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1、八下英语作文指导要想在考试有限的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的书面表达，须掌握熟练的解题技巧，把握几个解题关键，这里介绍一种五步写作法。1.细心审题审题，即考生动笔前通过仔细阅读试题，明确目的要求。书面表达题可能是以汉语提示为信息，也可能是以一组画面为信息，还有可能是以英语短文为信息，无论是以何种方式提供信息，只要细心审题，考生理解命题意图和所要表达的内容，一般不会存在太大的问题，因为书面表达题仅是简易的英语写作，要求并不太高，但这并不是说，审题就不重要了。通过审题可以达到：(1)明确体裁。书面表达虽然重在内容，但格式也不能忽视。如NMET99书面表达，回信中的开头语和结束语者都是基本要点，不可遗漏

2、。(2)确定内容。弄清题目设置的情景或提供的要点，便能紧扣题意，定什么不写什么，做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。(3)确定人称。弄清命题者要求考生用什么人称。历年书面表达题都对人称提出要求。如NMET97、98书面表达评分标准就明确规定：凡不以第一人称口吻表述者，从原得分中扣除7分。但历年考试都有考生在没有确定人称的情况下匆匆动笔，结果白白丢分。(4)确定时态语态。时态语态的准确运用，亦是判断书面表达好坏的一条重要标准。一般说来，说明文、议论文多用一般现在时，记日记多用一般过去时，记叙文多用一般过去时和过去进行时。通过审题，明确体裁，知道事情发生的时间，对确定时态起着关键作用。2.理顺要

3、点根据考纲要求，漏写或没写清要点均要失分。理顺要点，是防止多写、漏写、乱写，保证内容完整的行之有效的办法，有的书面表达要点并非按事件发生顺序提供，考生须通过严密的构思加以条理化，最好在写作前将试题中的要点用笔标出，然后按事件先后或各要点之间的内在联系排列好。如果是看图作文，则要依次观察每幅图画，再将每幅画的含意加以连贯，构思出文章的整体框架。有的抽象事物，如心理活动很难通过图画直观地表达出来，这就要求考生仔细观察细节，从人物的衣着、外部表情入手，分析其心理活动，挖掘其内涵因素，使心理描写符合事情发展的逻辑。理顺要点，既可保证不遗漏所要表达的信息，又可使表达的内容条理清楚，否则写出的文章就有可能

4、语无伦次，颠三倒四。3.组织句子将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，这是书面表达的关键的一步。完成这个步骤要注意：(1)书面表达重在达意，不要简单直译，而要用自己最有把握的短语或句型将意思完整表达出来，切忌使用冷僻词语，切忌用汉语句型去套用英语，乃至写出大量汉式英语。(2)如果碰上汉语提示中一时找不着相对应的英语词语或句型，不要轻易放弃，要开动脑筋，学会用内容相近的句子来表达。(3)尽可能写结构简单的句子，少用自己尚无把握的复合句。(4)选择正确的人称、时态、语态，注意冠词、单复数、大小写、标题等。上述几点在组织句子时若能高度重视，则错误便可大大减少。4.串句成篇这个过程就是将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，

5、形成短文。串句成篇，绝不是将一句话一句话简单地排在一起，要注意上下句的逻辑关系，必要时使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语。有的书面表达还可以分段，但段与段之间要过渡自然。若词数少于题目要求，可适当增加一些与内容相关的句子；若词数多于题目要求，也可考虑将能够合并的句子合并起来。5.检查修改文章草稿写成后，默读一至两遍，检查修改，看文章是否对题，格式是否正确，内容是否完整，文句有无语病，行文是否连贯，拼写是否错误，词数是否恰当。有的书面表达题要求考生自拟标题，考生这时要注意不要丢掉标题，还要注意标题首字母的大写(标题中实词则大写首字母，虚词则不必大写)；如命题者不要求考生自拟

