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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前,先对同学进行五个简洁句句型,并列句和复合句的专项训练,打好基础；扩句是在基本句型的基础上,添 加各种修饰成分,使句子得到扩展,即依据表达的需求 增加定语,状语,同位语等成分,或者 举例子补充细节内容,或者 添加谚语俗语 等；1. We arrived in Sanya.- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. 添加副词 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.- I like to make friends with

2、my classmates, who have the same interest as mine. 添加定语从句 3. We were happy and returned home.- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.添加状语从句 4. I like reading books.- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers. 通过举例补充细节 5.

3、We should study hard.- As we all know, “ Practice makes perfect” .So we should study hard. 添加谚语名师归纳总结 6. I often join in many activities.第 1 页,共 6 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - - I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. 添加目的状语 三详细应用试题要

4、求： 假设你是一名中同学,请以 My colorful school life 为题,写一篇短文；要求 100个字左右；开头和结尾已经 给出,不计入总数；要点提示： 1：上课仔细听讲 2：课后完成作业 3：常常参与体育锤炼 4：去图书馆阅读I m a high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard._ _ May there always be colorful life around my school.同学的习作：名师归纳总结 I m a high school stu

5、dent and I understand what I m 第 2 页,共 6 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - studying for. I have been working hard.I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.May there always be colorful life around my school.点评：

6、该同学能完整的写出各个要点,没有显现太大的语法错误,表达通顺,单词拼写无误；但是很明显字数不够,没有到达 100个字左右,字数不够是许多同学面临的共同问 题；其次,句子的表达过于平淡无奇,没有句式多样化和使 用高级词汇,固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道；而且,没 有使用连接词,上下文的连接不够顺畅；改良方法：步骤一：列要点 把要写的内容要点化,做到要点齐全；1: Listen to the teacher carefully 2: finish my homework 3:take part in exercise 4: often read in the library 步骤二：造简洁句充分利

7、用五个简洁句句型对各个要点进行补充,使名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 其变成一个完整的句子；每个句子都要留意句子成分的完整性,语法是否正确,说法是否符合英语表达习惯；1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class. 2: I finish my homework after class.3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates. 4: I do some reading in the school li

8、brary.步骤三：扩展句子1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. 增加目的状语 从句 2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me. 增加定语从句3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming andplay

9、ing badminton etc.举例说明4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class. 步骤四：润色句子增加时间状语从句依据高考海南英语作文评分细就,第五档的要 求： 24-25分,至少有 3个复杂句, 2种从句形式,语气自然,敬语得体,无中式英语,语言基本功扎实,词汇丰富；这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫；“ 润色句子包括词语的选名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 择与句型的运用；” 比

10、方可以用高级词汇,短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇；增加习惯表达句式,倒装句,it 当形式主语和形式宾语, 非谓语动词等, 使用多种句式, 使其多样化；1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. 把第一句换成 it 当形式主语的用法,使句式多样化； 2: I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake

11、 for me.增加了 take seriously 和 in time 两个短语,是句子更加生动 3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.增加了 in order to do sth目的状语和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整； 4: Interested in readin

12、g books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.使用过去分词短语当状语,再添加短语 develop the habbit of 使文章增加亮点步骤五：连句成篇“ 过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用,它好比一座 桥梁,能将全文各句有机地联系在一起,从而使句子不再是名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 孤立的独立的个体；” 使用表示转折,并列,递进,因果关系等连词把句子连接起来,“ 有效

13、地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑” 使上下文更加通顺,规律性更强；I m a high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.原文已给First of all 过渡词 , it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. Whats more 过 渡 词 , I take hom

14、ework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition过渡词 , In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally 过 渡 词 , Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.May there always be colorful life around my school.原文已给这篇习作要点齐全,字数符合要求,措辞精致,句 式多样化,上下文连贯,符合规律和英语表达习惯；因此在 写作中,我们可以适当地使用扩句法对同学进行写作训练,提高同学的英语表达才能；名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 6 页