最新如何取得作文高分-四级CET-4作文写作精讲(三)教学课件.ppt

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1、如何取得作文高分如何取得作文高分-四级四级CET-4CET-4作文写作精讲作文写作精讲(三三)Howevermeanyourlifeis,meetitandliveit;donotshunitandcallithardnames.Itisnotsobadasyouare.Itlookspoorestwhenyouarerichest.Thefault-finderwillfindfaultsinparadise.Loveyourlife,poorasitis.Donottroubleyourselfmuchtogetnewthings,whetherclothesorfriends.Turnt

2、heold,returntothem.Thingsdonotchange;wechange.Sellyourclothesandkeepyourthoughts.-HenryDavidThoreauTherearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.Firstofall,itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercec

3、ompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Secondly,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureapersonsability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.P2P3nFrommypoin

4、tofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincecertificatesdonotnecessarilyproveonesability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyisnothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue.常用句子拓展B 观点句型1.人们重视/看中/珍爱某物placeahighvalue

5、onsth./treasuresth/cherishsth.2.增强竞争力sharpenonesedge/enhanceonescompetitiveness3.起.重要作用playacentralrolein/playachiefpartin4.对.有好处.paysoff/itpaysto./sth.isbeneficial(rewarding)5.对.有坏处.haveanegativeimpacton/doharm(damage)tosth.6.促进/提高/增强/改善giveaboostto/optimize/enhance/boost/accelerate7.减低/降低/影响decrea

6、se/decelerate/influence/haveanimpacton/haveeffectson常用句子拓展 结尾类A.A.引出结尾句型1.最重要的是-Lastbutnotleast/Onethingtobenotedis/TheultimateelementIhavetomakeis/Thegreatestsignificanceofallis/2.无论怎样-Nomatterwhathappens,onethingisthat/Whateveroccurs,justbearinmindthat/3.毋庸置疑-itgoeswithoutsayingthat/Needlesstosay,

7、/Itisabsolutelydoubtlessthat4.综上所述，我们可得出结论是Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Takingintoaccountallthesefeatures/Fromtheanalysisabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat常用句子拓展 结尾类B.措施类措施类1.真到了该的时候了Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasison(好)/Itishightimethatweputanendtotheundesirablephenomenonof(坏)2.毋庸置疑，对于.问题

8、，我们应该给与更多重视。Thereislittledoubt/nodenyingthatfurtherattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof3.很必要的是我们应采取有效措施来阻止事情的恶化。Itisindispensablethateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventthesituationfromworsening.总结总结T2(问题解决型问题解决型)命题特点命题特点n提纲1出现一种现象/情况。n提纲2出现“为什么”，“原因”,“解释”，“例如”n提纲3出现“如何解决”,“怎么办”,“你的做法”请根据提纲写一段结尾。请根据提

9、纲写一段结尾。(7MIN)n提纲：如何提高学校的伙食质量。要求：按照TYPE2的模板，写一个结尾，不超过50词。Homework:Creating a Green Campusn140 words.140 words.n提纲:1)建设绿色校园十分重要2）绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3）为了建设绿色校园我们应该。作文实用技巧作文实用技巧(下下)1用词用词a.形象生动，形象生动，多用实意词和少用超高频词多用实意词和少用超高频词nChinaseconomybeginstoincrease/（）.nsoarnPiracyhasbecomeaphenomenonthatcanbeseeneverywhere.

10、nPiracyhasbecomea（）phenomenon.nprevalent/prevailing挖掘身边的美词n地名：南屏晚钟，雷峰夕照，塞北，江南n人名：齐白石，江小鱼，李若竹，方喆人n词牌：西江月，如梦令，忆江南n形容词：n缱绻，旖旎，娉婷，料峭n爱情：n关关雎鸠，在河之洲。n盈盈一水间。n“我行过许多地方的桥，看过许多次数的云，喝过许多种类的酒，却只爱过一个正当最好年龄的人。”“翩若惊鸿，婉若游龙，荣曜秋菊，华茂春松。仿佛兮若轻云之蔽月，飘飖兮若流风之回雪。”-洛神赋，曹植“湖水悠悠漾爱痕，岸花摇影狎波翻。只容天女来修供，不遣阿难着体温。”所谓文化的意义，就是时空荏苒，千年之下，仍

