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1、秋风清，秋月明,落叶聚还散,寒鸦栖复惊。雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项无忧雅思网原创作品，转载请注明作者和出处。发贴：xlinyao 雅思技巧与注意事项(写作-小作文)个人总结分析(谢谢各位51IELTS的帮助)1。试卷发下后，请花半分钟的时间来浏览作文的题目，这里包括议论文在内。2。此后，请看第一部分的题目，明确以下几点1)属于什么题型的图表，是一个曲线图，一个饼图，一表格，一个流程图还是一个物体以及其他类型的图表2)是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图3)时间、字数以及其他的要求3。用5分钟的时间分析并形成以下的内容1)注意不同类型图表的技巧(包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型)2)划出并分析题

2、目中的关键内容，分析图表中的关键特征点(依据各种图表的特点来决定)3)考虑结构(开头引言，描述特征，可能总结)注意以下开头不能与文章已经给出的东西一样，用自己语言表达；描述关键以及有代表性的点或者是趋势；在语法与句法正确的基础上，力求用不同的句型组合(如简单句，复合句，定语/表语/宾语/非谓语从句)，用近意词语；正确表达文章所给信息；在可能的情况下做简单的总结；不要发表有个人或者是评论性的句子；标点符号，单词的拼写应该正确；4。书写的时候注意流利与工整，采用现代式的书写格式5。留有时间检查，保持卷面的整洁技巧性套句(仅供参考)开头句型(用简单的句子给出尽可能多的信息WHEN，WHAT，WHER

3、E，有特色。)一般有两种，一种是主动一种是被动。1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process (show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,describe,indicate) 2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from结尾句型(如果没有可以充分说的，可以不用结尾。结尾不要节外生枝。最好不要出现很明显有结尾特征的词语“in conclusion”)中间关键句型要注意认真审查题目，弄

4、清楚要描述的数据究竟代表什么，单位是什么，用什么方式表达。OBJECT (描述物体)注意点：要明确以一定的顺序来写。从左到右或者是从上到下，从内到外(根据物体自己的特点)等等。把题目中给出的部件详细描述。(如202的自行车)句型：介绍功能The illustration is of a _ which is designed to (do something)说明构成部分A _ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections描述各个部件功能不要用you ,one可以用we, the operat

5、or (单数个体) First , (the cyclist) puts his or her _on the _要有一定的顺序，不要将每个部分单独写出，应该将能够合并的一起结合，注意用以下句型(被动态，定语从句，非谓语动词)要用关联词PIE CHART (饼图)注意点：1)文字中要表达出总量与分量的关系，在两个以上的PIE中，要注意各个PIE间的比较2)数据究竟代表什么应清楚语言点：1)percentage / proportion2) (v.) make up/ constitute / account for 3)the biggest difference between 2 grou

6、p(A+B) is in,where A makes up 5% while B constitutes 67%the highest percentage of A, which was approximately 12%the percentage of A in.is more than twice that of B,the ratio is 67% to 45%($% compared to $%)in,while a greater percentage of A than B are found in. (the former is $% and the latter is $%

7、)there are more A in,reaching $%,compared with $% of BA , which used to be the.,has become less important, which declined(increased) sharply from $% in 1978 to only $% in 1998.The biggest loss was to某区域.The biggest gains in A were made by某区域.FLOW CHART (曲线图)注意点：1)抓住“变化”和“趋势”2)有两种情况其一是在不同时间段内的数据比较，另外

8、是单独数据的全程描述。前者适合于数据代表的物体较少且时间界限明确的情况下，后者适合于描述数据对象很多且时间划定不清晰。当然依据考试中的题目来决定。语言点：1)变化状态幅度词(要依据描述的情况决定)轻微-slightly, slowly(速度), steadily(平缓)逐渐-gradually 显著-significantly , markedly急剧-rapidly , dramatically , abruptly ,sharply突然-suddenly趋势-trend inclination tendacy2)变量幅度词语增加-increase, jump ,go up ,rise, c

9、limb , ascend , level up ,surge,减少-decrease, drop ,go down ,fall,- , descend, level down , 水平-keep/stay/remain/maintain stable ,-steady ,be similar to ,there is little/hardly any/no change最高-reach a highest point/the top/the summit/the peak/the most/peak in,at最低-reach a lowest point/the bottom/rock/

10、hit a trough /bottom out交叉-correspond with in -year; - crossing the line for -3)时间幅度词语During the period 19701999 ; From 1970 to 1999 ; Since the early 1970s ;In 1970-then in 1980-ten years later 4)基本句型There was变化趋势in the number of A from 1986-1990(over next.yeas) ,which was followed by变化趋势and then变化

11、趋势until 1998 when there was变化趋势for the next.yearsFrom 1990 onwards, there was变化趋势in the number of A which then变化趋势at $% in 1994.In 1990,the number reached (was) $%,but 30 years later there was变化趋势.After变化趋势fromto,A begin变化趋势over the next.years.The number ofincreased rapidly from 1988 to 1990 during

12、the five-year periodThere was a rapid increase from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year periodA has almost/nearly/about/over a quarter/half/twice/one third /as many students as/as much money as /B; A has about/approximately/exactly/precisely the same number/proportion/amount of students/money as.It ha

13、s reached something of a plateau,X percent/an average of X percent in the past few years in 1998.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998.the percentage of.is sightly larger/smaller than that of.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of.decreased year by year while.increased steadi

14、ly.here is an upward trend in the number of.(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in.a has something in common with b/ the difference between a and b lies in.柱状图(Bar chart)注意点：1)柱图主要是陈列的数据比较多，不能将所有的信息写出，只能抓住重点与关键点来写(这些点可以是最大、小值；最高、低值；差距最大最小点等等)都需要结合题目来分析，对于一些点的特征具有相似性应该采用统一合并的方法，不能每有项都列出。2)应该根据一定的顺序来写，否则

15、会因逻辑不合理而失分语言点：1)一般是以比较极与最高级的句子形式出现如Low income consumed more hamburghers than other group(=more than other /group/ on hamburghers),spending more than twice/ as much as hamburghers than FC and Pizza(both about 40%)High income favoured pizza,spenting $%,followed by FC at $%,then hamburgher at $%.High i

16、ncome appear to less than other /group/ on hamburghers,pizza remain their most popular fast-food, followed by FC.In 1975,among 3 of the worlds largest cities, San Paulo had the highest population(about 0.5 billion),andis the second highest(about. )had the lowest population (about.).As a result in 19

17、90,the number of.appears the largest population, closely followed by,then.atThe table below shows the figures for imprisonment in 3 countries between 1930-1960 in great Britain, the numbers in prison has increased from.in 1930 to.in 1940,apart from in 1950 when the numbers in prison fell by.On the o

18、ther hand , New Zealand and Australia are the only two countries in which the numbers in prison remain steady from 1930-1960,although there have been slightly fluctuations in this trend.In the period 1975to 1990,all cities showed a growth, Tokyo and Newyork had by far the largest increase (about.).s

19、an Paulo had the smallest growth(about)There were no figures given for male part-time workers.In unemployed group, men enjoyed more leisure time-over 80%,compared with 40% for women(同一群体的比较), markedly more than women in retired group(不同群体的比较).表格/统计图(Table chart)注意点：1)同柱状一样对数据间的变化与特殊显著数据的描写要求很高2)选择好顺序流程图(Flow Chart)注意点：1)与物体、地图的描述一样，保持相同的作题原则2)一定要按照顺序来说明3)明确图片上要求说明的内容是什么，不要随意编造