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1、备战2021届高考英语二轮复习题型专练（新高考）31读后续写故事结尾策略在读后续写中，与开头一样，文章的结尾也是相当重要的。成功的结尾，能使读者更深入、更透彻地理解文章内容，进一步领会文章的主旨。精彩的结尾，能唤起读者的思考与共鸣，增强文章的感染力。一、结尾完形思维1：利用意外反转讽刺现实【典例赏析】项链（莫泊桑）小说以“项链”作为线索贯穿全文。主人公玛蒂尔德为了参加一个舞会，向朋友借了一条钻石项链。舞会上，她大出风头，却乐极生悲，无意中丢掉了项链。为了赔偿，她整整十年拼命劳作，省吃俭用，不顾一切地还债。当债务终于还清，她却得知这条项链原来是假的。十九世纪八十年代的法国，政府贪污风行，唯利是图

2、的道德观念影响到整个社会，很多人贪慕上流社会的生活。小说通过这样一个巧妙设置的故事，尖锐讽刺了那种虚荣心和追求享乐的思想，同时，对受尽生活愚弄的主人公又寄寓了深切的同情。结尾部分：Madame Forestier had halted.“You say you bought a diamond necklace to replace mine?”“Yes. You hadn't noticed it? They were very much alike.”And she smiled in proud and innocent happiness.Madame Forestier, d

3、eeply moved, took her two hands.“Oh, my poor Mathilde! But mine was imitation. It was worth at the very most five hundred francs!.”二、结尾完形思维2：利用意外反转传递深情厚谊【典例赏析】最后一片叶子（欧·亨利）最后一片叶子（The Last Leaf）是欧·亨利短篇小说作品中具有代表性的一篇，亦采用小人物作为主角，歌颂伟大的人性关怀。小说中，青年画家琼珊得了肺炎，她消极地认为当窗外墙上最后一片常春藤叶被吹落时，她的生命就会消逝。当楼下穷困而不得

4、志的老“画家”贝尔曼听到这件事后，冒着暴雨在墙上画出了一片永远不会凋落的常春藤叶，让琼珊重新燃起了生命的希望，自己却因此染病去世。作者通过描写萍水相逢的普通人之间的关怀，刻画了一个舍己为人的画家形象。在作者心中，美好心灵造就的作品才是不朽的杰作。结尾部分：“I have something to tell you, white mouse,” she said. “Mr. Behrman died of pneumonia today in the hospital. He was ill only two days. The janitor found him the morning of

5、the first day in his room downstairs helpless with pain. His shoes and clothing were wet through and icy cold. They couldn't imagine where he had been on such a dreadful night. And then they found a lantern, still lighted, and a ladder that had been dragged from its place, and some scattered bru

6、shes, and a palette with green and yellow colors mixed on it, and look out the window, dear, at the last ivy leaf on the wall. Didn't you wonder why it never fluttered or moved when the wind blew？ Ah, darling, it's Behrman's masterpiece he painted it there the night that the last leaf fe

7、ll.”“我有些话要告诉你，小丫头，”她说，“贝尔曼在医院里去世了。他害肺炎，只病了两天。头天早上，看门人在楼下的房间里发现他痛得要命。他的鞋子和衣服都湿透了，冰凉冰凉的。谁也想不出，在那样可怕的夜里，他去了什么地方。后来，他们找到了一盏还燃着的灯笼，一把从别处拖来的梯子，还有几支散落的画笔，一块调色板，上面和了绿色和黄色的颜料，还有看看窗外，亲爱的，看看墙上最后的一片叶子。你不是觉得纳闷，刮风的时候它为什么不飘不动吗？啊，亲爱的，那是贝尔曼的杰作那晚最后一片叶子掉落时，他画在了墙上。”三、结尾完形思维3：利用蕴藏哲理再现悲剧情节【典例赏析1】品质（约翰·高尔斯华绥）小说品质（Qua