6、标题的则不必拟标题，以免画蛇添足。经过检查修改后，再认真誊写，力求卷面整洁。这样经过周密思考、按步骤写出来的文章，比起毫无计划、信手拈来的文章质量肯定要好得多。总之，书面表达题是英语高考试题中的一道大题，它又是考生通过短期训练能够迅速提高水平的一道题，很值得考生在这道题上下点功夫。主要背课本Section B3a的课文.很重要的.里面的句子也可能考到.还可以套用.一、假如你所在的三(3)班于10月10日星期天将去参观北京动物园，请你以口头的方式向你班上的同学宣读一个通知。要注意包含以下信息：北京动物园有100多年历史，它是世界上最大的动物园之一。你们于10月10日，早晨7：00在校门口集合，乘

7、车前往，大家自带午餐和饮料；因为要走很多路，所以要穿结实的鞋子。范文：Attention,please,boys and girls.I have apiece of good news to tell you.All the students in our class will go to visit Beijing Zoo on Sunday,October 10.Beijing Zoo has ahistory of more than 100 years.It is one of the biggest zoos in the world.We will meet at 7：00 at

8、 the school gate on October 10,and we will go there by bus.Please take your lunch and drinks with you.Besides,wear strong shoes because we shall walk along way.Thats all.Thank you.二、假如你是李峰，是一名初二学生，你的学校最近建立了一个保护野生动物俱乐部 Friend of Nature。请你写一封申请信，要求加入俱乐部。要点如下：你想成为俱乐部的成员。你的身份、兴趣和爱好。你对野生动物的热爱以及对保护它们的重要性的

9、认识。每个星期天上午9点到10点可以参加俱乐部活动。联系方式：(电话号码或邮件地址)。Dear sir/madam,I am astudent at Beijing Sunshine Secondary School.I would like to become amember of Friend of Nature because Ienjoy the beauty of nature and like wildlife alot.I am interested in reading about wildlife and Iquite understand the important of

10、protecting wildlife.I want to do something to help wildlife and protect the nature.I can come to club activities from 9a.m.to 10 a.m.every Sunday.I will be very happy if Ican become amember of your club.You can call me on 010- or e-mail me at Li Feng.Yours,Li Feng三、结合你所经历的一次自然灾害写一篇短文，提示内容如下：去年6月25日，

11、一场暴雨袭击了我的家乡。我在学校上课，因为雨大，李老师让我们早点回家。在回家的路上，我看见许多人在车站等车。一阵大风吹跑了我的雨伞。大雨下了一夜，第二天。A strong rainstorm hit my home town.It happened on June 25th last year.I was at school.Because it rained heavily,Mr Li asked us to go home early.On my way home,I saw many people waiting for the bus at the station.A strong w

12、ind blew away my umbrella.I nearly fell down.When Igot home,I was all wet.It rained for the whole night.On the second day,the rainwater was everywhere.The traffic was very bad because of the rainstorm.We were all late for school.四.假如你是Sandy，请你根据下面要点写一篇70词左右的报道8月14日(星期六)发生了一次山崩(landslide)。连续两天大雨后，山崩发

13、生在早晨。那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开。雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞。这时房子开始摇晃，人们非常害怕，迅速跑开了。第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。There was alandslide on Saturday,14th August.After two days of heavy rain,the landslide happened in the morning.A girl was at home with her Mum that day.Her Dad came home in the afternoon and t

14、old them to leave the flat.Because of the heavy rain,he advised them to bring umbrellas.They got out quickly.Suddenly the building started shaking.People were frightened and ran away quickly.The weather was really terrible.The following morning,they went back home.The girl found there was no house a

15、t all.There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere.The girl felt very sad.unit2.3b的小作文Dear Lonely Kid,There are alot of things you could do.You cuold talk to your friends about it.Or maybe you should be more friendly or you could call you best friend up.Maybe this party is just for you！Good

16、 luck！yours,Mary八年级下册28页3b作文Last night onYoung Lives,it wan an exciting ning.There was asurpriseparty.Lana said she would bring some drinks and snaks to Marciashouse on Friday night.But Lana forgot to bring some thing.Marcia was still very glad.Then they went to the park outside Marciashouse.Marcia

