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1、英译汉部分第四章 篇章翻译语篇翻译复现并列结构的翻译方法复现信息结构的翻译方法逻辑重组第四章第一节（1）复现并列结构的处理【文体分析】CATTI 2017年下半年二级笔译试题英译汉第1篇 文章从心理学角度介绍了手机依赖症研究成果 文章分为两个部分。第一部分探讨了手机依赖症的表现，分析了手机依赖症的内部心理成因；第二部分描述了手机的普及性，点出人机无法分离的心理状态，分析手机的积极心理影响。【背景知识】“依恋”是寻求与某人的亲密、并当其在场时感觉安全的心理倾向。早期亲子关系的经验形成了人的“内部工作模式”，这种模式是一种自我对他人的预期，决定了人的处世方式。内部工作模式会在以后的其他关系，特别是

2、成年以后的亲密关系和婚恋关系中起作用。唐 纳 德 温 尼 科 特（Donald Winicott）（1953）：“过 渡 物（Transitional objects）”。【翻译技巧分析】复现关系是词汇衔接的重要组成部分，复现关系的两种类型：重复关系和同义关系。重复性衔接的最佳翻译体现是形式对应，但要注意的情况是同一个词用于不同意义的情况。如果目标语中的对应词与原文用词不共享相同的同义潜式，就会出现翻译困难。同义性衔接通过意思的相同、相近、相反和相关来建构语义关系。同义性衔接的理想翻译仍然是形式对应，因此只要目标语具有相同的同义词资源，最佳的翻译自然是以同义对同义，这样既可以保留原文的衔接功能

3、，又不会损害其修辞价值。【范例讲解】文中复现并列结构主要体现在两处：（1）第1段第1-3句：Perhaps youve temporarily misplaced your cellphone and anxiously retraced your steps to try to find it.Or perhaps younever let go of your phoneits always in your hand,your pocket,or yourbag,ready to be answered or consulted at a moments notice.When yourb

4、attery life runs down at the end of the day,you feel that yours is runninglow as well.（2）第2段第6-9句：They can be kept by your side and they provide asocial connection to the people you care about.Even if youre not talking toyour friends,lover,or family,you can keep their photos close by,read theirmessa

5、ges and follow them on social media.You can track them in real time,but also look back on memorable moments together.【范例讲解】外在行为内部心理表现1Perhapsyouvetemporarilymisplacedyourcellphone或许你只是一时把手机放错了地方Anxiously retracted your steps to try to findit便心急如焚地掉头寻找表现2Or perhaps you never let go of your phoneitsal

6、ways in your hand,your pocket,or your bag.或许你已机不离身，电话不是在手上，就是在口袋里或包里。(cellphone is)ready to be answered orconsulted at a moments notice以便随时查阅或回复表现3When your battery life runs down at the end ofthe day.或许一天下来，手机电量不足。you feel that yours is running low as well你自己也感到筋疲力尽 学生译文：你可能一时错放了手机，着急回想走过的地方，试图找回手机

7、。也可能根本就没有放下手机-它一直就在你的手上、口袋里或者包里，准备收到信息的时候随时回复。（1）Perhaps youve temporarily misplaced your cell phone and anxiouslyretraced your steps to try to find it.Or perhaps you never let go of yourphoneits always in your hand,your pocket,or your bag,ready to beanswered or consulted at a moments notice.When yo

8、ur battery life runs downat the end of the day,you feel that yours is running low as well.【范例讲解】【习题讲解】复现并列关系主要体现在两处：（1）第1段：Ask any random collection of strangers what theylook for in a friend,and odds are youll get pretty similar answersacross the board:someone whos fun to be around.Someonewho share

9、s your sense of humor.Someone you can trust.（2）第3段：Call it a spark,call it chemistry,call it friendship atfirst sight;whatever it is,it can happen in just a small handful ofseconds,which is the amount of time we need to form a firstimpression of someone(if that one study suggests that wemake our jud

10、gments just a tenth of a second after seeing a face).（2）They can be kept by your side and they provide a social connectionto the people you care about.Even if youre not talking to your friends,lover,or family,you can keep their photos close by,read their messagesand follow them on social media.You c

11、an track them in real time,butalso look back on memorable moments together.【范例讲解】手机可以随身携带，为你和你所关心的人提供一种社会联结。即使没有朋友、恋人或家人通话，也可以把他们的照片存放在身边，看看他们发的信息，在社交媒体上关注他们。你不仅可以实时掌握他们的动态，还可以回忆与他们在一起的难忘时刻。【练习讲解】这篇练习中复现并列关系主要体现在两处：第1段：Ask any random collection of strangers what they look forin a friend,and odds are

12、 youll get pretty similar answers acrossthe board:someone whos fun to be around.Someone whoshares your sense of humor.Someone you can trust.第3段：Call it a spark,call it chemistry,call it friendship at firstsight;whatever it is,it can happen in just a small handful ofseconds,which is the amount of tim

13、e we need to form a firstimpression of someone(if that one study suggests that wemake our judgments just a tenth of a second after seeing a face).【练习讲解】（1）Ask any random collection of strangers what they look for ina friend,and odds are youll get pretty similar answers across theboard:someone whos f

14、un to be around.Someone who sharesyour sense of humor.Someone you can trust.译文：随便问一群陌生人，他们在交友时都看中什么,得到的答案一定极其相似：相处时能给你带来快乐的人、能够欣赏你的幽默感的人、你能信任的人。【练习讲解】（2）Call it a spark,call it chemistry,call it friendship at firstsight;whatever it is,it can happen in just a small handful ofseconds,which is the amou

15、nt of time we need to form a firstimpression of someone(if that one study suggests that wemake our judgments just a tenth of a second after seeing a face).译文：无论你称之为燃起火花、发生化学反应，还是一见钟情的友谊，它只在几秒钟内就发生了。这就是我们对一个人形成第一印象的时间（正如一项研究表明，在我们看到他人后，十分之一秒便已经作出了判断）。【本节总结】英语中复现关系是词汇衔接的重要手段，包括重复性衔接和同义性连接两种形式。重复性衔接通过词语重复或词根重复来建构语义关系。同义性衔接通过意思的相同、相近、相反和相关来建构语义关系。重复性衔接和同义性衔接的理想翻译是形式对应。