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1、专题模拟训练 短文改错 短文改错(一)A(2021·江西南昌市高三一模)Virtues are jewel of great price.I find honesty is most valuable virtue in my heart.And it is always accompany my growth.As a child, I was constantly told the story naming The Wolf Is Coming, which obviously has a lasting influence.Over time, Ive increasing r

2、ealized the importance of honesty and try to carry it out.Only then Im honest and reliable will I be trusted with others.Actually being honest, Ive found it more easier to make friends.The virtue of honesty will help me open the door to success of our career and life.【答案】Virtues are of great price.I

3、 find honesty is most valuable virtue in my heart.And it is always my growth.As a child, I was constantly told the story The Wolf Is Coming, which obviously has a lasting influence.Over time, Ive realized the importance of honesty and to carry it out.Only Im honest and reliable will I be trusted oth

4、ers.Actually being honest, Ive found it more easier to make friends.The virtue of honesty will help me open the door to success of career and life.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了诚实的重要性。1考查名词单复数。句意：美德是高价的珠宝。分析句子可知，文章第一句话jewel前用的是are，且jewel(宝石)是可数名词，因此使用复数形式jewels。故将jewel改为jewels。2考查固定搭配。句意：我发现诚实是我心中最宝贵的美德。形容词最高级前应

5、使用定冠词the。故在most前加the。3考查非谓语动词。句意：它一直陪伴着我的成长。分析句子可知，这里表示一直做某事，使用现在进行时态，且主语it与accompany之间为主动关系，因此使用现在分词形式。故将accompany改为accompanying。4考查非谓语动词。句意：小时候，我经常被告知一个名为狼来了的故事，这显然具有持久的影响力。分析句子可知，这里指名叫狼来了的故事，name意为命名，这里逻辑主语story与name之间为被动关系，因此使用过去分词作后置定语。故将naming改为named。5考查副词。句意：我越来越意识到诚实的重要性。分析句子可知，这里使用副词作状语修饰动词

6、realize。故将increasing改为increasingly。6考查动词时态。句意：随着时间的流逝，我越来越意识到诚实的重要性，并努力实现它。分析句子结构可知，and连接两个并列谓语动词，前一个是have realized，后一个是(have)tried, have承前省略了。故将try改为tried。7考查倒装句。句意：只有当我诚实可靠，别人才会信任我。分析句子可知，only if是固定搭配意为“只有”，位于句首，主句使用部分倒装。故将then改为if。8考查固定搭配和被动语态。句意：只有诚实守信，我才能得到他人的信任。分析句子可知，被别人信任应表述为be trusted by sb

7、.，使用被动语态形式。故将with改为by。9考查形容词比较级。句意：我发现结交朋友比较容易。分析句子可知，一般形容词的比较级在后面加er，这里“easier”译为“更容易”，不需要在前面加上more来修饰，大多数双音节、三音节以及三音节以上的形容词采用“more原级”构成比较级形式。故将more去掉。 10考查物主代词。句意：诚实的美德将帮助我打开事业和生活成功之门。分析句子可知，文章最后一句话中用的是“will help me”，则后面也要用“my career and life”与之对应。故将our改为my。B(2021·宁夏银川一中高三下学期第三次模拟)Last Monday

8、, I was informed to host the graduation ceremony with one of my classmate in our school hall.Faced such a great opportunity, we both feel excited.In order to make the ceremony successful, so we made enough preparations for it.They arranged the programmes, got familiar with the words and practised a

9、lot together.When I got on the stage, I was so nervous, beyond my control, which I made the mistake.What an embarrassed moment! Just then, I noticed my teacher smiling at me.Because his encouragement, I calmed down and everything worked out smooth as expected.【答案】Last Monday，I was informed to host t

10、he graduation ceremony with one of my in our school hall. such a great opportunity, we both excited.In order to make the ceremony successful, so we made enough preparations for it. arranged the programmes, got familiar with the words and practised a lot together.When I got on the stage, I was so ner