17、and Lana were surprised to see their classmates.They smiled.Then every student took out their gifts.They laughed,ate snd drank.How happy they were！第四单元30页3b的作文Dear Bob，I got my report card today.Well,I did OK this time.I was very glad to hear that my math teacher said Iwas hard-working.And my Spanis

18、h teacher said Iwas good at speaking.However,I still had some trouble in learning history and science.My history said Icould do better,and my science said Iwas alazy student.In aword,I think Ineed to study hard in the next semester.Yours,Scott Unit 5Section B3c的那个小作文Maybe Ill become adriver.If Ibeco

19、me adriver,Ill work with people.I love talking,so Ill be happy.I will also be able to work outside sometimes.But Iwont be famous.Maybe Ill be alawyer.If Ibecome alawyer.Ill be able to help people.But Iwont be able to work outside and Iwont be able to work with people.I think Ill be adriver！八年级下册38页3

20、b 1Dear Mr.Brown,I have decided that Iwill join the Lions.If Ijoin the team,I guess that Ill become agreat soccer player.I love soccer！I will also travel around the world if Ibecome alion.I dream of travelling around the world.Besides,Ill be very rich and famous if Iwork really hard.In aword,Im sure

21、 that Ican have agreat time in this soccer team.Sincerely Michael 2Perhaps Ill become asinger.If Ibecome asinger,I can make alot of money.I will work with actors.I will also become very rich and famous.But Ill be very tired and sleepy if Ising too many songs.Maybe Ill become ahostess.If Ibecome ahos

22、tess,I can speak English clearly and Ican make friends with foreigners.I will also get alot of money and smile alot.However,sometimes its dangerous for me to become ahostess because of the plane accidents.一.请根据下面所给材料写一篇短文，介绍你的好友Huang yifei.(80词左右)Name Huang yifei Date of birth February 16th,1995 200

23、0 started to learn English 2002 started to play basketball 2005 joined the school basketball team 2007 won the first prize of School English Speech Contest二.根据汉语提示及要求，以My Dranm Job为题用英语写一篇短文.提示：1.想成为一名记者.2.打算给报纸,杂志写文章.3.高中毕业后想去北京上大学.4.想在一家电台工作并环游世界.要求：1.条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范.2.提示内容全部体现在文章中.3.不少于60词.以M

24、y Beautiful Dream为题用英语写一篇短文，词数在60左右。范文(一)My Beautiful Dream Last night Ihad abeautiful dream.I had turned into an alien.I flew my UFO in the sky.Suddenly Isaw some people playing in apark.They were very happy.I wanted to join them.So Ilanded in the park and got out of the UFO.When the people saw me,

25、they were scared.I said hello to them.But they didnt understand me.After awhile,only akid came to me and asked,Who are you?I am your friend.The boy got happy.He moved to my UFO.May Iplay with you?Sure.You can play in the UFO with me.When we got into the UFO,it started to fly into the sky.Suddenly it

26、 fell to the ground.I was scared and jumped up from the bed.Oh！It was adream！范文(二)My dream job Ienjoy singing.When Igrow up,Ill become asinger.If Ido well in singing,Ill become famous.If Ibecome famous,Ill make alot of money.If Imake alot of money,Ill have my own company,Ill give money to charities

27、and do alot of work to help others and Ill travel all over the world.However,being asinger can also have many problems.If Iam famous,people will watch me all the time and follow me everywhere.This can make my life difficult.And if Ibecome rich,Ill have adifficult time knowing who my real friends are

28、.But Istill want to be asinger.书面表达。(10分)假如你们班将举行一场以How to learn English为主题的英语计论会，请根据以下提示写一份发言稿。80词左右。-书面表达根据图示，用英语写一篇日记。词数：70左右。日记的开头已给出。体示词语：blind，hospital，be late，praise(vt)表扬(规则动词)Friday May 9,2004 This morning on my way to school,答案Friday May 9,2004 This morning on my way to school,I saw ablind

