定语从句在基础写作中运用.ppt

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1、定语从句在基础写作中运用 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望nLead innHe,who knows nothing but pretends to know everything,is indeed a good-for-nothing.n不懂装懂不懂装懂,永世饭桶。永世饭桶。nLead innNo man or woman is worth your tears,and the one who is,wont make you cry.n没人值得

2、你没人值得你流泪流泪，如果有，他如果有，他/她她不不会让你哭。会让你哭。n基础作文的潜规则基础作文的潜规则n fewer sentences,but more information.n句子个数少，信息量大。句子个数少，信息量大。n写好基础作文第一神器写好基础作文第一神器nAttributive Clausesn定语从句n实战实战n一个最古老的故事一个最古老的故事n从前有座山，山上有座庙nDo you know the story?n故事精简版故事精简版n从前有座山，山上有座庙，从前有座山，山上有座庙，n庙有有俩和尚，一个大和尚，庙有有俩和尚，一个大和尚，n一个小和尚，小和尚要大和尚讲故一个小

3、和尚，小和尚要大和尚讲故事，故事里面说事，故事里面说n生词提示n和尚和尚 monkn庙庙 templen要求要求:一个英文句子写完这个故事。一个英文句子写完这个故事。nOne possible versionOne possible versionnLong long ago,there was a mountain,on which stood a temple,in which lived two monks:an old one,a young one,who asked the other one to tell him a story,which goes like thisnPut

4、 it back into ChinesePut it back into ChinesenLong long ago,there was a village,in front of which stood a big tree,in which lived two birds,the young one of whom asked the old one to teach him a song,which goes like thisn从这里，你可以体会到定语从句不愧为第一神器的称号。从这里，你可以体会到定语从句不愧为第一神器的称号。Time to have another try!【写作内

5、容写作内容】请请根据以下信息，介根据以下信息，介绍绍一位一位热门热门人物。人物。姓姓 名：名：莫言（管莫言（管谟业谟业）出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月17日日出出 生生 地地：山：山东东省高密一个省高密一个穷穷苦人家苦人家兴兴趣趣爱爱好：好：自幼喜自幼喜欢阅读欢阅读、书书法法(calligraphy)性格特征：性格特征：开朗、幽默开朗、幽默教育教育经历经历：1986年年毕业毕业于解放于解放军艺术军艺术学院（学院（PLA Academy of Arts）；1991年年毕业毕业于北京大学并于北京大学并获获文文学学硕硕士学位（士学位（Masters Degree of Arts）。）。主要成

6、就：主要成就：2011年凭借年凭借蛙蛙获获中国最高文学中国最高文学奖奖“矛矛盾文学盾文学奖奖”；2012年年获诺贝获诺贝尔尔文学文学奖奖。评评 价价：第一位：第一位获获得得诺贝诺贝尔尔文学文学奖奖的中国作家，的中国作家，被誉被誉为为是是对对中国文学做出巨大中国文学做出巨大贡贡献的作家之一。献的作家之一。1.审：时态审：时态_ 人称人称_2.抓抓：抓要点，：抓要点，定表达定表达。3.合合：整合信息，连词成句。：整合信息，连词成句。4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。Basic writing一般过去时一般过去时一般现在时一般现在时第第 三三 人人 称称2.2.抓：抓要点，定表达。

7、抓：抓要点，定表达。be born in Gaomi on February 17,1955,show great interest in,graduate from,obtain a degree/receive a degree,win the award of/obtain the prize of,the first person to do，be honored as,make great contributions to,姓姓 名：名：莫言（管莫言（管谟业谟业）出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月17日日出出 生生 地：地：山山东东省高密一个省高密一个穷穷苦人家苦人家兴兴趣趣爱爱

8、好：好：自幼喜自幼喜欢阅读欢阅读、书书法法(calligraphy)性格特征：性格特征：开朗、幽默开朗、幽默教育教育经历经历：1986年年毕业毕业于解放于解放军艺术军艺术学院（学院（PLA Academy of Arts）；1991年年毕业毕业于北京大学并于北京大学并获获文文学学硕硕士学位（士学位（Masters Degree of Arts）。主要成就：主要成就：2011年凭借年凭借蛙蛙获获中国最高文学中国最高文学奖奖 “矛盾文学矛盾文学奖奖”；2012年年获诺贝获诺贝尔尔文学文学奖奖。评评 价：价：第一位第一位获获得得诺贝诺贝尔尔文学文学奖奖的中国作家，的中国作家，被誉被誉为为是是对对中国

9、文学做出巨大中国文学做出巨大贡贡献的作家之一。献的作家之一。3.3.合：整合信息。合：整合信息。3.Mo Yan,originally named Guan Moye,was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955.2.Mo Yan,whose original name is Guan Moye,was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955,1.Mo Yan named Guan Moye

10、 firstly and he was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化1.Mo Yan has been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood and is outgoing and humorous.2.Mo Yan,who has been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood,is outgoin

11、g and humorous.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化3.Not only has Mo Yan been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.2.Mo Yan,who graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing Universi

12、ty five years later.1.Mo graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986 and went to Beijing University to gain a Masters Degree of Arts in 1991.3.Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five

13、years later.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化 Mo Yan,originally named Guan Moye,was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955.Whats more,not only has he been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.Having graduated from the PLA Academy

14、 of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。With a talent for literature,he won Chinas highest literary prize,Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011.To all Chineses excitement,this year he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。Practice makes perfect!Thank You!