11、然能用相同的符号（文字、音乐、绘画、建筑，以及一切与艺术相关的人类活动），呼应你类似的美好感受，从而体味生之美好。人与动物最根本的区别，大抵就在这里。1用词b.词语的感情色彩词语的感情色彩nIamfoolish,mysonis(),andmyex-husbandis().nSilly,stupidnWomenare()and();menareuglyandthin.nhomelyandslender1用词用词c.准确准确nImustimprovemyEnglishlevel/（）.nThetrafficinbigcitiesisgettingmoreandmorecrowded/（）.1 1用

12、词用词d.明白易懂明白易懂nTobeathree-good/（）student,wehavetoworkhard.nExcellent/all-round/versatilenInanutshell/（）,IthinkthebestwaytoreadistoreadextensivelynInconclusion,toconclude,Allinall2句子a.a.句法结构句法结构 牛津高阶英汉双解牛津高阶英汉双解1064-10651064-1065：4040/18/18 SV/SVO/SP SV/SVO/SP日耳曼语系的句法日耳曼语系的句法n名词阴阳性：太阳，月亮，勺子，叉子，n动词变位，六

13、种n四个格位NGADn介词多n语序n发音n思维2句子nb.意义表达和逻辑n意义表达：n逻辑：ne.g.Smokingisdefinitelyharmfulnowadays,_,smokingbanisuniversalacrossthenation.2句子nc.位置和功能（主题句，段落主题句，总结句）位置和功能（主题句，段落主题句，总结句）nd.连接连接经典连接。经典连接。nFirstly,Secondly,Thirdly,nForonething,Foranother,Lastbutimportantly,nInthefirstplace,Inthesecondplace,Finally,n

14、Ononehand,Ontheotherhand,nFirstofall,Inaddition,Consequently,nTobeginwith,whatsmore,lastbutnottheleast,T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P1S1n第一段：n。正成为一个颇受关注的话题，在人群中引起热议。Recently,题目hasbecomeacommoninterestamongpeople/universitystudents,whichinturnleadstoahotdiscussion.Presentlyagreatnumberofpeoplerecognizedtheimporta

15、nceof题目。T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S1n第二段：n什么原因使得大家如此关注呢？n举例：CertificateCrazeonCampus.nHowtoBuildAGreenCampusnOnlineShoppingnHarmfulnessofFakeCommoditiesnCheatinginExamsT2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S1nWhatarethereasonsforpeoplesattentiontothisphenomenon?nWhatonearthleadstosuchcraze?nWhatarethereasonsaccountingforsuchph

16、enomenon?nHowmanyreasonscouldpossiblyaccountforthistendency?T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S2正（中）正（中）n首先，XX问题的重要性在于。nFirstly,thesignificanceof题目liesinthefactthatpeople/studentsareindesperateneedof一个绿色校园很多证书有效的英语学习一技之长inordertohaveaguaranteed环境/未来/明天。T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S3正（中）正（中）n其次，拥有也可以使我们更好的获取知识。nObtaining/Havi

17、ng题目里的核心名词（最好能用和题目不同的表述）canenableustogainabetterandmoreprofoundunderstandingof知识/环境/生活/社会itself。n例如。TakeYYforexample.T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S4正（中）正（中）n最后，理解了XX的重要性可以帮助我们认清A和B的关系。nAunderstandingof绿色校园/外语的重要性/考证现象,finally,canmakeusmoreawareoftherelationshipbetween人类和世界学习与工作生活与健康学习和环境效率和经济T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2

18、S2（反）（反）n如：压力山大，人与人的不信任、环境污染，作弊,假货,食品安全问题。n首先，XX是由于人们/学生们没有真正意识到。的价值nInthefirstplace,theXXresultsfromalackofrecognitionofthetruevalueofnPeople,firstofall,failedtorecognizetherealvalueof诚信健康学习知识产权例如：T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P2S4（反）（反）n其次，目前的生活方式/学习方式太过于强调实用性/功利性。nAdditionally,thetraditionalwayoflearning/livin

19、gemphasizestoomuchontheso-calledpracticality/function/efficiency/utility.例如。学钢琴只是为了获奖建电厂只是为了发电盗版只是为了使用打工只是为了挣钱T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P3S1n我们该怎样做来支持/鼓励/反对/制止这种现象呢？nToconclude,howshallwedotosupport/advocate/comeoutinfavoroffightagainst/beagainst/opposetheabovephenomenon?T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P3S2n一方面，政府/当局者/校方应该制定