29、 Man walking across the street.I came up to him(at once)and helped him walk to the other side of the street.The man wanted to go to the hospital,so Itook him there.Then Iran all the way to school but Iwas late for class.After the teacher knew what had happened(After Itold the teacher what had happen

30、ed),he praised me.I was so happy.书面表达假如你的朋友Sandy Lee今天(6月29日)病了，你带她去看医院看病，医生诊断为重感冒，建议休息2天。请你一她的名义给王老师写请假条，要求请假2天。注意请假条格式，词数50左右。写作(15分)根据下面提供的内容，以Dont cut in line为题写一篇不少于80词左右的短文。提示：1上周四你放学回家后，得知父亲生病住院了，你匆匆赶往医院。2在车站等车你插队遭到谴责。3你认识到插队是不文明的行为。4你决定以后不再插队。开头：Last Thursday afternoon,when Igot back home fr

31、om school,-书面表达(15分)假设你是李刚，是一位14岁的集邮爱好者。5年来你集了500多张邮票，保存在一本旧书中。邮票内容各异：有关奥运会的，著名科学家的，动物的等等。根据上述内容写一封交友信简单介绍自己。60字书面表达。(15分)暑假生活即将开始，小明打算提高他的英语成绩，但不知该如何去做，请把你的秘诀告诉他好吗?Its not very difficult to learn English.But the most important thing is the method of learning.Firstly,you can join an English club.The

32、re you can practice speaking with others.And you can also meet alot of new friends.Secondly,you can do more listening in the morning,listen to the tapes and repeat after it.In this way,you can improve your listening.Thirdly,you can find apen-pal,and write to him as often as possible,your writing ski

33、ll must be improved.All in all,I think the most important thing is to be confident.书面表达。(15分)请以Have you ever been to the Great Wall?为题写一篇记述文。内容提示如下：1、长城的景色及地理位置2、游长城的感受3、文章以设问句Have you ever been to the Great Wall?开头。Have you ever been to the Great Wall?OK,I have been there once.That was asunny day,m

34、y friends and Itook abus to the Great Wall.When we got the foot of it,we saw alot of visitors.We began to climb the wall.At this time we saw the beautiful scenery,the wall is like ahuge dragon.the Great Wall is famous as its old walls in the world.Its not far from the city of Beijing.Its said that i

35、t is one of the seven wonders in the world.Its very long,the most famous wall is Badaling Wall,Im proud that Igot to the top of the wall.Though we were all tired,we felt very happy.书面表达(共15分)根据下面所给的提示,用英语写一篇约4050词的短文(短文首句已给出)。提示：get up,hurry,tooto,stop himself,at the crossing,light,red,hit,fall down

36、,hurt,be carried to Li Ming got up at aquarter past seven this morning.书面表达(10分)。根据下列设置的情景和英文提示词，写出语法正确、意思连贯的50词左右的短文。所给英文提示词必须都用上。昨天下午当我沿着大街散步时遇到了一个小女孩，她拦住我并问我是否看见一条狗跑过来，我问她的狗是什么颜色，我愿意帮助她寻找丢失的狗。我们直到天黑也没找到那条狗。提示词：meet,when,walk,street,stop,ask,see,run,colour,help,lost,find,until,dark书面表达(10分)。根据图画和提

37、示词，写一篇短文60-70词的短文。开头已给出，不计词数。英文提示：interesting；forgot；everything；finish；change；to ones surprise；missing；scatter(分散；散布)；follow；monkey；read；as Tom It was Sunny and warm.One morning Tom took some books outside.He was sitting on the grass and reading anovel with the other books beside him.The book was so

