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1、54书面表达读后续写精彩结尾内容精彩结尾1回面定格人物动作的回面定格精彩结尾2画面定格一一特殊寓意的写景画面精彩结尾3对话结尾精彩结尾4主题升华精彩结尾5结尾留白精彩结尾6首尾呼应法技制）精彩结尾01：画面定格人物动作的画面定格 01They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And

2、 slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼, 立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲 的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。02His hard work paid off! Holding the soda

3、 tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Doras hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了

4、回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸 针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出 话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。03The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, “No. God felt a bit relieved and said, Tomorrow you can become human again. But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly fbr the rest of my

5、 Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。” 但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶 上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。读后续写精彩结尾02：画面定格特殊寓意的写景画面he was two and

6、 loved it.Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didnt like how it felt against her skin.After about half an hours drive, they parked at a trailhead （登山 口）. The rain had stop

7、ped but the ground was still dripping wet. Well be there by afternoon!,9 Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away.Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch“Fox sparrow!,9then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight.Edun rested under a pine tree. You cant force me to walk,“ Edun

8、 said. “Youre right,“ said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail.Parag

9、raph 2:Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin.Writing 3（2022.河北.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成 一篇完整的短文。Ariana Porter was very excited. Tomorrow will be anew day and a new beginning, well, kind of. Tomorrow Ariana will go to a boarding school! No little sister to share a room with, peace and qu

10、iet. She ate her favourite homemade curry for the last time that year. Then, she curled up in her clean bed and shut her eyes. Excited.The next day, Ariana woke up, jumped into her best clothes and flew downstairs. After a quick breakfast, the whole family lined up and said their goodbyes. Arianas l

11、ittle sister tried to hug her, but she shrugged Liliana off. And off she went to boarding school. Happy.However, when Ariana got there, everyone looked unwelcoming. A teacher showed her to her dorm. It was cold and dark! A few days later, Ariana got several letters. The rainbow one was from her litt

12、le sister and another from her parents. Ariana couldnt even be bothered to open them. She just threw them into the main hairs fireplace when nobody was around.Every day, Ariana tried to make friends. It was an all-girls school. Unfortunately, she had no luck. She tried to give girls gifts, she tried

13、 to be friendly, but they shrugged her off just like she did to her sister. Two months passed trying to find new friends, but without success. Ariana felt more and more lonely. Something was missing in her life. Something indescribable. Something, or maybe someone.Week after week went by and then, o

14、ne day, holding yet another batch of mail, Arianas heart trembled. She realized what she was painfully missing, her FAMILY. Whenever she was down, whenever she needed help or comfort, they were there for her. Always. This time she opened the little rainbow envelope and smiled. Reading it filled her

15、heart with joy. Ariana couldnt reply, for the school didnt allow that, so she decided to hide the letters under her pillow. The pile grew larger and they were so important to her, for the letters gave her the greatest comfort when she was away from home.Months passed eagerly waiting for the day when

16、 the school year ends. No more dorm life and unfriendly girls. Ariana skipped to math class excitedly, but couldnt concentrate, she dreamed about going home. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Finally it was the day to go home and Ariana started to pack.Ariana was leaving the dorm when she realize

17、d she forgot something important.Writing 4（2022.山东.济南市历城第二中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Edward walked slowly past the school blacktop where his older brother, Leon, was playing basketball with his friends. Leon didnt notice Edward until he turned to shoot the ball. Leon really loved b

18、asketball and was good at it. But Edward was another story.Edward would beg to play with them but Leons friends complained a lot. For some reason, in that last game, Edwards playing was worse than ever. He couldnt do anything right. He was completely unable to keep possession of the ball. He missed

19、even the easy rebounds. His dribbling was useless, and none of his throws were anywhere near the basket. Leon had to turn his brother away.Edward was always a whiz at math. He was so advanced that he already knew how to solve long division problems before he was taught in school. Word problems, even

20、 the complicated ones with several steps, were no problem.One day, Leons math teacher, pulled him aside. You need to do better, a lot better, or youre not going to pass this class. Theres a big test coming up. ”Leons heart sank. When he got home, he talked with Edward about it. The boys agreed that

21、over the next two weeks they intended to spend an hour each day after school working on math problems and then an hour playing basketball.“Here is a good one J Edward said and pointed to a word problem.66 Why dont you read it?” Leon looked at the book fbr several seconds. Im dizzy already!” He excla

22、imed.“Do you know what the first step is?” asked Edward, The first step is to stay cool and focused.Edward talked Leon through the problem. Think about what you need to find out. Dont let the problem trick you. Step by step, together they figured it out and got the right answer. Leon soon discovered

23、 that Edward was really good at helping him.Paragraphl.Soon it was time for basketball practice.Paragraph!.The morning of the math test came all too soon for Leon.Writing 5（2022.湖南.长郡中学二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。Having struggled with financial difficulties for six months and failing to

24、 find a way out, I had to close my technology writing business. Fortunately, I found a new job as a salesperson and soon got a client. At the time, I wondered if it was too good to be true.By the second month, something didnt seem right, and I developed a bad feeling about the client and the work. W

