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1、2019 年高考语文病句类型必考知识点总结第 1 页，共 15 页高考常考病句类型,记住这些，这种题型的基本上不丢分！中学语文教学资源网语文论坛-HtH7T,一、语序不当（1）名词修饰语多项定语与中心语的正确次序一般是：表领属性的或时间、处所的；指称或数量的短语；动词或动词短语；形容词或形容词短语名词或名词短语。另外，带“的”的定语放在不带“的”的定语前，左边的应该可以修饰右边的。例如：一位优秀的有20 多年教学经验的一位国家队的篮球女教练。正确次序：国家队的（领属性的）一位（数量）有20 多年教学经验的（动词短语）优秀的（形容）篮球（名词）女教练。下面是多项定语次序不当的例子：许多附近的妇女

2、、老人和孩子都跑来看他们。（表数量的“许多”应紧靠中心短语）在新中国的建设事业上，发挥着他们无穷的蕴藏着的力量。（表性质的 无穷的应紧靠中心词）里面陈列着各式各样过去所使用的东西。（表性质的“各式各样”应紧靠中心词。）下面是定语误放状语位置的例子：第 2 页，共 15 页文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 Z

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10、（2）动词修饰语多项状语次序比较复杂，须特别注意的是：先时间后处所；先介词结构后情态动词、形容词；表示对象的介词结构一般紧靠中心语；不要弄错修饰对象。看下面的例子：在这片神奇的土地上上一世纪曾发生过一场血战。（“上一世纪”应放在“这片神奇的土地上”前）我们再也不是任意被列强欺侮的国家。（“被列强”应放在“任意”前，“任意”是表示情态的）科学家急于对兰花在最有异域色彩的热带物种标本完全消失之前进行研究。（“急于对兰花”应放“进行”前）国有 15 个洲禁止黑人在娱乐场所与白人享有平等的地位。（“与白人”应修饰“平等”）大家就工资问题交换了广泛的意见。（“广泛”应修饰“交换”）开考半个小时后，就有人

11、陆续交卷。（“陆续”应修饰“有”）（3）关联词语的位置一般来说，两个分句同一个主语时，关联词语在主语后边；不同主语时，关联词语在主语前边。下面句子是位置不当的例子：他如果不能实事求是，事业就会受到损失。（“他”应移到“如果”后面）要是一篇作品里的第 3 页，共 15 页文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY

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19、中国人民的解放在民族关系上起了基本的变化。（“中国人民的解放”没有“起变化”，“起变化”的是“民族关系”。正确表达应是个兼语句，要改在“为使”）我觉得这个答复，和对这些问题的调查处理，都是一种不负责任的态度。（应该把“是”改做“表现出”。）（2）动词和宾语搭配不当例如：纪念五四青年节的到来。（“纪念”的只能是“五四青年节”而不是“到来”。）解放前，爸爸和哥哥两人挣来的钱还不够养活一家人的生活。（“养活”的只能是人，不能是“生活”。）但也存在着几个缺点需要我们努力。（我们所能“努力”的不是“缺点”，而是“改正”。）（3）修饰语和中心语搭配不当例如：这次大会上，对工资问题交换了广泛的意见。（并不是

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26、L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:C

27、B10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9第一个分句改成两面性的“生产救灾工作做得好不好，决定于干部是否深入群众。”或将第二分句改成一面性的，不过句子结构要调整为“干部深入群众是做好救灾工作的决定条件”。）艺人们过去一贯遭白眼，如今却受到人们的热切的青睐，就在这白眼与青睐之间，他们体味着人间的温暖。（

28、“白眼”和“青睐”指相反的两面，但底下的“温暖”只适用于一面。）（5）否定与肯定搭配不当例如：我想这应该是不必叙述的，没有谁不会想象不出来。“没有谁不会想象不出”等于说“谁都想象不出”，推测原意却是“谁也想象得出”。我们并不完全否认这首诗没有透露出希望，而是说希望是非常渺茫的。“不完全否认”等于“部分承认”，基本上还是承认。因此这句话说“我们承认这首诗没有透露出希望”，刚好和作者的本意相反。改法有两种“我们也承认这首诗也透露了一些希望”或“我们并不否认这首诗也透露了一些希望”会员家属除凭发出的入场券外，并须有家属徽章，无二者之一不能入场。“无二者之一即不能入场”从字面意思上推，可有“有二者之一

