九年级英语中考作文话题写作—手机课件.pptx

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1、中考复习作文,手机,添加标题,单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。,添加标题,单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。,添加标题,单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。,添加标题,单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。,目前，中学生依赖手机已成为一种普遍现象，甚至会带手机上学。在一次英语课上同学们就此问题进行了讨论。请你根据下面的提示以My opinion on using the mobile phones写一篇发言稿， 阐述自己的看法。,写作要求：1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3. 文中不能出现任何

2、真实的人名，校名等信息。 4. 词数100左右。,提示：affect影响search for搜寻 properly合理地 as little as possible尽可能地少,写作五步法：,1. 审2. 构3. 列4. 连5. 美,文体_ 时态_ 人称_主题_,连字成句，连句成段，拓展成文。适当增加连接词语，丰富细节。,在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。,依据文章主题，构建文章框架。,依据提纲，列出要点。,文体：_ 人称：_ 时态：_主题：,审好题,应用文,第一人称或第三人称,一般现在时或进行时,Step1,如何正确看待手机,目前，中学生依赖手机已成为

3、一种普遍现象甚至会带手机上学。在一次英语课上同学们就此问题进行了讨论。请你根据下面的提示以My opinion on using the mobile phones写一篇发言稿， 阐述自己的看法。,Para1.,Para2.,表明自己的观点,主题：,构框架,Step2,依赖手机，甚至带手机进校园,手机两方面的影响。,Para3.,开篇:,正文：,总结：,目前，中学生依赖手机已成为一种普遍现象甚至会带手机上学。在一次英语课上同学们就此问题进行了讨论。请你根据下面的提示以My opinion on using the mobile phones写一篇发言稿， 阐述自己的看法。,My opinion

4、 on using mobile phones,1.学生非常依赖手机,2.甚至带手机进校园,depend on.a lot.very common to use.,even bring the phones to.make a difference to.be affecting.be changing.be different from.,第一段：开篇,Step3,列要点,目前，中学生依赖手机已成为一种普遍现象,甚至会带手机上学。在一次英语课上同学们就此问题进行了讨论。请你根据下面的提示以My opinion on using the mobile phones写一篇发言稿， 阐述自己的看法

5、。,影响生活学习,正文第二段,2.遇难时求助,ask .for help when.in troubleturn to . for help when . in trouble,1.查询信息,1. 做作业搜答案，对学习不好,2. 熬夜玩手机游戏，影响健康,look up / get / find the useful information,when. not think carefullybe not good for,stay up late to play gamesbe bad for.,communicate with. less and lessmake us have less

6、communitcations with.wont be good at getting on with.,手机的好处,手机的坏处,Step3,列要点,3. 与亲友沟通减少，不擅长相处,1.多关注学习,2.尽量少用手机，不带手机,pay more attention to .care about .be supposed to. should.,use the phones as little as possiblehad better not bring the phones to.,表明观点，深化主题结尾第三段:,Step3,列要点,Para2.,Para3.,Para1.,depend

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8、ormation,search for answers when.be not good for,stay up late to play gamesbe bad for.,have less communitcationswont be good at getting on with,2. use the phones as little as possible had better not bring the phones to.,1. The phones make a great difference to. affect .2. The phones help us to look

9、up. We can look up. So many students search for. stay up late to. are having less.3. We should. Were supposed to. We had better (not). Its . for us (not) to. Its best for us not to.,并列：and/ also让步：although/ though转折对比：however/ but/ while原因： becase/ since结果：so/ so that条件：if/ unless其他： as for whats mo

10、re moreover last but not least after all all in all/ in a word as we all know/ as you see normally,Step4,连成句 连成段 拓成文 连接词,连接词,人称主谓时态 中心句过渡句逻辑连词 段落逻辑词润色,1.字体2.句子结构3.语法4.单词拼写5.高分句型,纠错润色，美化文章,Step5,第五档（13-15分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误 （词汇拼写错误2个以内或语法错误1个）； 1.要点全第四档（10-12分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少 （词汇拼写错误4个以内或语法错误2个以内）；

11、 2.单词 第三档（7-9分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多 3.句型 （与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误6个以内或语法错误3个以内）第二档（4-6分）要点不全，语言可读性较差 4.语法（与要点提示内容相关的句子形式，有3-4个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）； 5.连接词第一档（0-3分）要点不全，语言无可读性 6.高分句型（与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。,My opinion on using the mobile phonesHello, everyone ! Nowadays _ _ _ _ _,纠错润色，美化文章,Groupwork,1

12、.要点2.单词3.句型4.语法5.连接词6.高分句型7.可适当发挥,My opinion on using mobile phones,Hello, everyone!Nowadays its very common for more and more middle school students to use mobile phones. Some of us even bring the phones to school. Without doubt, we can look up the useful information we need on the phone. And we ca

13、n also ask others for help when were in trouble. However, its not always good to use the mobiles so much. Sometimes, many students search for answers without thinking carefully when they do homework. Besides, lots of students often stay up late to play games on the phone. Its bad for health for sure

14、. Whats worse, the phones are making us have less communication with our family or friends. In fact, we should pay more attention to our study. Were supposed to use the mobile phones as little as possible. Last but not least, we had better not bring the phones to school. Thank you!,Homework,请把今天的作文整理在作文本上。,