2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十三）含答案解析.doc

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1、2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十三）一：原文重现Pam Bales planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire Mount. On the dashboard （汽车仪表板） was a detailed plan ensuring she could return before the arrival of some forecasted bad weather. Different from former hike, though, this time, she had packed for almost every accident a

2、nd intended to walk alone.At about 8 a.m., she'd checked the weather forecast. Bales knew from experience that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better protect her core temperature as conditions changed.【版权所有：21教育】Bales felt excited as s

3、he walked up into snowy paths. She was wearing a fleece tank top （绒衣）and hiking pants, and no gloves or hat because the air was mild. Thirty minutes later, she climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She now was in a quarter-zip fleece top and gloves. At 10 a.m.? the weather was showing its teeth.

4、 Bales added more layers to resist cold winds and dense fog. Making her way across the snow-covered ridge, she noticed something: a single set of footprints made by a pair of sneakers. Not giving them much thought, she walked on.By 11 a.m.? Bales was getting cold. She decided to return to her car. O

5、n her way down, she again spotted the sneaker tracks, which suddenly made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she felt genuinely alarmed. She was sure the hiker lost his way in the low visibility. If Bales continued to follow the tracks, she'd add risk and time to her return. But she couldn

6、't let this go. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!" Nothing.21教育网Bales followed the tracks, rounded a slight comer and saw a man sitting motionless. He wore tennis sneakers, shorts, a light jacket and fingerless gloves. His skin was pale and he had a glazed （呆滞的）look on his face

7、. uOh5 hello/5 Bales approached and said, "What's your name?” The man didn't react. Obviously, nothing was connecting for him and he was in really big trouble.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission._Ove

8、r the next hour, the man began to move and _二：文本解析【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Bales计划6个小时内独自登雪山，在登山前Bales做了非常详细的准备，可是在登山途中发现了别人的脚印，疑似是有人走丢了，Bales没有独自离开，而是寻着脚印寻找到了一个男人，此时男人已经一动不动。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Bales不再是一个好奇和担心的徒步旅行者，开始了全面的救援任务。”可知，第一段可描写Bales想帮助这个男人，开始采取救援措施。由第二段首句内容“在接下来的一个小时里，John开始走动并说话了。”可知，第二段可描写被救的男

9、人John恢复意识后，感谢Bales的救援。2.续写线索：发现男人采取援救措施男人获救感谢Bales3.词汇激活 行为类冒风险：brave/take risks尝试帮忙：try to help/attempt to help想起一个主意：an idea occurs to sb./come up with an idea情绪类费力的：painstaking/arduous感激地：gratefully/appreciatively高分句型1. In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her how he lost his way and was tr

10、apped here.（由省略连接词that的宾语从句）2. Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk.（由until引导时间状语从句）三：续写单句训练1. Bales不再是一个好奇而关心的徒步旅行者，于是开始了一项全面的救援任务。 2. 她立刻冒着越来越狂野的天气脱下衣服，遮住那个一动不动的男人。 3. 然后Bales试图帮助这个人喝一些热水，但没有成功。 4. 在那个非常无助、甚至是绝望的时刻，她想到了一个主意。 5. 她迅速收集了一些冰雪，开始摩擦这个男人的身体，从手到胳膊，从脚趾到腿。 6. Bales清楚地知道

11、这是耗时和艰苦的，但它肯定是有效的。 7. 在接下来的一个小时里，约翰开始行动和说话。 8. 他首先通过手指显示出动作的迹象，然后睁开眼睛。 9. 他用微弱的声音感谢了Bales，并告诉她他是如何迷路并被困在这里的。 10. Bales一直在热身他，直到他示意他可以走路了。 11. 在Bales的支持下，这名男子终于设法回到了车里，并被及时送往医院。 12. 摆脱危险，他感激地说，要不是Bales的经验和熟练的救援，他永远不会看到世界的美丽。 四：佳作展现Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on

12、 rescue mission._Over the next hour, the man began to move and speak.21世纪教育网版权所有_ 五：课后练笔It was time to go home.“Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,”Miss Walker called,as everyone started talking and packing their school bags.Jenny felt sick.She hated having to read aloud in class.S

13、he was sure everyone got really bored listening to her.Once,when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary,Lee was even looking at his watch,a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school.He seemed so clever,and he had a certain sort of shining

14、confidence.He was just one of those people who were good at everything.Jenny sighed.As she turned the corner,she saw Lees watch lying right in the middle of the path.www.21-cn-Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him,but she didnt want to run after him.Jenny bent down quickly,picke