8、lity）以现代机器工业对传统手工业的冲击为背景。作者以第一人称的视角，讲述了鞋匠盖斯勒兄弟在商业化大潮中仍然坚持自己的经营理念，用最好的皮料、最细致的手工打造完美皮靴的故事。盖斯勒兄弟一生都在制鞋，从不打广告，也不考虑能赚多少利润，却因为大公司对市场的侵蚀减少了生意，入不敷出，最终难以维持生计直至被饿死。小说的结尾震撼人心，流露出了作者对传统手工业者的怀念与惋惜之情。作者用他细致入微的描写为我们展现了残酷的社会现实，揭示了在这个适者生存的现代社会中理想与现实的矛盾。故事结尾：“That may be a bit flowery, as the sayin' is but I know

9、 myself he was sittin' over his boots day and night, to the very last. You see I used to watch him. Never gave 'imself time to eat; never had a penny in the house. All went in rent and leather. How he lived so long I don't know. He regular let his fire go out. He was a character. But he

10、made good boots.”“Yes,” I said, “he made good boots.”And I turned and went out quickly, for I did not want that youth to know that I could hardly see.“这样说也许有点儿夸张但是我自己知道，他从早到晚坐在那里做靴子，一直做到最后的时刻。你知道，我往往在旁边看着他。他从不给自己吃饭的时间，店里连一块钱都没有，所有的钱都用在房租和皮革上了。他怎么能活到这么久，连我也莫名其妙。他经常断粮。他是个怪人，但是他做的靴子都顶好。”“是的，”我说，“他做的靴子都

11、顶好。”我随即立刻转身离开了，我不想让那个年轻人看到我已经模糊了的双眼。【典例赏析2】快乐王子（奥斯卡·王尔德） 快乐王子（The Happy Prince）这一则文学作品继承了王尔德童话题材故事中的“牺牲”主题。王尔德擅长以最唯美的方式表达毁灭与死亡。他首先在故事中创造了两个人间芳物：美丽的小燕子与满身黄金、身嵌宝石的快乐王子。这两个角色本来生活在无忧无虑的温柔乡中，觉得人间处处是阳光，却无意中发现真实的世界实际上充满了痛苦与不堪。在这样的落差之下，这两个生命决定牺牲自己的美好，以解除芸芸众生的痛楚。最终，曾经最美丽华贵的生命残损破败，在垃圾堆中结束了自己的一生。作者通过描写快乐王

12、子身上颜色从金黄到灰色，地位从市中心广场高大的塑像到垃圾堆里的废物这一反差，描绘了一幅凄凉的场景。而在童话末尾，作者笔锋一转，从人间上升到了上帝层面，以上帝的口吻赞颂了这两个外表丑陋，而内在伟大的生命个体，反映了作者认为精神美高于形式美的价值观。快乐王子的情节颇具佛教精神特色，与乔达摩·悉达多王子到世间去体验苦难，最终成佛的故事异曲同工，均深刻探讨了毁灭与重生的相互关系。该作品在童话题材的包装下触及了人性与哲学问题，体现了作者深刻的文学思想。故事结尾： “What a strange thing!” said the overseer of the workmen at the fo

13、undry. “This broken lead heart will not melt in the furnace. We must throw it away.” So they threw it on a dust-heap where the dead Swallow was also lying.“Bring me the two most precious things in the city,” said God to one of His Angels; and the Angel brought Him the leaden heart and the dead bird.

14、“You have rightly chosen,” said God, “for in my garden of Paradise this little bird shall sing for evermore, and in my city of gold the Happy Prince shall praise me.” “多么稀奇的事！”铸像厂的工头说，“这颗裂开的铅心在炉子里竟不能熔化。我们只能把它扔掉。”他们便把它扔到了垃圾堆里，死去的燕子也躺在那儿。“把城市里最珍贵的两件东西拿给我，”上帝对他的一位天使说。于是天使就把铅做的心和死去的鸟儿给上帝带了回来。“你的选择对极了，”上