11、vous, beyond my control, I made mistake.What an moment! Just then, I noticed my teacher smiling at me.Because his encouragement, I calmed down and everything worked out as expected.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者和同学一起主持毕业典礼，结果作者因为太紧张犯了一个错误，多亏了老师的鼓励，作者冷静下来，让一切都顺利进行。1考查名词的数。句意：上周一，我被告知要和我的一位同学在学校礼堂主持毕业典礼。classmat

12、e为可数名词，此处为“one of复数名词”结构，classmate应用复数。故将classmate改为classmates。2考查非谓语动词。句意：面对这样一个非常好的机会，我们都感到很兴奋。分析句子结构可知face在句中应用非谓语动词形式，与逻辑主语we构成主动关系，故应用现在分词作状语。故将Faced改为Facing。3考查动词时态。句意：面对这样一个非常好的机会，我们都感到很兴奋。结合上文可知事情发生在上周一，应用一般过去时。故将feel改为felt。4考查句子结构。句意：为了使仪式顺利举行，我们做了充分的准备。此处为简单句，前后不存在因果关系，不需要连词so。故删除so。5考查代词人

13、称。句意：我们安排节目，熟悉单词，一起练习。此处指“我和我的同学”应用代词we。故将They改为We。6考查状语从句。句意：当我上了舞台，我太紧张了，无法控制，以至于我犯了一个错误。表示“如此以至于”引导结果状语从句应用so.that.。故将which改为that。7考查冠词。句意：当我上了舞台，我太紧张了，无法控制，所以我犯了一个错误。mistake此处为泛指，应用不定冠词，且mistake是发音以辅音音素开头的单词，应用a。故将the改为a。8考查形容词。句意：多么令人尴尬的时刻！修饰名词moment应用-ing结尾形容词embarrassing，表示“令人尴尬的”。故将embarrass

14、ed改为embarrassing。9考查固定短语。句意：因为他的鼓励，我冷静下来，一切都如预期的顺利进行。后跟名词encouragement作宾语，表示“因为”应用短语because of；because引导原因状语从句，后跟句子。故在Because后加上of。10考查副词。句意：因为他的鼓励，我冷静下来，一切都如预期的顺利进行。修饰动词短语work out应用副词smoothly，作状语。故将smooth改为smoothly。C(2021·安徽马鞍山市高三一模)Like many boys, my most favorite sport is basketball.To be ho

15、nest, I felt clumsy when I first learn to play it.I moved more slowly and I was not as strongly as others.But they didnt give up and spent my spare time practicing.Gradually, I made progresses.I cant forget how exciting I was before winning the first match.Thats how I fell in love basketball.Since t

16、hen, it has become a important part of my life.It strengthens my body but also helps me become confident.【答案】Like many boys, my most favorite sport is basketball.To be honest, I felt clumsy when I first to play it.I moved more slowly and I was not as as others.But didnt give up and spent my spare ti

17、me practicing.Gradually, I made .I cant forget how I was winning the first match.Thats how I fell in love basketball.Since then, it has become important part of my life.It strengthens my body also helps me become confident.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。“我”爱上了篮球，篮球增强了“我”的身体，让“我”更自信。1考查形容词。句意：像许多男孩一样，我最喜欢的运动是篮球。favorit

18、e意为“最喜爱的”本身为最高级，所以不需要再用most。故将favorite前的most去掉。2考查时态。句意：老实说，我第一次学篮球的时候觉得自己很笨。根据I felt clumsy可知，此处应用一般过去时。故将learn改为learned/learnt。3考查形容词。句意：我移动得较慢，也不像别人那么强壮。在was后作表语应用形容词。故将strongly改为strong。4考查人称代词。句意：但我没有放弃，把业余时间花在练习上。根据my spare time可知，此处是指“我”没有放弃。故将they改为I。5考查不可数名词。句意：渐渐地，我取得了进步。progress为不可数名词，所以没有

19、复数形式。故将progresses改为progress。6考查形容词。句意：我无法忘记赢得第一场比赛后我是多么的激动。根据“winning the first match”可知此处是指“我”很激动。故将exciting改为excited。7考查介词。句意：我无法忘记赢得第一场比赛后我是多么的激动。根据“I cant forget how excited I was”可知，此处是指在赢得第一场比赛后。故将before改为after。8考查固定搭配和介词。句意：我就是这样爱上篮球的。fall in love with.表示“爱上”，为固定搭配。故在basketball前加with。9考查不定冠词。

