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1、大学生英语作文赏析关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.Internet sur

2、fing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper a

3、nd more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by c

4、licking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportunities. For exam

5、ple, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revoluti

6、onizing our economy, our society and our life.关于大学生压力的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1

7、)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 2)大学生缓解压力的方式有 3)你一般都是如何排解压力的? How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? _ _ _ 关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文 How Should College

8、Students Relieve Pressure? Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from parents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students

9、confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages

10、 and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Finally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, youd better turn to

11、 professional psychological guidance. 2As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confide

12、nt in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 【亮点点评】 1although引导让步状语从句。 2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 3“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。 4表示目的。 5“扬长避短”。 6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。 7动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。 8“超出范围或能力”。 9强调动词believe。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation,

13、overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 _ 2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。 _ 3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 临摹： 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，

14、大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。 _ 【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students ha

15、ve to develop their abilities 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2)分析产生该现象的原因 3)

16、针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 Credit Cards on Campus _ 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have 1gained more

17、 popularity among college students. 2With banks more focus on college market, 3an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it. 4The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. 5Firstly, a credit card provides

18、overdrawing service, 6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. 5Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 5Besides, many banks make some p

19、referential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. 7Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards. 5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. 5However, there is misuse of credit cards among college st

20、udents. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. 5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. 9Only in this way can college students enjoy real

21、ly the advantages of credit cards. 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。 2“随着”，介词。 3“越来越多的”。 4用于引出原因。 5过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 6which引导非限制性定语从句。 7表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。 8“由此，因此”。 9“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹1.佳句：With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students

22、 have applied for a credit card. 临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 _ 2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school. 临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。 3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for cred

23、it cards. 临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。 _ 【KEY】1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society. 2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment. 3. Forced by

24、 employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.(关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given

25、in Chinese) below: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是很多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是，为什么? Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? _ _ 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 关

26、于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of the living standards, many people are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 3Howev

27、er, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead t

28、o degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. 6As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe 7 “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 5In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. 5Besides, there ar

29、e still millions of Chinese 9living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. 5Therefore, 10it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】 1“不再”。 2表示递进。 3引出另外一种观点。 4“在下降”。 5过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 6用于引出自己的观点或选择。 7引用谚语“俭以防匮”。 8not. but连接并列结构

30、，意为“不是而是”。 9现在分词短语作后置定语。 10“毫无疑问”。 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-佳句临摹 1.佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. 临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。 _ 2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：“有志者，事竟成。” _ 【KEY】 1

31、. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to peoples properties and even taken away thousands of peoples lives. 2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”关于节食减肥的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minut

32、es to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食减肥，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材 2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响 3)你的建议 On Dieting _ _ 关于节食减肥的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可

33、能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。 关于节食减肥的英语作文-高分范文 On Dieting Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight

34、. But still others, 1especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They 2become the leading numbers who go on a diet. 3However, dieting might 4bring great negative effects on people. 3For one thing, quite a lot of people dont really need dieting to keep healt

35、h, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting 5not only is useless but also might damage their health. 3For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. 3As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition. 6Considering the serious damage o

36、f unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. 3In my opinion, dieting,7for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. 8Only with right guidance can dieting work 9as we expect. 关于节食减肥的英语作文-【亮点点评】 1“尤其”，表示强调。 2“成为主力军”。 3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 4用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。 5“not only but also”用于连接并列成分。

37、6“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。 7“不管因为什么原因”，whatever意为“无论什么”。 8“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 9“像我们期望的那样”。 关于节食减肥的英语作文-佳句临摹 1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. 临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。 _ 2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. 临摹： 无论你的

38、目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。 _ 3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect. 临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。 _ 【KEY】 1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality 2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. 3. Only when

39、 adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.关于交通事故的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese

40、) below: 1)交通事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失 2)分析交通事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低交通事故发生率Road Accidents _ _ _ 关于交通事故的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。 关于交通事故的英语作文-高分范文 Road Accidents Road accidents, 1as one o

41、f the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses 2and some of them even lose their lives. 3The following reasons contribute to road acciden

42、ts. 4Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road 5increase the chances of accidents. 4In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even dont comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. 4Besides, the 6weak supervis