15、帝说，“因为在我这天堂的花园里，这只小鸟可以永远地放声歌唱，而在我那黄金城堡中，快乐王子可以尽情地赞美我。”四、结尾完形思维4：利用自然发展烘托温馨浪漫【典例赏析1】小女孩（凯瑟琳·曼斯菲尔德）小女孩（The Little Girl）是一则讲述父女情的故事。在小女孩凯齐娅的心中，爸爸是个威严、高大的人，她因此很怕他，与他说话的时候支支吾吾。一次，她在奶奶的鼓励下为爸爸缝制生日礼物，无意中剪碎了他重要的演讲稿，让爸爸勃然大怒。凯齐娅很伤心，想到隔壁麦克唐纳家慈祥的父亲，心中就隐隐作痛。直到有一天妈妈生病，家中只留下了凯齐娅和爸爸，她因为害怕黑暗，做了噩梦，没想到平时不苟言笑的爸爸将她抱

16、进了怀中，安慰她入睡。小女孩是一篇典型的曼斯菲尔德作品，它截取日常的生活片段，刻画出其中细腻丰富的感情，读来令人心醉。故事结尾：Then the dark did not matter; she lay still. “Here, rub your feet against my legs and get them warm,” said father.Tired out, he slept before the little girl. A funny feeling came over her. Poor father! Not so big, after all and with no

17、one to look after him. He was harder than the grandmother, but it was a nice hardness. And every day he had to work and was too tired to be a Mr. Macdonald. She had torn up all his beautiful writing. She stirred suddenly, and sighed.“What's the matter?” asked father. “Another dream?”“Oh,” said t

18、he little girl, “my head's on your heart; I can hear it going. What a big heart you've got, father dear.”“来，把你的脚放在我腿上蹭蹭，这样能暖和些。”爸爸说。他困极了，比小女孩先入睡。一种奇怪的感觉占据了她的头脑。可怜的爸爸呀！他其实不是那么高大，也没有人来照看他。他是要比奶奶严厉些，但也不是不好。每天他都要去工作，太累了，不能像麦克唐纳先生那样。一想到自己将他那些漂亮的文章都给扯碎了，她便一下子转过身子去，叹了口气。“这是怎么了？”爸爸问道，“又做梦了？”“噢，”小女孩说

19、，“我的头在你的胸口，我能听见你心跳的声音。我亲爱的爸爸，你的心可真大啊。”【结尾评析】小女孩将严父与女儿之间的爱写到了极致。凯瑟琳·曼斯菲尔德从她的儿时生活中提取了大量素材：她出身于有名望的家庭，父亲曾任职新西兰银行主席，被授予勋爵，在她儿时，父亲长期在外为公事忙碌，做公共演讲是常有的事。可能曼斯菲尔德笔下小女孩与父亲的微妙关系，便是她对自己儿时情况的真实记录。曼斯菲尔德善于描写女性细腻的情感，而几岁小女孩的动作心思也被她拿捏得准确到位。父亲在小女孩的心中常以一个巨人的形象出现，这样的设定，不仅符合现实中小孩子心里父亲们普遍的高大形象，也表现出了父亲在主人公心中的威严。在受到父亲责

20、骂后，小女孩在没有开灯的房间里独自哭泣，连从百叶窗缝隙里透过来的光线看起来都像是一幅悲伤的图画，许多少女在受到委屈后都有类似的体验吧！一句“这个世界上为什么要有爸爸呢”是小女孩在受到父亲责骂以后最童真、最令人心痛的问话。作家萧乾说，读小女孩就像是“听一阕德彪西的音乐诗，感到淡淡的哀愁，又好像一只毛茸茸的爪子，在轻轻地挠着我的心。”相信众多读者的心也同样被小女孩的天真愁绪深深打动。【典例赏析2】画册的一页（凯瑟琳·曼斯菲尔德）在小说画册的一页（Feuille d'Album）中，作者大量地使用了象征手法，勾勒出了一幅恬淡隽永的初恋水彩画卷，使小说充满了现代主义的气息。作者熟练地