20、句意：从那时起，它就成了我生活中重要的一部分。part为可数名词，important的开头发音是元音，所以应用an。故将a改为an。10考查连词。句意：它增强了我的身体，也帮助我变得自信。“strengthens my body”和“helps me become confident”是并列关系。故将but改为and。D(2021·黑龙江齐齐哈尔市高三一模)I was riding my bike down to the corner shop in a Saturday morning when I attracted by a cute boy who was walking h

21、is dog.Suddenly my neighbour drives past and honked (按喇叭) at me.I was so surprising that I crashed into an old lady walk down the street! Lucky, the old lady wasnt hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in the hole.My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her.The wo

22、rst part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen.What an embarrassing but dangerous day!【答案】I was riding my bike down to the corner shop a Saturday morning when I attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog.Suddenly my neighbour past and honked(按喇叭) at me.I was so that I crashed into a

23、n old lady down the street! ， the old lady wasnt hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in hole.My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help .The worst part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen.What an embarrassing dangerous day!【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一个星期六的早晨，作

24、者骑着自行车去街角的商店，不小心摔倒的故事。1考查介词。句意：一个星期六的早晨，我骑着我的自行车去街角的商店，这时我被一个正在遛狗的可爱男孩吸引住了。表示在具体哪一天或怎么样的早上，使用介词on。故将in改为on。2考查动词时态及语态。句意：一个星期六的早晨，我骑着我的自行车去街角的商店，这时我被一个正在遛狗的可爱男孩吸引住了。根据语境可知，此处描述的是过去的事情，应用一般过去时，attract与主语I是被动关系，应用一般过去时的被动语态。故在I后加was。3考查动词时态。句意：突然，我的邻居开车经过，对着我按喇叭。根据语境可知，此处描述的是过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故将drives改为dr

25、ove。4考查形容词。句意：我太惊讶了，以至于撞到了一个在街上走的老太太身上。此处修饰主语I的感情，应用-ed结尾形容词。故将surprising改为surprised。5考查非谓语动词。句意：我太惊讶了，以至于撞到了一个在街上走的老太太身上。分析可知此处使用非谓语动词作后置定语，walk与an old lady是逻辑上的主谓关系，表示主动，应用现在分词形式，故将walk改为walking。6考查副词。句意：幸运的是，老太太没有受伤，但我从自行车上摔了下来，落在一个洞里。此处修饰后面整句话的内容，应用副词作状语，故将Lucky改为Luckily。7考查冠词。句意：幸运的是，老太太没有受伤，但我

26、从自行车上摔了下来，落在一个洞里。此处泛指“一个洞”，应用不定冠词，hole是发音以辅音音素开头的词，应用a。故将the改为a。8考查固定搭配。句意：我的邻居看到我摔倒了，就停下车冲出来帮我。see sb do sth.，看见某人做某事，fall前的to是多余的。故去掉to。9考查代词。句意：我的邻居看到我摔倒了，就停下车冲出来帮我。根据语境可知，此处指邻居冲过来帮“我”。故将her改为me。10考查连词。句意：多么尴尬又危险的一天啊！根据句意可知，此处不是转折关系，而是并列关系。故将but改为and。短文改错(二)A(2021·河南省郑州市高中毕业年级第二次质量预测)The oth

27、er day the members of our schools English club take the exchange students in their school to visit the City Cultural Center.During the visit, they appreciated large picture exhibition of our rich local culture and some unique form of our local arts.However, they watched a video about the achievement

28、s we had made in the past few centuries.The exchange students were all amazed at our color culture, saying that the visit was really a big cultural feast with them.The visit was a greatly success and they were quite satisfied with it.It was not only enriched the exchange students life, but also help

29、ed them learning more about Chinese culture.【答案】The other day the members of our schools English club the exchange students in school to visit the City Cultural Center.During the visit, they appreciated large picture exhibition of our rich local culture and some unique of our local arts.， they watch

30、ed a video about the achievements we had made in the past few centuries.The exchange students were all amazed at our culture, saying that the visit was really a big cultural feast them.The visit was a success and they were quite satisfied with it.It was not only enriched the exchange students life,

