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1、热点04 网购 网购无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：网购。【预测题目】（一）你喜欢网上购物吗？你对“网购”这一现象有何看法？请写一篇短文，从购物的时效性、安全性、商品的品种、质量、价格等方面说说“网购”相对于传统购物方式的优势与劣势。_【参考范文】With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Her

2、e consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is

3、 especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them pr

4、omptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on th

5、e Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.【解析】试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是网上购物的优缺点。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。

6、内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。考点：命题作文的写作点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。（二）“双11”电商销售旺季即将到来，伴随现如今已然成为时尚的“网购”热潮，越来起多的学生也进入到网购的群体当中，校学生会就网购这一热点问题作了问卷调查，观点如下:优点足不出户；节约时间，避免拥挤，劳累价格通常更便宜可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点只看到图片，看不到商品本身容易购买大量不大需要的东西，造成浪费注意：词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学

7、校名称及其他相关信息参考词汇：网购 shopping online 避免做某事 avoid doing sth. 商品 goodsWith the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online._【参考范文】With the development of the Internet, many students are used to shopping online. shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here

8、 consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is

9、especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them pro

10、mptly.However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the

11、Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中

12、适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的复合句为文章增色不少.如: People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.人们不必浪费了很多的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen o

13、n the computer.有时候，真正的货物可能与他们在计算机上看到的不一样。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.（一）假如你们班将在本周举行一次关于网络购物利弊的辩论赛。请你根据以下提示信息写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你对网购的看法。开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示：好处 网购能帮助我们节省时间，我们只要把我们的信息发送给卖方（seller）, 不久他们就会把东西送到我们的家，网购能帮助使我们的生活更加轻松。害处 有些卖家会通过欺骗我们来获取钱财，另外长时间上网购物对眼睛有害.建议 小心、安全地使用网络来购物Now it is p

14、opular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help _【参考范文】Now it is popular for young people to do shopping on the Internet. It can help make our life easier. If we want to buy something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the t

15、hings to us soon. It can help us save much time.However, the Internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. Some sellers may get money by cheating us. And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet. The Internet can change our lives for the bett

16、er, but we had better use it carefully and safely.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如do shopping，on the Internet，help make our life easier，want to do，send to help us save much time，do harm to，be bad for，spend much time doing shopping，the sea of clouds，a nice place to visit等。而If we want to bu

17、y something from the Internet, we can send our information to the seller and then the seller will send the things to us soon. / And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping on the Internet.等复杂条件状语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。（二）假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部

18、的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。写作要点：1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2介绍活动的情况：（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3说一说网上购书有什么好处。写作要求：1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4至少80词。Dear Angel,How are you doing? _Best wish

19、es!Yours,Cathy【参考范文】Dear Angel,How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to s

20、hare the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, th

21、ere are all kinds of books, so we neednt go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be go

22、ing to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand.on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引导非限制性定语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，

23、我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（三）现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的

24、焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4.网络支付不安全。 _【参考范文】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like beca

25、use the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects

26、 or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. Whats more, its not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物

27、，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。写作亮点：首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“.是开放的”也很准确，用了“be open”。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。连词的使用也是亮点，besides意为“除此之外”。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin h

28、as two sides.”，是个亮点。“Whats more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。（四）随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。注意：1. 所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；3. 词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词汇：网购:shopping on line, 避免做

29、某事:avoid doing sth, 商品:goods, 导致:causeWith the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. _【参考范文】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping on

30、line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are genera

31、lly lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all,

32、 I love shopping on line.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如With the development of the Internet，be used to doing，on line，in our daily life，join the group，avoid doing，be interested in，Every coin has two sides，on one hand，on the Internet，on the other hand，all in all等。而With the development of

33、the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line./ Shopping on line has many advantages. / On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.等多种非谓语动词结构和综合句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

34、所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。1. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.2. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.3. Shopping on line has many advantages. 4. Every coin has two s

35、ides. 5. Thats a waste of money.6. All in all, I love shopping on line.7. we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room8. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. 9. And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend

36、 much time doing shopping on the Internet.10. the Internet is not perfect because it may sometimes do harm to us. 11. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.12. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same