21、运用意识流的手法描写少年的情窦初开：“他的心也从画室的侧窗跌了出去，落到了对面房子的阳台上埋在了那盆花苞半开、绿叶似矛的水仙花花盆里了”，也让主人公想象两人在一起的时光：“她脾气暴躁，他们有时吵得很厉害”，当他第一次要去见她时，感觉到“一切都笼罩在那可爱的粉红色的光晕中”。在作者的笔下，少年青涩的模样生动活泼、跃然纸上。该作品的文字基调基本是明快的，而其核心却是孤独、敏感的。主人公独自居住在楼顶，没有人能进入他的房间，与他对话的就是自己的日记本。女孩也是孤独的，她和害病的母亲住在一起，每天都重复做着同样的活来维持生计。这两个人都与巴黎的繁华与浮夸格格不入，少年之所以认为自己找到了伙伴，是因为他

22、对于孤独的执着与偏爱。少年向女孩表现自己爱慕的方式也十分含蓄，他只是跟随着她，到了最后才鼓起勇气递给了她一个鸡蛋。这是一种在现代社会中可贵也可爱的含蓄。作者笔下处处透露着对孤独的偏爱，也表现了她不受大众审美的影响，孤独追求艺术理想的态度。弗兰奇正是作者自我形象的写照。故事结尾：But now she was on her way home and he was as far off as ever.She suddenly turned into the dairy and he saw her through the window buying an egg. She picked it o

23、ut of the basket with such care a brown one, a beautifully shaped one, the one he would have chosen. And when she came out of the dairy he went in after her. In a moment he was out again, and following her past his house across the flower market, dodging among the huge umbrellas and treading on the

24、fallen flowers and the round marks where the pots had stood.Through her door he crept, and up the stairs after, taking care to tread in time with her so that she should not notice. Finally, she stopped on the landing, and took the key out of her purse. As she put it into the door he ran up and faced

25、 her.Blushing more crimson than ever, but looking at her severely he said, almost angrily: “Excuse me, Mademoiselle, you dropped this.”And he handed her an egg.但是现在她已经在回家的路上，他还像先前那样离她那么远。她突然转身进入了乳品店，他隔着窗户看见她正在买鸡蛋。她格外小心地从筐里挑选了一个出来一个棕色的、有着漂亮形状的鸡蛋，若是他，也会挑这个。当她走出乳品店之后，他走了进去。随即他又走了出来，跟着她走过他的屋子，穿过了花市，避开一个

26、个大伞，踏着掉落的花和花盆留下的圆印。他悄悄地走进了她家大门，跟着她上楼，小心谨慎地选择恰当的时机跟随，让她不至于发觉。终于，她在楼梯平台停了下来，从钱包里取出钥匙。就在她把钥匙插进房门的时候，他跑了上来，站在她面前。他的脸从来没有这样红过，但他严肃地看着她，近乎生气地说道：“抱歉，小姐，你落下了这个。”他递给了她一个鸡蛋。五、结尾完形思维5：用平凡和伟大再现英雄和悲壮【典例赏析1】最后一课（阿尔封斯·都德） 小说最后一课（The Last Lesson）在表现普法战争这一主题时，并未正面描写战争的残酷场面，也没有突出普鲁士侵略者的骄横暴戾和法国人民的英勇无畏，而是将视线聚焦到了阿尔

27、萨斯省一个小镇的一堂普普通通的法语课上，以一个学龄孩子的感触，反映了法国最普通的民众对自己国家深厚的情感。故事的主角并不是个出色的学生，他爱去田野里玩耍不爱去学校，上课也经常开小差，觉得外面的世界比课堂有趣。但在普鲁士人的政令公布之后，这个调皮学生的心态在一点点地发生变化他发现老师教的内容竟然很容易听懂，并且还希望自己能有更多的时间学习得更加深入，他甚至还开始体贴地察言观色，理解老师的良苦用心。文章在详细描述主人公的转变时，也带出了其他学生、甚至小镇居民们的转变满教室只听见笔在纸上沙沙作响，不识字的老居民也摊开课本认真地学习拼写。作者通过截取主人公、学生和那些居民面对国家危难的这一小片段，以小

28、见大，展示了爱国精神在一个普通人心中引起的强烈化学反应，深刻地反映了法国上上下下的民众在国难之际的面貌。故事结尾： Suddenly the church clock struck twelve. Then the Angelus. At the same moment the trumpets of the Prussians, returning from drill, sounded under our windows. M. Hamel stood up, very pale, in his chair. I never saw him look so tall. “My friend

29、s,” said he, “my friends,. I. I.”But something choked him; he could not finish the sentence. He returned to the blackboard, took a piece of chalk, and wrote in large letters, “VIVE LA FRANCE.”Then he stood leaning against the wall, unable to speak. He signed to us with his hand. “The lesson is over.