31、but also helped them more about Chinese culture.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了学校英语俱乐部举行的一次活动，丰富了交换生们的生活，弘扬了中国文化。1考查动词时态。句意：几天前，我们学校英语俱乐部的成员们带着我们学校的交换生参观了城市文化中心。根据时间状语The other day，并结合全文，本句谓语动词take应使用一般过去时态。故将take改为took。2考查代词。句意：几天前，我们学校英语俱乐部的成员们带着我们学校的交换生参观了城市文化中心。根据语境our schools English club可知，我们学校的英语俱乐部应该带领我们学

32、校的交换生活动才对。故将their改为our。3考查冠词。句意：参观期间，他们欣赏了一场展示我们丰富的地方文化和几种独特的地方艺术形式的大型图片展。该句名词picture exhibition为可数名词，英语俱乐部带领交换生参观了一场画展。故在large前添加不定冠词a。4考查名词。句意：参观期间，他们欣赏了一次我们丰富的地方文化和几种独特的地方艺术形式的大型图片展。本句中form是可数名词意为“形式”，根据前面形容词some及后面arts可知，应该是好几种艺术形式，form应使用复数形式。故将form改为forms。5考查副词。句意： 此外，他们还观看了一个关于我们在过去几个世纪所取得的成就

33、的视频。衔接副词however表示转折关系，而前面说带领交换生看了展览，后面说还看了一部视频，应该是递增关系。故将However改为Besides/Furthermore/Also/Moreover/Additionally。6考查形容词。句意：交换生们都惊叹于我们的丰富多彩的文化，表示这次参观对他们来说是一场巨大的文化盛宴。本句并不是想要表达“颜色文化”而是要表示“丰富多彩的文化”，应使用形容词作定语修饰名词culture。故将color改为colorful。7考查介词。句意：交换生们都惊叹于我们的丰富多彩的文化，表示这次参观对他们来说是一场巨大的文化盛宴。表示“对某人来说是一场盛宴”应使用

34、 a feast to/for sb.。故将with改为to 或for。8考查形容词。句意：这次参观非常成功，他们对此非常满意。修饰名词success，应使用形容词作定语。故将greatly改为great。9考查动词语态。句意：这不仅丰富了交换生的生活，也帮助他们更多地了解中国文化。本句主语It 指代这次参观活动，谓语动词enriched 与主语主动关系，应使用主动语态。故将was去掉。10考查非谓语动词。句意：这不仅丰富了交换生的生活，也帮助他们更多地了解中国文化。learn在句中作宾语补足语。表示“帮助某人做某事”应使用help sb.(to) do sth.。 故将learning改为l

35、earn。B(2021·宁夏石嘴山市高考二模)When I was small, my parents sent me to boarding school.I felt very homesick that I cried all the time.Lonely and depressing I failed to continue studying there and returned back home.Luckily, when I was in high school, I get popular among my classmate.Once, our school or

36、ganized a two-week stay in countryside.Again, I was away from home, without parents, without yummy food, even without a hot shower.To my happy, everybody was caring and everything made me feel at home.What great the change was! When the trip was over, my parents told me, “Youve already growing up！”

37、I know Ill be away and go after your dreams, but home will always remain in my heart.【答案】When I was small, my parents sent me to boarding school.I felt homesick that I cried all the time.Lonely and I failed to continue studying there and returned back home.Luckily, when I was in high school, I popul

38、ar among my .Once, our school organized a two-week stay in countryside.Again, I was away from home, without parents, without yummy food, even without a hot shower.To my ， everybody was caring and everything made me feel at home. great the change was! When the trip was over, my parents told me, “Youv

39、e already up！” I know Ill be away and go after dreams, but home will always remain in my heart.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者变得独立的一次经历，虽然会离开家去追求梦想，但家永远在心里。1考查固定搭配。句意：我非常想家，以至于我一直哭。此处是so.that.引导的结果状语从句，表示“如此以至于”。故将very改为so。2考查形容词。句意：感觉孤独又沮丧，我没能继续在那学习，回家了。此处是形容词作状语，主语为I，应用depressed，表示“感到沮丧的”，depressing表示“令人沮丧的”

