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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上2018东城一模高三英语写作一学生优秀范文优秀作文1：Dear Jim, Its good to hear from you! Knowing that you are facing some difficulties through Chinese learning, Im more than happy to give you some advice. Truly, Chinese is one the most difficult languages in the world. Here are some reasons. First, Chinese is a

2、 kind of pictography, which means it is a kind of abstract drawing, so it is hard for you to know the exact pronunciation of a single character. Besides, compared with 26 letters in English, there are countless characters in Chinese, and each has at least one meaning. This also place great difficult

3、y for learners. Well, we still have some solutions. You need to read and speak more. Try some Chinese newspapers as well as Chinese story books for kids. Read aloud and try to remember those words in mind. By the way, its my pleasure to be your partner to practice speaking Chinese. Youll find Chines

4、e more and more interesting with each passing day, believe me. I wish you all the best in your Chinese learning as well as each aspect in your life. Im very glad that you decided to learn Chinese. Looking forward to your reply! （202）Yours,Li Hua 点评：语言丰富优美，读起来非常顺畅自然，有别于被模式固化了的学生，是有外国生活经历和长期阅读英文原版资料的学

5、生可以学习的模范。优秀作文2：Dear Jim, I am so delighted to receive your letter and learn that you have decided to study Chinese. It seems that you have found out learning Chinese isnt so easy, but please dont give up. Your troubles can be perfectly explained and effectively dealt with. For a westerner, Chinese i

6、s quite difficult to learn for the following reasons. First, unlike English and other European languages with a Latin and German root. Chinese characters are not constructed from letters. The Chinese character tends to mimic the posture of an object and show its pronunciation at the same time, so it

7、 will be quite difficult for a westerner to grasp the essence of this language. Secondly, Chinese sentences are quite different from English ones. Chinese sentences possess a unique order of words which very different from English. Additionally, it is widely recognized that for tones in spoken Chine

8、se is a challenge too. I believe there are some ways to learn Chinese better and gain a deeper understanding of the language. You should try to read as many Chinese books as possible for only through original texts can you gradually understand the diction and grammar of Chinese. Besides, chatting in

9、 Chinese regularly is a highly effective way to improve you pronunciation and tone as well gain the ability to speak Chinese fluently. Learning a language is for communication, so chatting with a Chinese friend is the best way to master the Chinese language. I understand learning Chinese will not be

10、 an easy process, but it you still have questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. I wish you the best in Chinese learning. （276）Yours, Li Hua 点评： 词汇量丰富，语言驾驭力很强，逻辑也很缜密，思维有深度，是优秀学生可以参照的范例。优秀作文3：Dear Jim, Im very glad to hear from you and its my honor that you believe in me and ask for my suggesti

11、ons about learning Chinese when you meet some difficulties. Its quite normal for you to feel it difficult to learn Chinese. As you know, the Chinese culture is different from English culture greatly so that the way Chinese and English think and express opinions has less in common. And there is a hug

12、e vocabulary of Chinese which is a challenge for everyone to remember. So you neednt worry about not being able to learn Chinese well. There are some useful ways in my opinion to improve your Chinese study. To begin with, you can read some Chinese books with simple vocabulary and watch some Chinese

13、movies, TV programmes etc. That will help you get used to the Chinese expression and have some deeper insight of our culture. Whats more, try to practice Chinese as much as possible, through which you can master Chinese more smoothly. Writing and chatting in Chinese are both useful ways. I hope what

14、 I said is of help to you. May you succeed in learning Chinese. Im looking forward to you good news. （209）Yours, Li Hua 点评：交际充分，语言驾驭力较强，逻辑缜密严谨，有思维深度，是中上等学生可以参考的范例。优秀作文4：Dear Jim, Im sorry to hear that you find it hard to study Chinese, so Im writing to help you deal with your problems. As is known t

15、o all, Chinese is thought to be the most complicated language in the world. Not only does its pronunciation sound strange to foreign friends, but also the spelling is totally different from English words. To make your study easier, my suggestions are as follows. It will be useful to recite Chinese w

16、ords and the spelling regularly, because learning a kind of language is based on memorizing vocabulary. Also, its much wiser for you to listen to Chinese tapes and repeat some after it. In this way, you can gradually develop your oral Chinese and get to know the charm of it. I sincerely hope that yo

