大学英语四级作文谚语名言类培训讲学.ppt

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1、大学英语四级作文谚语名言类句型句型1.An English proverb says,As the saying goes,One of the great men once remarked,Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb,An inspiring proverb echoing in my mind goes,One of the great men once remarked,“Health is above wealth”.(没有必要用一没有必要用一对引号）引号）改改为：As the say

2、ing goes,health is above wealth.第二句第二句 It means that In other words,第三句第三句It goes without saying that/It is obviously clear that/It is universally acknowledged that例子1.Asthesayinggoes,healthisabovewealth.1.Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,lifewithouthealthislifeless.1.Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequ

3、ivalenttotheproverb,lifethatlackshealthlackseverything.2.Itmeansthathealthisofthetopmostimportance/valueinourlife.2.Itindicatesthatmakingmoneyatthecostofhealthisnotworthwhile.2.itmeansonlypeoplewhoareingoodhealthareabletoleadameaningfullife.3.Icannotagreewithitmore.3.Thoughtheproverbconveysomesense,

4、Icouldnotfullyagreewithit.第二段论点：1.Healthisthefoundationofaqualitylife.Withoutagoodbody,theaccomplishmentswemade,therelationshipwekept,thesocialstatuswetryhardtobuildwillbecompletelyuseless.例子：StevieJobs,CEOoftheAppleCompanybusinessmanwhoworksohardthathecollapseeventually/arichmanwithseverehealthprob

5、lemsMyfriends/myfather/myself例子：StevieJobs,CEOoftheAppleCompany(Letus)TakeStevieJobforexample.TakeStevieJobasanexample.Imagine how much more he could have done to the world if he had not died at such a young age?(虚虚拟语气气/反反问句式句式)TakeStevieJob,formerCEOofAppleCompanywhodiedattheageof56.论点Agoodbodyisso

6、methingthroughwhichweareabletoexperiencetheworld.例子Arichpatient(出不了门的/坐轮椅的confinedinawheelchair/confinedtohisroom)Steviewonder/StephenHawkingMyfriends/myselfTakeStevieHawkingforexample.Anintellectualgiantasheis,thegreatmanundoubtedlymissesopportunitiestoexperiencethephysicalworldforhisparalysis.What

7、apity!说理Withoutagoodhealth,wecannottravelorstudy,thusopeningourmindandenrichingourlife.论点3：Ifapersonalishealthy,hetendstoholdamoreoptimisticandmoreconfidentviewtowardstheworld.说理论点4：healthisamongafewthingsthatcannotbeboughtwithwealth.说理History/Our society abounds with the examples ofEdison/Columbus/

8、EinsteinSuch examples/instances might be given indefinitely,but this will be sufficient to show thatOn the other hand/On the contrary,if There is hardly a man who can achieve success without All evidence points to/justifies/lends support to the fact 结论For us college students,the saying/proverb has a

9、 profound and realistic significance;Just imagine how far can we make in our academic study,if we dont have a strong body?From what has been discussed/mentioned above,To sum up,范文1(第一段）Asthesayinggoes,lifethatlackshealthlackseverything.Itmeansthathealthisofthetopmostvalueinourlife.Icannotagreewithit

10、more.(3句)(第二段）Firstofall,healthisthefoundationofaqualitylife.Withoutagoodbody,theaccomplishmentsonemade,therelationshiponekept,thesocialstatusonetriedhardtobuildwouldturnintonothingnesseventually.TakeStevieJobasanexample.He could no longer enjoy the fruit of the huge accomplishments he made after he

11、 died untimely at 56.Furthermore,Agoodbodyissomethingthroughwhichoneisabletoexperiencetheworld.Withoutagoodhealth,onecannottravelorstudy,thusopeningourmindandenrichingourlife.Moreover,muchevidencepointstothefactahealthypersontendtoholdamoreoptimisticandmoreconfidentview,andcanfitintothesocietybetter

12、.(7句)(第三段）Tosumup,Healthcomesbeforeeverything.(1句)范文2(第一段)Haveyoueverheardoftheproverb,withouthealthlifeisnotlife,lifeislifeless?Itmeansonlypeopleingoodhealthconditioncanenjoyameaningfullife.Thoughitconveys/carriessomesense,Icouldnotfullyagreewithit.(3句）第二段As far as I am concerned,importantashealthi

13、s,themeaningoflifedoesnotlieinhealth.论点1：Manypeopleofill-healthaccomplishgreatthingsinlife.TakeZhangHaidiforexample.Despiteherdisability,shetaughtherselfandmasteredquiteafewforeignlanguagessuchasEnglish,JapaneseandGerman.Sheturnedintoasuccessfultranslatorandauniversitygraduateeventually.Canyousaytha

14、therlifeislifelessormeaningless?Definitelyno.(论点2)Furthermore,poorhealthsometimesisablessingindisguise.StephenHawkingonceremarked,notuntilhewasdiagnosedwithAIS,anincurabledisease,didhebegintoreallyfocushisattentiononhisrealinterest-spacecosmology.The realization that his days are numbered helpedhimt

15、hinkreallyseriousabouthisresearch.第三段Tosumup,Ithinkthemeaningoflifeliesnotinhealthbutinmanyothers.具体评分标准8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。8-11分：句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。但是简单句较多，最多出现一句较容易的定语从句或者强调句，且说理啰嗦，中心不够突出。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。11-14句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。说理重点突出，紧凑清楚，能够灵活且正确运用

16、多种句式。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。其他类似的题型题型分析话题写作（Topicwriting）针对某一社会现象，分析原因并论述你的观点。一般会给出中文提纲，要求按照提纲的顺序写作。提纲的结构一般是：现在存在某一现象（对现象本身进行描述）分析造成这一现象原因或是现象会带来的影响我的观点社会现象/新事物第一段如何写？1.点明文章要点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或述的事物或现象象 2.我我对这个事物或个事物或现象的基本象的基本看法看法3.赞成的理由因成的理由因为其重要性其重要性(或反或反对的理由的理由因因为其危害性其危害性)（更加具体的（更加具体的阐述

17、自己的述自己的观点）点）题型分析实例12012年6月真题WriteacompositionentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinebelow:目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象出现这一现象的原因我对这一现象的看法和建议题型分析实例2Modeltest4WriteanessayonthetopicStop Spoiling Your Children.Outline:现在，独生子女越来越多，溺爱孩子的现象非常普遍无原则溺爱孩子有很多害处我的观点此此课件下件下载可自行可自行编辑修改，修改，仅供参考！供参考！感感谢您的支持，我您的支持，我们努力做得更好！努力做得更好！谢谢