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1、 2011 年上海高考英语作文解析联合国儿童基金会（United Nations International Childrens Emergency Fund, 简称 UNICEF），原名联合国国际儿童紧急救助基金会，于 1946 年 12 月 11日创建，其目的是满足战后欧洲与中国儿童的紧急需求。1950 年起，它的工作扩展到满足全球所有发展中国家儿童和母亲的长期需求。1953 年，UNICEF 成为联合国系统的永久成员，隶属联合国系统，受联合国大会的委托，致力于实现全球各国儿童的生存、发展、受保护和参与的权利。United Nations Childrens Fund was create

2、d by the United Nations General Assemblyon December 11, 1946, to provide emergency food and healthcare to children in countries that had been devastated by World War II. In 1953, UNICEF became a permanent part of the United Nations System and its nameNations International Childrens Emergency Fund bu

3、t it has continued to be known by the popular acronym based on this old name. Headquartered in New York City, UNICEF provides long-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to children and mothers indeveloping countries. It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Group and its E

4、xecutive Committee.UNICEF relies on contributions from governments and private donors andUNICEFs total income for 2006 was $2,781,000,000. Governments contributetwo thirds of then individuals contribute the rest through the National Committees. UNICEFsprograms emphasize developing community-level se

5、rvices to promoorganizations resources; private groups and some 6 milliote the health and well-being of children. UNICEF was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturias Award of Concord in 2006.二、2011 年上海高考英语作文申请信件一些经典句式本次 2011 年高考上海英语卷作文体裁是写一封申请信，这里给大家补充一些写申请信常用的句式（一）开头常用句式1. Y

6、our advertisement made me unable to wait to write this application for the postbecause I think I have the qualifications you are seeking.2. I am writing to apply for the advertised post of 1 3. I would like to apply for admission to your college.4. I would like to further my studies in department of

7、 your honored university.5. I would like to apply for the graduate program of in your university.6. I would like to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to studentsfrom other countries.7. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my studyin towards

8、a masters degree in your university.1. Looking forward to your favorable reply.2. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.3. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearingfrom you.4. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.5

9、. I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and could send mesome information about the scholarship.7. I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about the result of myapplication.8. If any scholarships are available, I would appreciate it if you would send me thenece

10、ssary application forms.9. I hope my academic background will meet your general entrance requirements forgraduate study.（三）其他常用句式2. I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summer from University.3. I major in and did some research work during my undergraduate years.4Since graduation

11、I have been working in which specializes in5. Now I am particularly interested in2 6. Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further detailsabout 7. I hope to further continue my research on 8. Enclosed 内部附有 please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript 成绩单.9.

12、 I am interested in your MA programs in , and wish to enter this program. Mybackground is as follows: （四）求职申请信常用句型1. In reply to your advertisement in ,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.2. With reference to your advertisement in for a / an ,I offer myself for the post.3. Please cons

13、ider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in .4. Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ,I wish to apply for the positionreferred to.5. In answer to your advertisement in for a ,I wish to tender my services.6. Your advertisement for a in has interested me. I feel I can fill th

14、at position.7.Shall you need an experienced for your next summer？9. I have been in the business for the last years, and worked as the director of12. Im years of age, female / male, and have had years experience in a limitedcompanys office13. I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can

15、 furnish references ifdesired.14. If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day andat any time you may appoint.15. Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.16. I trust that youll give this application your favorable consideration.17

16、. Should you give me a trial, Ill do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.3 若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申信中请包括：1 你个人基本情况2 你对申请项目具体设想3 项目经费使用情况这类作文在篇章布局上可以用最常见的“总-分-总”的框架。首先，总起全文，介绍自己并说明得知国际儿童基金将开展扶贫项目，非常想申请此项目。接着，第二段说明自己的想法和具体的方案。这里提供两个方案供大家参考：1

17、、买文具，日常生活用品。2、买教科书，或者号召同学募捐旧书，等等。最后，总结全文，表达自己非常热切地想申请到这个扶贫项目。望国际儿童基金能尽早回复。Hello! Im Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As Ivealways been interested in charity, Im writing to you in the hope that I could be giventhe 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in pove

18、rty-stricken areas.My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, Ill tryto purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new booksare usually expensive, Ill be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books.The second stage of my program is

19、to recruit high school students who have a strongdesire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relativeknowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly, we will set out for primary schools, whichare selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program.As to how to allocate t

20、he money, Id like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the restto pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!Yours,Li Ming4 1. be interested in 对感兴趣2. write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期（实现某愿望）3. carry out 履行4. poverty-stricken 贫困的5. poverty-relief 扶贫的6. giv

21、en 考虑到11. set out for 出发前往My name is Li Ming and Im a student from Mingqi High School. As Ihave grownup in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group has alwaysbeen my dream. Im writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launchedby the International Children Fund that I have heard about re

22、cently.In fact, there are still a large number of school-age children who have noaccess to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country. So, I sincerely hope that I can do something to make a difference by making full useof your program. If I can get the supporting money, first, I will u

23、se some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need. Since the fund is limited, I will try tobuy some second-hand reading materials for their free-time reading. Besides, Ihave to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the postal charges.Last but not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund

24、 to start thepoverty-relief program in our country and I will try my best to use the fund.Im looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Ming5 亮点词组句型归纳:1. lend a hand to 帮助2. apply for 申请3. the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目4. school-age children 学龄儿童5.

25、have no access to good education 接受不到良好的教育6. undeveloped region 欠发达地区7. make a difference 有影响09 年秋季高考是申请信，但依然以理由型议论文为考核重点（06-10 年考察的都是理由型的议论文）。Directions: write an English composition in 120-150 words according to theinstructions given below in Chinese.你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生（exchange student）征询为期两周的住

26、宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由（包括所具备的条件）。I have heard that our school is seeking for some home stays for exchangestudents who came from Canada. I guess my family meets the requirementsand I would love to apply for it.6 My house is close to the Central Business District. From my house, onecan enjoy a good bir

27、d view of our city, as it is on the 42nd floor. Whats more, I will arrange sightseeing for the exchange students to have a deepimpression of our cultural deposits 文化底蕴 and great development.My father works in a foreign-owned enterprise and my mother is an English teacher. In view of this, our family

28、 will have no trouble communicatingwith them. Besides, we even have a guest room in our house, which allows the exchange student to have his or her own space.In conclusion, I definitely have the confidence of being a wonderful hostto the exchange students. It is a great honor if I get this chance to

29、 show them the culture and modernization of our city and to leave them a deep impression of hospitality.I am writing to you in the hope of attaining the opportunity of accommodatingexchange students from Canada. I think my family can provide them with decentconditions and my reasons are as follows.F

30、irstly, my family lives in the downtown of Shanghai. Therefore, we have easyaccess to all kinds of transportations, such as subway, bus, and plane, thereby greatlyfacilitate the exchange students traveling.Secondly, my parents are local Shanghai residents, indicating that they canafford advantageous

31、 advices for foreign students on where to go and what to doduring their fortnight-stay, thus enabling them to make full use of their sojourn.Last but not least, my family is living in a large detached house, so we havesufficient vacant rooms for them, which I believe is most desired for tired travelerswhove gone all the way from Canada to China.Therefore, I am confident to provide the exchange students with comfortableliving conditions. And I would really appreciate if you could give me the chance.Thank you for reading my application.Yours,Li Hong7 8