30、 You are dismissed.”忽然，教堂的钟敲了十二下，祈祷的钟声也响了。普鲁士士兵的号声也从窗外传了进来他们也操练完了。韩麦尔先生从椅子上站了起来，脸色苍白。我从没有觉得他这样高大。“我的朋友们，”他说，“我我”但是他哽咽了，他没法说完那句话。他走到了黑板前，拿起了一支粉笔，写了几个大字：“法兰西万岁。”然后他靠墙站着，一句话也不说。他向我们做了一个手势：“放学了。你们走吧。”【典例赏析2】空中骑士（阿尔封斯·都德）空中骑士（A Horseman in the Sky）讲述了美国南北战争时期发生的一个震撼人心的故事。主人公卡特·德鲁斯出生于弗吉尼亚，父亲是富裕的

31、农场主，他却因为与父亲政治观点不同而加入了北方联盟军。在一次值勤中，卡特发现一名南方军队的骑兵前来刺探军情，此人竟然就是他的父亲，卡特在强烈的心理斗争之后，决定履行自己的职责，扣动了扳机，将父亲的坐骑打落山崖。作者详细地描绘了复杂、险要的战争地形，运用内心独白和悬念设置等手法，剖析了主人公在职责与亲情之间的痛苦抉择，使该故事具有独特的艺术和思想魅力。卡特失去父亲后的冷静在读者的心中造成了强烈的震撼。作者没有正面描写主人公的悲痛，只是寥寥几笔就勾勒出了在军人职责抑制之下那呼之欲出的丧亲之痛，使故事具有强烈的艺术性和巨大的感染力。故事结尾： “A horse. It was standing on

32、 yonder rock pretty far out. You see it is no longer there. It went over the cliff.”The man's face was white, but he showed no other sign of emotion. Having answered, he turned away his eyes and said no more. The sergeant did not understand.“See here, Druse,” he said, after a moment's silenc

33、e, “it's no use making a mystery. I order you to report. Was there anybody on the horse?”“Yes.”“Well?”“My father.”The sergeant rose to his feet and walked away. “Good God!” he said.“一匹马。它站在山崖上，距离很远。你看，现在那匹马不在了，它跌下了山崖。”他的脸色苍白，但除此以外，并没有表现出任何的情绪。答完话之后，他便转过脸去，不愿再说一句了。那中士有些不明白。“听着，德鲁斯，”他沉默了片刻，说道：“没必要

34、搞得神秘兮兮的。我命令你如实汇报。那马上面有人吗？”“有。”“谁？”“我的父亲。”中士站起身来，走开了。“我的天啊！”他说。【真题再现】【2020·新高考全国卷I（山东）】阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make

35、 ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One

36、morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her o

37、wn children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering

38、so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John

39、had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs

40、. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too._ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business._【参考范文】When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and s

41、ome special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernards home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this

42、family.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he se

43、ll popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.【写作分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困

44、的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意-制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.(当Meredith太

45、太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合

46、题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。【题型演练】1 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A few seconds remained and the score was tied. Players gathered near the goal. Suddenly Devin saw a clear opening to the goal. He struck the ball hard and held his breath as it flew toward the upper corner of the ne

47、t.Goal!Three seconds later, the judge blew the whistle. Game over."Championship game, here we come!" said Tara, slapping hands with Devin. "Can't wait till Thursday."Devin grinned. Thursday would be hugethe big soccer game in the afternoon, and the school's autumn concert in the evening. Ms. Poltis had chosen Devin to sing a song alone."Great work," Coach said as the team gathered. "Be here by 6:30 on Thursday to