25、hen the third months check didnt arrive on time, I sent the client an e-mail to find out what was going on. But there was no reply. Then I sent another e-mail, and another. The check never arrived, and I never heard from the client again. With no hope in sight, I hit rock bottom. Panic replaced caut

26、ious optimism along with my last self-confidence.I hid myself from friends and locked myself in my room. One night, the phone rang. The call was from Eric, a friend of mine from high school. When he was in high school, he told me many times about his parents, divorce and his loss of confidence in th

27、e college entrance examination. During the difficult time, I gave him much comfort and encouragement. Later, he went to college and was always grateful for what I had done.After the greetings, I told my problems and challenges, hoping my friend would say something comforting. What I didnt expect was

28、 a string of sharp words. What is wrong with you? You can do anything you want to do J he said. You are a writer, so start writing. Write fbr magazine.” “Write fbr magazine? Are you out of your mind? I dont know the first thing about writing for magazine, let alone write things that anyone would wan

29、t to read. And I have to know where I can send an application form-to what magazine and to what editor J I shouted at him. 注意：1,续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting.On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor.Writing 6（2022.江苏南京,模拟预测）阅

30、读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Flora and her dad were going to move to a new house. Friday, a truck would come for the furniture. Then the next week, workers would dig up the yard. Where Flora and Papi had grown flowers, the workers would put in a parking lot.“Our poor flowers J Flora sighed t

31、o herself, looking at the bright purple blooms and soft and green weed coming out of the soil. She sat outside, selling things she didnt want to take to the new house. Beside her hung a sign that said “Yard Sale： Her yard sale was the first one of the year on Apple Street, and several of her neighbo

32、rs had come over to have a look.Papi came out. He held a dish piled high with nuts. Heres a snack for everyone,he said. Floras dad loved sharing things. Most of all he loved sharing jokes. He smiled when he saw Floras sign and winked （眨眼）at the customers gathered around.“Yard sale? What are you sell

33、ing yards of? Or meters of?” he asked. Ribbons? Carpet? Cloth? Wheres your ruler?”“Not that kind of yard9 joked Mrs. Ciro. It must be this nice grassy yard were standing on thafs fbr sale/9“How much fbr the weed by your sign?” asked Mr. Johnson, joking.Flora gave no response. She didnt think their j

34、okes were funny. She felt extremely in low spirits at the thought that the lovely yard was already sold, and soon their poor flowers and weed would be ruined. Deader than a doorknob/ Papis papi would say”, she thought to herself bitterly, “Whats worse, the new house doesnt have any flowers atWith a

35、sigh, Flora dug her heels deep into the grass. But when she felt the soft earth move under her heels, she knew what she could do.She whispered her clever plan to Papi. He nodded, smiling, and sat down in her seat instead. 注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a t

36、rowel （园艺铲）to dig with.Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers.Writing 7（2022.重庆一中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。Rivaldo was playing football from the age of 4. When he was 7, he joined a local football club. He attended the training regularly but never got a cha

37、nce to play in matches. But the coach had faith in him. He told Rivaldo that he should focus on hi training, and one day he would get the chance. Rivaldo had no other option but to continue training in the club. He was training very hard and focused on improving himself.Even after two years in the c

38、lub, he never played in a match. He was not even allowed to travel along with the team. One day their club had a charity match, where a famous footballer was a chief guest. While the team was planning to travel, one of the support staff who used to take care of kits got ill. So, they needed someone

39、for this.The coach thought this should be an opportunity for Rivaldo. So, he told him to travel with the team and take care of the kits. Other support staff objected to it, but he convinced them.The team reached the stadium. There were a lot of crowds to witness the celebrity footballer. For Rivaldo

40、, this is his first-time experience in the stadium. He was helping the other players with the kits for the pre-match training. The coach came for a chat with Rivaldo. He told Rivaldo, You are playing today.”Rivaldo, fbr a moment, got frozen and asked him why. He said, One of the players from the tea

41、m got injured while training. So, we are short of players. We need someone to be in the field to make it 11. But I know you are more than that. So, go and prove yourself. There was resistance from the support staff. Luckily for Rivaldo, the coach, through the organizing committee, convinced Rivaldos

42、 team management to allow him to play. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When the match started, Rivaldo was running like a deer.After the match, the celebrity footballer walked to Rivaldo.真题过芙）1. （2022年1月，浙江卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。When Dr. Henderson was assigning （指定）project mate

43、s for his psychology class, I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn*t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive, extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality

44、 to match. As fate （命运） would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself He looked at me as though I werentthere. I felt he treated me as th

45、ough I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasnt mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to say, I didnt look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to

46、make the best of it and didnt say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis （假说）,set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both s

47、tudents.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good gradesthe exact opposite of me. I was outmatched. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didnt want to

48、 give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasnt sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .

49、结局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1. We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Para 2.One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.2. （2022,新高考卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different pri