40、，修饰物，不符合题意。故将depressing改为depressed。3考查副词。句意：感觉孤独又沮丧，我没能继续在那学习，回家了。return本身就有“返回”之意，back语义重复。故删除back。4考查时态。句意：幸运的是，读高中时，我在同学中间很受欢迎。结合when I was in high school可知，此处是讲述过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故将get改为got。5考查名词复数。句意：幸运的是，读高中时，我在同学中间很受欢迎。classmate是可数名词，结合语境可知，此处应用复数表泛指。故将classmate改为classmates。6考查冠词。句意：有一次，我们学校组织了

41、一次为期两周的乡村旅行。in the countryside在乡村，固定用法。故在countryside前加the。7考查名词。句意：让我高兴的是，每个人都很关心我，一切都让我感觉像在家里一样。此处应用名词作宾语，happiness是不可数名词，to my happiness令我高兴的是。故将happy改为happiness。8考查感叹句。句意：变化真大！how和what均可引导感叹句，how强调形容词。what强调名词，结合形容词great可知，此处是how引导的感叹句结构“how形容词/副词主语谓语”。故将What改为How。9考查时态。句意：旅行结束时，我的父母告诉我：“你已经长大了！”

42、此处是现在完成时，应用过去分词。故将growing改为grown。10考查代词。句意：我知道我会离开，去追求我的梦想，但是家永远留在我心中。结合语境可知，此处指“我的梦想”，应用形容词性物主代词my。故将your改为my。C(2021·河南省郑州市高中毕业年级第三次质量预测)This week I took part in a knowledge competition on the Silk Road was held in our school, which gave me a great sense for achievement.On Monday, a poster, wh

43、ich announced the competition, attracting my attention.I immediately sign up for it.A few days later, I participated the first round of the competition, a difficult written test.Since there were many competitors, I succeeded in entering the final.It was held this morning and on the stage in the hall

44、, I answered most of the questions accurate.Finally, I won out! When interviewing by the school TV station, I expressed my proud in our splendid culture.The competition not only broadened my knowledges but also encouraged me to learn more about our own culture in the future.【答案】This week I took part

45、 in a knowledge competition on the Silk Road 或 was held in our school, which gave me a great sense achievement.On Monday, a poster, which announced the competition, my attention.I immediately up for it.A few days later, I participated the first round of the competition, a difficult written test. the

46、re were many competitors, I succeeded in entering the final.It was held this morning and on the stage in the hall, I answered most of the questions .Finally, I won out! When by the school TV station, I expressed my in our splendid culture.The competition not only broadened my but also encouraged me

47、to learn more about our own culture in the future.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。作者参加了学校举办的关于丝绸之路的知识竞赛，这给了作者很大的成就感，拓宽了作者的知识，也鼓励作者在未来学习更多关于我们自己的文化。1考查非谓语动词或定语从句。句意：这周我参加了学校举办的关于丝绸之路的知识竞赛，这给了我很大的成就感。动词held和谓语动词took之间没有连词，所以可用非谓语动词或用定语从句。hold和逻辑主语competition构成被动关系，且动作已完成，所以可用过去分词作后置定语，因此可以去掉was。当用定语从句时，从句修饰competition，从句

48、中缺少主语，所以可用关系代词which或that。故去掉was或在was前加which/that。2考查介词和固定搭配。句意：这周我参加了学校举办的关于丝绸之路的知识竞赛，这给了我很大的成就感。a good sense of意为“感”，为固定搭配。故将for改为of。3考查时态。句意：星期一，一张宣布比赛的海报吸引了我的注意。此处动词attract是谓语动词，且表示过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故将attracting改为attracted。4考查时态。句意：我立即报名参加。此处表示过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故将sign改为signed。5考查固定搭配和介词。句意：几天后，我参加了第一轮比赛，那是一场困难的笔试。participate in意为“参加”，为固定搭配。故在participated后加in。6考查连词。句意：尽管有很多竞争者，我还是成功地进入了决赛。前文“there were many competitors”和后文“I succeeded in entering the final”构成转折关系，所以此处为让步状语从句。所以应用连词though，although或whil