15、d up the watch and ran home.On arriving home,Jenny put it on almost without thinking.She was surprised it fitted so well.She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech.Words just flooded out of her.“Im going to talk about swimming.I have been lucky.Ive won lots of competitions.But when I

16、m in a race,Im not really thinking about winning.Im just loving the feeling of being in the water.”Jenny laughed with excitement.She walked across the room.She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence.Turning back to the mirror,Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass.The f

17、lashes of silver seemed almost magical.So maybe Lees watch really DID have something magic.The next day,as the lesson began,Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first.Nobody moved.Jenny slowly raised her arm.Before Miss Walker could say anything,there was a shout from behind.“Shes stol

18、en my watch!” Lee said angrily,“It went missing at school yesterday.”21·世纪*教育网Paragraph 1:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation. _ Paragraph 2:At that moment,Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first._ 六：单句训练1 每个人都盯着珍妮，等着解释。 2 珍妮没

19、有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？ 3 没人能理解。没人会相信。“但我昨天看见你穿了，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。 4 李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了。 5 珍妮是在回家的路上发现了它的，她松了一口气，决定在演讲后把它还回去。 6 每个人都很困惑，并被问及他为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。 7 这时，沃克小姐笑着，让同学先听珍妮的演讲。 8 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。她无法正确地思考。 9 她周围是一片面孔。她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 10 突然，她看到了沃克小姐那双鼓励人心的眼睛。 11 珍妮深吸了一口气。“我要谈谈swimming.了。” 12 十分钟后，全班同学都站起来为珍妮那精

20、彩的演讲鼓掌。 13 珍妮终于意识到真正的自信。 参考答案三：单句训练1) Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission.2) Immediately, she braved the increasingly wild and fierce weather to take off the outer layers of her clothes to cover the motionless man. 2·1·c·n·j·

21、y3) And then Bales tried to help the man have some hot water but in vain. 4) At the very helpless and even hopeless moment, an idea occurred to her. 5) Quickly collecting some ice and snow, she began to rub the mans body, from hands to arms, from toes to legs.21·cn·jy·com6) Bales knew

22、 clearly it was time-consuming and painstaking, but it was bound to be effective.7) Over the next hour, John began to move and speak. 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】8) He first showed the sign of movement through his fingers, and then opened his eyes. 9) In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her

23、 how he lost his way and was trapped here. 10) Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk. www-2-1-cnjy-com11) With the support of Bales, the man finally managed it back to the car and was sent to the hospital timely. 2-1-c-n-j-y12) Out of danger, he said gratefully but for Bales expe

24、rience and skilled rescue, he would never see the beauty of the world.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】六：单句训练1 Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation.2 Jenny didnt answer.How could she explain about the watch and its magic?3 No one could understand.No one could believe it.“But I saw you

25、 wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him.【出处：21教育名师】4 For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized.21教育名师原创作品5 Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.21*cnjy*com6 Everybody was puzzled and asked why.Jenny again w

26、as speechless.7 At that moment,Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first.8 Jenny walked slowly to the front.She couldnt think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching.9 She felt so frightened and the watch didnt seem magical at all.10 Suddenly she saw Miss Wal

27、kers encouraging eyes.11 Jenny took a deep breath.“Im going to talk about swimming.” 12 Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jennys wonderful speech.13 Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.四：佳作展现（一）Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, a

28、nd began a full-on rescue mission. Immediately, she braved the increasingly wild and fierce weather to take off the outer layers of her clothes to cover the motionless man. And then Bales tried to help the man have some hot water but in vain. At the very helpless and even hopeless moment, an idea oc

29、curred to her. Quickly collecting some ice and snow, she began to rub the mans body, from hands to arms, from toes to legs. Bales knew clearly it was time-consuming and painstaking, but it was bound to be effective.Over the next hour, John began to move and speak. He first showed the sign of movemen

30、t through his fingers, and then opened his eyes. In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her how he lost his way and was trapped here. Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk. With the support of Bales, the man finally managed it back to the car and was sent to the hospital time

31、ly. Out of danger, he said gratefully but for Bales experience and skilled rescue, he would never see the beauty of the world.21*cnjy*com（二）Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation.Jenny didnt answer.How could she explain about the watch and its magic?No one could understa

32、nd.No one could believe it.“But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him.For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why.Jenny agai

33、n was speechless.At that moment,Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front.She couldnt think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didnt seem magical at all.Suddenly she saw Miss Walkers encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath.“Im going to talk about swimming.” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jennys wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.