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1、备战2021届高考英语二轮复习题型专练（新高考）29读后续写故事接续策略在读后续写中，一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。“well begun is half done！”可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的接续开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的接续。1.开端布局思维1：副词突显动作等【典例赏析】

2、Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.Joyfully he skipped up the street.【真题再现】Para 1： (2016. 10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词衔接+环境描写）2.开端布局思维2：形容词短语表明心态【典例赏析】C

3、urious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.【真题再现】 (2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her fac

4、e. （并列情绪形容词）  (2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句） (2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1:  Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my

5、horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句) (2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 3.开端布局思维3：非谓语动词的烘托【典例赏析

6、】Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over.【真题再现】(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for ano

7、ther night. （现在分词+情绪形容词） (2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）4.开端布局思维4：使用从句【典例赏析】As he walked, he whistledAlthough he was afraid, he jumped right in.5.

8、开端布局思维5：使用介词短语【典例赏析】At the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.6.开端布局思维6：对话或独白【典例赏析】“Lets see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“Hold on tight!” My father yelled.

9、 We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride.【真题再现】(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. 7.开端布局思维7：介绍人物身份【典例赏析】Mark is a studious boy who l

10、oves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr. Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home8.开端布局思维8：情绪烘托【典例赏析】The moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tinas eyes and falling down her cheeks.9.开端布局思维9：背景烘托【典例赏析

11、】I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldnt even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure

12、was going to be something that I would never forget.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fa

13、scination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）10.开端布局思维10：人物动作特写【典例赏析】Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-

14、new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom?  （动作描写+问句衔接）11.开端布局思维11：声音效果传情【典例赏析】BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared.12.开端布局思维12：设问激发思考【典例赏析】Ha

15、ve you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something?fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）  【真题再现】【2020年7月·浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完

16、整的故事。One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-shou

17、ld be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake s

18、niffed，and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the be

19、ar，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it woul

20、d be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes，but d

21、oesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫)，the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:A few minutes la

22、ter, the bear headed back to our camp._Paragraph 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._【参考范文】【写作思路】本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望惊恐放松。剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，例如“Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.”这不仅合理

23、地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trotted forward a few steps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved.”最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃

24、脱的结局。关于画线词：Elli作为女主人公，是续写内容中应该出现的画线词，noises, pictures, fence, spray与熊有关，也在两段续写内容中出现。最终，两人回归安全状态，因此画线词safe也可自然而然地出现在续写内容中。由此划分画线词，可迅速锁定需使用的画线词范围，辅助构思。【参考范文】A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli

25、and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animals noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shiver

26、ing with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded

27、us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound. 【题型演练】1 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two things changed m

28、y life: my mother and a white plastic bike basket. I have thought long and hard about it and it's true. I would be a different person if my mom hadn't turned a silly bicycle basket into a life lesson I carry with me today.Managing the family budget（预算）must have been a very hard task，but my m

29、other made it look easy. If we complained about not having what another kid did, we'd hear something like, "I don't care what so-and-so got for his birthday; you are not getting a TV in your room, a car for your birthday or an expensive birthday party. "We had to earn our pocket mo

30、ney by doing the housework. I can still remember how long it took to shine（擦亮）the legs of our coffee table. My brothers can no doubt remember hours spent cleaning the house. We made our own beds(no one left the house until that was done）.We had to keep track of our belongings（物品），and if something wa

31、s lost， it was not replaced.It was summer and, one day, my mother drove me to the bike shop to get a tire fixedand there it was in the window. White, shiny, plastic and decorated（装饰）with flowers，the basket winked（眨眼）at me and I knewI knewI had to have it."It's beautiful," my mother sai

32、d when I pointed it out to her. "What a nice basket."I played it cool for a short while. But then I guess I couldn't stand it any longer: "Mom, please can I please, please get it? Ill do extra chores for as long as you say. I'll do anything, but I need that basket. I love that

33、 basket. Please, Mom. Please?""You know, "she said，gently rubbing my back while we both stared at（注视）what I believed was the coolest thing ever," If you save up you could buy this yourself.""By the time I make enough it'll be gone!""Maybe Roger here could

34、hold it for you," she smiled at Roger, the bike store Owner."He can't hold it for that long, Mom. Someone else will buy it. Please, Mom, please?""There might be another way," she said.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1:And so our paying plan began._Para.2:Days l

35、ater, a neighborhood girl appeared with the exact same basket fixed to her shiny, new bike._2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Peter, a 5-year-old boy, showed such great interest in sea shells that he would rush to pick them up with his 3-year-old sister, Shirley. They screamed out their joy as

36、Peter collected his treasure into his pockets. For Peter, sea shells lay shinning on the peaceful beach, waiting for him, just like stars twinkling（闪烁）in the sky. As waves touched them, they seemed to be flowers blooming（绽放）in gentle wind.One day, Peter was wandering through market with Shirley, wit

37、h some shells in his pocket. Suddenly Peter found his younger sister was lagging（落后）behind. He stopped and looked back, finding Shirley was standing in front of a toy shop and was staring at something with great interest.The boy went back to her and asked, "What do you want?" Shirley point

38、ed at the doll, wearing a smile on her innocent face. Peter held his younger sister's tiny hand, walking into the shop. He tiptoed（踮起脚尖）to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother, gave the precious doll to Shirley. Holding tightly the doll, the sister was very very happy.The sho

39、pkeeper was watching everything and getting amused to see the matured（成熟的）behaviour of the boy. Now the boy came to the counter and asked the shopkeeper, "How much does this doll cost, Sir?”The shopkeeper was a cool man, who had suffered from something in his life. So he asked the boy with love

40、 and affection, "Well, what can you pay?" Peter reached into his clothes for money that was intended for these two little guys' breakfast. Having counted the money, Peter put it carefully on the counter, asking again, 6'Sir, is it enough for my little sister's doll?"The am

41、using scene just in front of the shopkeeper eventually brought a smile on his face. Shaking his head slightly, he replied, "My boy, I am afraid it seems not to be enough."注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。With his eyes fixed on Peter's pocket, he wondered what Peter would do._Seei

42、ng Peter leaving happily with his sister holding the doll tightly, an assistant in that shop got surprised._3 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My days always started with a two-to four-mile run on a nearby greenway. For about two years, I had a very faithful running partner. This giant, orange t

43、abby cat was probably the gentlest cat I had ever encountered. He would see me climbing the hill and join in, running alongside me for about a quarter mile until he meowed enough to get me to stop and pet him. A few minutes later, when I attempted to restart my run, he would wind around my ankles to

44、 keep me longer. Although he was a rather fat fellow, I always brought him some cat food.On fair-weather afternoons, I would pick up my four-year-old granddaughter from pre-school and we would visit the tabby cat together. She would insist on bringing him an afternoon treat. Before long, he started winding around her littl