17、u can make progress and master Chinese some day. Im looking forward to hearing your good new. （155）Yours, Li Hua 点评：交际得体，语言较丰富，逻辑清晰，完全完成试题任务，是中等学生可以参考的范例。东城一模情景文好文:1. 前2篇均为一类文上，其共同特点是考生的语言能力强，思维活跃，所以反映到写作中可以看文章的语言和内容都很丰富，行文流畅，前后照应，逻辑性强，有很强的可读性。2. 第3篇作文为一类文下，考生中规中矩，语言能力比较强，行文流畅，但稍显啰嗦。 3. 第4篇作文为二类文上，虽

18、然语言没有那么丰富，但是很顺畅，内容也很顺畅自然，不啰嗦，供中等学生参考使用。4. 一二类文也不是没有错误的作文，我们采集的是考生的原始写作，有明显的错误的地方，已经用红色标出，还有些可以接受的小错没有标出，老师们在给学生使用时需要注意一下。No 1. I was really lucky to have a chance to participate in the knowledge competition of Silk Road holding by our school last week, which will last in my memory forever.The poster

19、 put up on the school notice board informed all of us about the news of the knowledge competition of Silk Road. Knowing that everyone could take park in, I was overwhelmed with excitement since I was a super fan of Chinese history. I got myself well-prepared before the competition and carefully wrot

20、e down the answers on the paper of the first round. Two days later the good news came that I successfully passed and got the admission to the final. From then on, my partner and I began to equip ourselves with more knowledge. Finally came the final. We, on behalf of Class 1, were sitting on the stag

21、e, ready to compete with other three groups. The silence filled the air, which drew me nervous. However, as soon as the host started to present the questions, I forgot all about “win or lose”. What only concerned me was to get the chance and give the correct answer. My quick actions won our group a

22、lot of chances and our fluent answers won applause now and then. Finally our hard work paid off for we got the first prize. Holding the cup and receiving the interview from the school channel, I just couldnt be happier.What the prize brought was more than a few happy hours. More importantly I felt p

23、roud of our shinning history of Silk Road. Everyone should take the responsibility to learn our history and pass down to generations.(273 words)No. 2Last week, I took part in the Silk Road Knowledge Competition held by our school, which was an impressive experience.Hardly had the announcement been p

24、ut up on the notice board when a large crowd of students gathered, discussing excitedly. I signned up at once. An quiz was taken as the first round of competition, after which I was chosen due to my wide range of knowledge. The final was held at the school auditorium with two students representing e

25、ach class, competing against each other. As the question became harder, more competitors were eliminated and the atmosphere became gripping. When the host asked the last question, everyone else was puzzled while I spoke out the answer in full confidence, receiving thundering applause from the audien

26、ce. My outstanding performence won me the first prize. While being interviewed by the campus TV program, I expressed my heartfelt thank to those backing me up during preparation and called on others to join it next year.What an unforgettable competition! It really inginated my passion for our fabulo

27、us culture.(175 words)No. 3On Monday morning, I was walking to my classroom in the school. When a notice caught my attention. The notice was about the “Silk Road Knowledge Competition”, which aroused my interest and urged me to take part in it. During the class that day, we had the first basic test

28、for the “Silk Road Knowledge Competition”. My classmates and I answered the questions attentively and hoped to attend the final competition. Shortly afterwards, the results of the test came out. To my surprise, I was one of the top two students in my class and would participate in the final competit

29、ion on behalf of my class. Without delay, we set out to make preparations for the knowledge competition.Finally came the big day. With everything prepared, my classmate and I took part in it. We listened to the hoster carefully and expressed our answers properly on the stage. Our brilliant performan

30、ce was rewarded by the thundering applause from the audience. Finally, we were awarded the first place and interviewed by the school TV program. I expressed by excitement and appreciation for the great chance during the interview. The “Silk Road Knowledge Competition” was indeed worth an active part

31、icipation.This was a meaningful experience for me, because it not only broadened my horizon about the ancient Silk Road, but also enriched my school experience. Through the competition, I felt proud of my country more than ever before!(236 words)No. 4Last Monday, I was walking to school when suddenl

32、y a notice on the bulletin board caught my eye. Driven by curiosity, I drew closer. It was a notice that informed us there would be a competition about the Silk Road on campus. I was intrigued in it and decided to make full preparations for it. I browsed the Internet and found information about the

33、Silk Road.Then came the first competition. All the students answered the questions on the paper. I wrote down my answers quickly and finished all the questions. After several days, my head teacher told me that I, along with one of my classmates, would participate in the final competition on behalf o

34、f our class. We made preparations against the clock and built up our confidence as days passed by. Finally came the day when the final competition was held. My classmate and I answered each question quickly and precisely. We finally won the first prize.After the competition, I was interviewed. I told them that it was a meaningful experience for me, from which I learned more about the Silk Road and splendid culture.(188 words)专心-专注-专业