38、 interesting that_写作。(10分)Kay说她的衣服过时了，要妈妈给她买新衣服。妈妈说学生不应该太在乎穿着打扮，况且家里就爸爸一个人工作，没有很多钱。为此Kay和妈妈吵了一架。事后Kay非常后悔。假如你是Kay请给妈妈写一封信。(60字左右)八下总复习六：书面表达(书面表达1)假如你的新笔友叫Mike。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的情况。信的内容必须包括：你的姓名，年龄，所就读的学校，年级、班级，爱好，最喜欢的学科及理由，最喜欢的影片及理由等。信的内容不得少于十句话。信的开头和结尾已给出。January 12 th,.2002 Dear Mike,Thanks for your

39、letter.Now Id like to tell you something about myself._ Yours,Bob January 12 th,2002 Dear Mike,Thanks for your letter,Now Id like to tell you something about myself.My name is xx.Im twelve.I study at Bei Da Resource Middle School,Im in class Four Grade One.My favorite subject is science and Ialso Li

40、ke geography.Because they are very important and useful.I Like playing the violin.I like an action movie.Because it is exciting.What about you?Do you like an action movie?please write to tell me soon.(书面表达2)请你仔细阅读下面的招聘广告。l Boys and girls aged 12-15.l Are you good with children?l Happy kids winter ca

41、mp Needs help with：l sports music computers lCome and join us！Send your personal(个人)information to hkwc.假如你是李平想要应聘，请你根据招聘广告中的要求，在表格空白处至少填出两项你所能做的事情。并根据表格中的所有信息，发一封e-mail，介绍你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及能力。字数4060。信的开头、结尾已给出NameAgeSchoolLikecan Li Ping13No.3 Middle SchoolReading,computers,Playing basketball Dear sir,I

42、want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.My Ithink Ican be good with the children and Ihope to get your letter soon.Yours,Li Ping Dear sir,I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.My name is Li Ping Iam thirteen(years old).I study/am

43、astudent in No.1 Middle School.I like reading and playing basketball.I like computers,too.I can play football well.I can stag many English songs,And Ican dance and swim.I can surf the Internet and send e-mails.I think Ican be good with the children and Ihope to get your letter soon.Yours,Li Ping(书面表

44、达3)根据提示，请以School Rules为题，写一篇短文或对话提示：每所学校都有规章制度，下面是你们学校的一些规章制度，请你向一位新生Mary作一下介绍。内容包括：1.上课不能迟到。2.教室要保持(keep)干净和安静。3.见到老师要问好。(greet)4.不允许在教室里吃东西。5.不许在课堂上听音乐，玩游戏。6.不要损害花草树木。(pick flowers；climb trees)School Rules Welcome to our school,Mary.Here are some of our school rules.Let me tell you：We cant arrive

45、late for class.We cant talk loudly in class.We have to be quiet in class,and we have to keep our class clean.When we meet the teachers on the way,we must greet them.We cant eat or drink in the classroom.But we can eat outside.We cant listen to music or play games in class,either.We cant pick flowers

46、 or climb trees.(书面表达4)根据下列中英文提示写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的一段话。(不少于50个字)Jim是个中学生，学习努力，平时喜欢上网冲浪和看英语书。他每周锻炼一至两次，饮食习惯良好，天天步行上学，身体健康。提示词：Internet,once or twice,eating habit,hardly,junk food,healthy Jim is ahigh school student.He works hard at school.He usually likes surfing the Internet and reading English books.He ex

47、ercises once or twice aweek.He has good eating habits.He hardly ever eats junk food.Every day he goes to school on foot.So he is very healthy.(书面表达5)根据提示写一封6080字的信。Tom邀请Li Ping参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Li Ping的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说英语考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。Dear Tom,Thank you very much for

48、 inviting me to your birthday party.Id love to go but Icant.My parent_.From Li Ping Dear Tom,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.Id love to go but Icant.My parents are out on business.They are coming back next month.And now Ihave to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed.And Ialso need to study for my coming English exam.Im very sorry but Icant go to your party.Thank you for asking me.I hope you can have agood time.(书面表达6)请用所给资料写一篇短文。Name：Li B