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1、考点五十八 书面表达之咨询建议类四步法写建议类书面表达1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式；2. 然后写出提建议的原因；3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议；4. 写出希望。英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：开头部分： How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. Im g

2、lad to have received your letter. Im pleased to hear that youre coming to China for a visit. Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in A

3、merica. 结尾部分： With best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply. Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier. We should take measures to control pollution in order&

4、#160;to save the world.   Wed better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.   The government decided to take strong measures against

5、0;drug abuse.   Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.   Why not./Why dont you.You can have a try./Try to do.Dont be afraid of.I believe you can do it. Goo

6、d luck.In one/a word/Generally speaking 解决方法类作文模板In recent days, we have to face the problem_A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _（说明A的现状）. Second,  _（举例进一步说明现状）. Confronted&#

7、160;with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _（解决方法一）. For another _（解决方法二）. Finally, _（解决方法三）. Personally, I believe&#

8、160;that_（我的解决方法）. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is waiting us because _（带来的好处）.（一）请根据下面Frank在信中所提出的困惑，以Maria的名义给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。80词左右。Dear Editor,I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much.

9、But I cant do it. I want to join the football team. But my parents dont allow it. So I often argue with my parents.Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?Yours,FrankDear Frank,I read your problem from your letter. _Maria（二）张燕是九年级学生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪

10、音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力学习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。_（三）你班Carl同学最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Car写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。Carl的问题将来想当一名记者，但很安静，不喜欢与人交谈喜欢穿红色衣服，但同学嘲笑他像个女生喜欢篮球，并且经常打，作业花的时间较少，不知如何平衡自己的学业和爱好你的建议(至少四条)要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息； 2. 不得遗漏提示信息，条理清楚，字迹工整，语意连贯可适当发挥； 3. 词数：

11、110词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。Dear Carl,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.Best wishes,Mr. Friend题组一（一）【2019 北京市】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全

12、教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture提示问题：When should you hand in the poster? What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?Dear Peter,I'm glad to receive your email _If there is anything more that

13、I can help with, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可

14、以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。【参考范文】Dear Peter,I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to

15、hand in the poster before next Friday.Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is s

16、o meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a goo

17、d idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海

18、报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some id

19、eas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on you

20、r poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。（二）【2019 福建省】假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他From: Harry回复。词数 80 左右。Dear Li Hua,Im glad to tell you that Ive just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.What do yo think of

21、robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,HarryTo: Lihua 2019参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项：1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Dear Harry,_Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构

22、进行合理安排。（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援的帮助等）；写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。【参考范文】Dear Harry,Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they w

23、ill play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.H

24、oping you will make greater progress.Yours,Li Hua（三）【2019 陕西省】即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。要求：1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；4. 词数：不少于70个词，（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）。Dear Editor, My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'

25、;d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks._There are my ideas. I hope they can help.Yours, Li Hua【写作思路】本篇作文为应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，写作时应注意以下几点内容：1. 审题：不需要写题目，开头结尾已给出，只需要按照给出的提示写出自己如何处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由，给的提示短语需要全部列出。2. 列提纲：第一段：开头已给出，引入主题，第二段：详细列出自己处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由第三段：结尾已给出，进行情感的升华。3. 人称及

26、时态：第一人“我”为主，时态应选用一般将来时和一般现在时。【参考范文】Dear Editor, My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousin

27、s. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally the used paper will be tak

28、en to the waste center.There are my ideas. I hope they can help.Yours, Li Hua（四）【2019 四川凉山州】每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。安全对每个人都很重要交通：外出时遵守交通规则食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需谨慎远离危险之人遇到危险保持冷静然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助尽可能避免受伤害 保证自己的安全要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文

29、连贯、通顺。 2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。 3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。参考词汇：safety,traffic rules, hurt oneself, without permission, self-protection, stay away from, be careful, be in danger, keep calm, callfor help, be hurt.Dear friends, Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we

30、 protect ourselves?Here are some suggestions. _ In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. Thats all. Thank you!【写作思路】本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修【参考范文】Dear friends， Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our live

31、s But how can we protect ourselves？ Here are some suggestions On the one hand， we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the r

32、ight side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat lessWhen food smells bad， don't eat itThird，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselvesFourth，we mustn't swim in river

33、s without our parents or other adults aroundOn the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills We must be careful when making friends especially onlineSome person online are not honestThey are dangerous， so we must keep away from them If we hap

34、pen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives That's all Thank you !【名师点评】高分句型一： we should realize the impo

35、rtance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；高分句型四：we

36、must keep away from them我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask.for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，pro

37、tect. from.短语。（五）【2019 贵州省安顺市】请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。提示：1. 谨慎交友。2. 不参与打架斗殴。3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?_