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1、OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehoursto campovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasant subjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Jane wassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janej

2、ustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad climbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenly realizedthatshewaslost. “Tom!”shecried.“Help!” Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Jane keptmovin

3、g,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakein thedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtohold himandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim. Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落

4、)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinher lifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthe streamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahel

5、icopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellow blouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycameback again.(334words)Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._Pa

6、ragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._参考答案1Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime.Janeputonheryellowblouse.Atthatmoment,tirednesssurroundedher.Shefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally.Butshe continuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereally

7、wantedtomeetTomassoonas possible.Shewalkedslowlyandcarefullyindarkness.Followingthestreamforabouttwohours,Janecouldntsupportherphysicalstrength,soshefoundaflatgroundto spendthelongandhardnight.(78words)Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shefelthungryandtired.Afterashort adjustment,shebeganthehar

8、dtrip.Afewhourslater,shecaughtsightofanoldmancuttingwoods.Tohergreatjoy,theoldman,whowasveryfamiliarwiththe geographicalcharacteristics,informedherofthewaytothelake.Seeingthelake meantseeinghopeintheair.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthat moment.Janeflaggedheryellowblousewildly.Thistime,th

9、ehelicopterfoundher andtookhertoherhusband.Theygaveeachotherthewarmesthugtheyhadever received.(97words)参考答案2Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayalonein theforestforanothercoldnight.Althoughshefeltalittlesad,shedidntgetfearful. ShethoughtaboutTom.“Hemusthavecalled

10、forthosehelicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.(59words)Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawa hugeflatrockinanop

11、enareaatadistance.Sherushedtotherock,climbedontoit andwaited.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoresheflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidntmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Shebrokedownandburstintotears.(95words)2