroundings 恰当运用环境描写,Write,第五档续写例文,But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. After walking a long distance aga

18、in, it occurred to her that she had a box of matches with her. She was wild with joy and used them to burn some branches so that she could get some warmth. Staring at the jumping fire, Jane thought of all the things that she and Tom had experienced together. Only in this way could Jane feel better a

19、nd fall asleep.,It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out. At noon, to her great joy, she finally caught sight of a wide water surface at a distance. It was the lake! Also she spotted a crew of policemen seeking along the bank! It seemed that they also spotted her because they were moving towards her! It was Tom who called the police. Finally, they led her to her husband. And the minute they met, they hugged together firmly as if they would never separate again. They got home and have led a happy life ever since.,