20、清晰的政策来引导人们的认识nOnonehand,thegovernmenttheauthorityuniversitiesshouldworkoutmorerelevantregulationstomakepeoplemoreorientedtotheimportanceofthisissue.T2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P3S3n另一方面，公民/学生自己也要强化自己对。问题的触觉。nOntheotherhand,citizens/studentsthemselvesshouldalsoreinforcetheirownawarenessoferectingagreencampusharm

21、fulnessoffakecommoditiesimportanceofEnglishlearningseverityofcheatinginexamsT2问题解决型模板问题解决型模板P3S4n只有两方面努力结合好了，我们才能。nOnlybyachievingabalancebetweentheabovetwofactorsthejointeffortsoftheabove-mentionedfactorsncanpeople/studentshaveabrightfuture.3 避免中式英语 改错练习 0706n1Englishinterestingclubn2Thenumbersasso

22、ciatedwithidentitytheftarebeginningtoaddupfastthesedays.n3Ifyoufinishthecourses,youllbecomethesocialqueeninourparty.Whatsmore,inaddition,wealsocanproducesomesurveiner.n4Youllfellgoodwhenyoujoininourclub.n5Onlyneedaletterwithyourname,age,likesomething,goodatsomethingandsoon.n6Iknowsomeonecouldntunder

23、standourclubsmeanings.n7Ourclubisthebestclub.WhyIsaythat?n8Dontlosemoretime.n9Ourclubisyourdevelopingroom.n10.Somuchiswaitingforyourparticipatein.改错练习改错练习0706n11Thebenefitsjoinourclubisyoucanimproveyourkilloftakingphoto.n12Ifamansows,heshallareap.n13Anewclub“PPT”n14Inourclub,therearemanynumbers.n15T

24、hanyouhearthis,areyoumindmoving,n16“Welcometoourclub”,amansaid.n17Amanwhoisusefultothesociety.n18First,ifyoujoinourclub,youllgetscorestogainacademicmarks,thescorescanhelpyougetscholarshiponahigherchance.Second,improveyourself.n19Ourclubwaitforyourtelephone.n20Areyoumoving?改错练习0706n21YogacomefromIndo

25、nesia.n22Anythingisimpossible.n23Letusbuildheramorebrightfuture.n24Weveryveryhopen25forlovingstudyEnglishstudents,n26TheclubisaDengXiaoPingClubn27Wecannotbecomehe,butwecanstudyhe.n28Ourclubisclimethehillclub.n29Ourclubhaveaimportantthingwhichiseveryday.n30Youmustgotobedandgosleepingearly.nP1:current

26、ly，XXplaysamoreandmoresignificantroleinourday-to-daylife/competitiveandchallengingsociety.AnincreasingnumberofpeopleshowgreatenthusiasmforXX.Theybelievethat.nP2:Xhasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbutcreatedsomeseriousproblemaswell.WhenitcomestoXX,hence,differentindividualsholdvariousviews.TheyarguethatnP3:H

27、owever,asforme,Ihaveagreat/negativeattitudetoward/thatXX.Tosumupbriefly,onlywhen.nTheissueoverI1currentlynumerousstudentsdontpayattentiontospellingisheatedlydiscussed.SomepeopleclaimthatspellingisnotvalidtostudyEnglishI2.TheypayI3moretimeforreadingandlistening.TheyemphasizethatthesemeanswouldI4morec

28、ritical.nThereasonwhystudentsdontcareaboutspellingisthatwiththeevolutionofsociety,itissensibletoreadingI5andlisteningisanfrequentmeanstoimproveEnglishabilitywhichcangetthehighscore.TheyprefertodoingI6morereadingandlisteningratherthanpayingI7attentiontospellingsothattheycancatchhighmark.nSofarIamconcerned,spellingisequal(ly)significant(aswellas)readingandlistening.ItisbasicalI8forstudyingEnglish.Iagreewhatthestudentsconsider,however,paymoreattentiontospellingisalsocritical.Sowemaybecare(ful)aboutlisteningandreading,(and)atthesametime(should)payattentiontospelling.结束语结束语谢谢大家聆听！谢谢大家聆听！46