29、即可入场”的意思。跟原意不符，应该说二者缺一即不能入场。三、成分残缺或赘余成分残缺（1）缺主语例如：由于他这样好的成绩，得到了老师和同学们的赞扬。（“得到”的主语什么？改为“由于这样好的成绩，他得到了”。这是滥用介词造成了主语残缺）十月十四日，抱着向航空系学习的想法，我们的黑板报也创刊了。（“抱着”的主语显然是之后的“我们”但后句的主语是第 5 页，共 15 页文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2

30、 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2

31、C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4

32、L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:C

33、B10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10

34、X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9

35、U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2

36、R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9“黑板报”，不是“我们”，应把后句改为“我们也办起了黑板报”。）（2）缺谓语例如：可见对工人阶级的关心负责的态度到何等的薄弱程度。（“到”在这里不能做谓语的主要成分，只能将“薄弱”提上来，可“态度”是不能薄弱的，

37、句子应改为“的关心和负责薄弱到何种程度！”）最近又发动了全面的质量大检查运动，要在这个运动中建立与加强技术管理制度等一系列的工作。（“一系列的工作”是哪个动词的宾语呢？也许是“建立与加强”的？“建立与加强工作”又讲不通，在“建立”前少个谓语“完成”。）（3）缺宾语例如：虽然每天工作很忙，但还是抓紧和同学研究或自己看书。（“抓紧”什么？“时间”一词不能省，应在其后加上“时间”一词。）我们要尽一切力量使我国农业走上机械化，集体化。（“走上”要求有一个名词做它的宾语，“机械化”“集体化”虽然都是动词，但是，“走”的应是“路”，所以句子应是“走上的道路”）这种语病往往是由宾语前的修饰语过长或修饰语本身

38、也是名词造成的。四、成分赘余（1）堆砌例如：要考虑我国政治与文化环境的需要，发展我们的出版业。（“环境 应删去。）现在渔民自己选出了行政组长，负责掌握渔民的生活及生产的管理。（掌握应删去。）（2）重复例如：一年来，妇女工作已打下了相当的工作基础，获得了一定的工作经验。（第二、第三个“工作”应删去。）第 6 页，共 15 页文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:C

39、B10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10

40、X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9

41、U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2

42、R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4

43、 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G

44、10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档

45、编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9其实这是过虑的想法。（“虑”就是想，应删去“的想法”。）（3）可有可无例如：不知不觉就走了十里路左右的距离，（应删去“的距离”。）父亲逝世离现在已整整九年了。（应删去“离现在”。）（4）应删去“的”字例如：出人意料的，今年三月，物价的下跌，后来慢慢的稳

46、定了。（加了“的”，句子转为短语，意思也变了，不是物价稳定，而是“下跌”稳定了。）由于历代动乱和气候的潮湿，几乎所有当时的绘画遭受毁灭。（“历代”和“动乱”中间也可加“的”而没有加，为了句子整齐，“气候”和“潮湿”中间就不必加“的”。）五、结构混乱这是一个很大的类句，这里谈的是不能用“主语”“宾语”等来归类的情形。这里最常见的是一句之内两种结构纠缠不清，有以下类型：（1）举棋不定作者时而要用这种结构，时而要用那种结构，结果两种结构都用了。例如：多年来曾被计划经济思想束缚下的人们也觉悟起来。（应该在“曾被束缚的”和“在束缚下的”两种格式中选用一个。）这慷慨悲歌的壮举的背后，还是自信心不够的表现。

47、（应该在“的背后还是自信心不够”和“壮举还是自信心不够的表现”里选用一个。）（2）藕断丝连第 7 页，共 15 页文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C

48、1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L

49、8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB

50、10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X9文档编码:CB10G10J4L8P4 HS2C1X2R8B2 ZY9U10S4N10X