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1、English Writing-travel diary 第一页,共19页。谈论过去(guq)的事:写旅游日记第二页,共19页。一般过去一般过去(guq)时:时:1.过去过去(guq)的状态:主语的状态:主语+was/were+2.过去过去(guq)的动作:主语的动作:主语+V.ed第三页,共19页。How to write a travel diary?第四页,共19页。审:审题(人称、主要内容、时态)审:审题(人称、主要内容、时态)列:列出各要点列:列出各要点,写出关键词写出关键词/词组词组连:词连:词/词组词组-句句-段段-篇(开头、结尾篇(开头、结尾(jiwi)(jiwi)、连接词)、
2、连接词)查:检查人称,时态,拼写,短语和要点查:检查人称,时态,拼写,短语和要点誊:誊写作文,书面整洁誊:誊写作文,书面整洁五五 步步 法法审、列、连、查、誊审、列、连、查、誊第五页,共19页。Opening sentences开头开头(ki tu)1 Last Sunday,I went to with 2.On May1st,we traveled to 3.On Childrens Day,we had a chance to go to第六页,共19页。Summary 结尾结尾(jiwi)1.To make a summary进行(jnxng)总结2.Eg.What a wonderf
3、ul place!3.I think we had a great time there.4.Although we were a little tired,we were very happy.5.2.To show wishes表达愿望6.Eg.I wish I can go there again if I have a chance.7.For your next vacation,why not consider visiting 第七页,共19页。Conjunctions润滑剂(连接词、过渡润滑剂(连接词、过渡(gud)词)词)表顺序 表递进 表并列(bngli)、选择表转折 表原
4、因 first/then/next/finallyalso/besides/even/whats more and/orbut/however/althoughbecause第八页,共19页。第二学月作文:请你以“A Visit to the zoo”为题,根据提示用英语写一篇短文。提示内容:1那天天气晴朗,阳光灿烂。2动物园离我们学校有点远,我们乘公共汽车去那儿。3动物园人多,很挤。4我们参观了游客中心,看了海豚表演,海豚聪明可爱,我非常喜欢他们(t men)。5我们去礼品店买了很多礼物,到下午五点才返校。第九页,共19页。A visit to the zoo Last Sunday I w
5、ent to the zoo with my classmates.The weather was fine and it was sunny all day.The zoo is far from my school,so we took a bus there.(We went there by bus.)There were many people in the zoo.It was very crowded.At frist,we visited the Visitors Center.Then we watched a dolphin show,and it was very int
6、eresting.Dolphins are very cute and I like them very much.After that,we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts.Finally,we were tired but happy.We didnt go back to school until five oclock.It was an exciting trip.I hope to go there again.第十页,共19页。1、看语法是否正确,包括单词的拼写,大小、看语法是否正确,包括单词的拼写,大小写,标点,动词
7、的时态写,标点,动词的时态(sh ti)、语态,名词的、语态,名词的单复数,形容词、副词的比较等级,主谓一致,单复数,形容词、副词的比较等级,主谓一致,冠词的用法,词语的搭配等。冠词的用法,词语的搭配等。2、一定要数一数文章的词数,标点符号不算。、一定要数一数文章的词数,标点符号不算。不过,这些问题在下笔之前应先有思考,先有答不过,这些问题在下笔之前应先有思考,先有答案,免得在卷面上七涂八改,要知道案,免得在卷面上七涂八改,要知道“包装包装”也也很重要。很重要。第十一页,共19页。Sample根据提示写一篇日记,记录五月一日(星期五)你和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。提示内容:天气:晴朗
8、2.距离:离家约两公里。(2 kilometers)3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.时间:八点出发,十点回家。5.内容:见到了许多照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.游人:见到许多父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵(shbng)等。要求:词数80个左右,要符合日记格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiers第十二页,共19页。根据提示写一篇日记,记录五月一日(星期五)你
9、和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。提示内容:天气:晴朗 2.距离:离家约两公里。(2 kilometers)3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.时间:八点出发,十点回家。5.内容:见到了许多(xdu)照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.游人:见到许多(xdu)父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵等。要求:词数80个左右,要符合日记格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiers
10、Oral practice口头(kutu)表达 第十三页,共19页。Friday May 1 sunny It was fine today.My friends and I went to visit Fujian History Museum.It is about two kilometres away from my home.So we decided to go there by bike.We set off at eight.At first,in the museum We saw many photos and many other things.We learned a
11、lot.There we saw a lot of children with their parents,students with their teachers,and soldiers.At ten,we left the museum for home.We had a good time today.Sample第十四页,共19页。书面表达 请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题,用英语写一篇短文。提示语必须用上,只抄提示语不给分提示内容:1去年暑假,我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江.3漓江的水非常的清澈(clean),可以看见小鱼在水里游来
12、游去。4我们还去爬了山,累但是很快乐。5我们还去城里购物,城市很漂亮,人们很友好。要求:要点齐全(qqun),表达正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥,80词左右。Writing practice实战(shzhn)演练审,列,连,查,誊审,列,连,查,誊took a boat to visit Lijiangvisited Lijiang by boatclimbed the mountain 第十五页,共19页。书面表达书面表达 请你以请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题,用英语写一篇短文。提为题,用英语写一篇短文。提示语必须用上,只抄提示语不给分示语必须
13、用上,只抄提示语不给分提示内容:提示内容:1去年暑假,我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。去年暑假,我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江3漓江的水非常的清澈(漓江的水非常的清澈(clean),),可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。4我们还去爬了山,累但是很快乐。我们还去爬了山,累但是很快乐。5我们还去城里购物,城市很漂亮,人们很友好。我们还去城里购物,城市很漂亮,人们很友好。要求:要点齐全,表达正确,语句通顺要求:要点齐全,表达正确,语句通顺(tngshn),意思连,意思连贯,书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥,贯,书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥,80词左右。词左右。Writing practice实战(shzhn)演练审,列,连,查,誊审,列,连,查,誊第十六页,共19页。Share&enjoy习作习作(xzu)分享分享慧眼慧眼(huyn)识别:识别:闪光点?闪光点?错误?错误?My summer holiday plans第十七页,共19页。Work harder now!May you succeed in June!Wish you all a good summer holiday!第十八页,共19页。第十九页,共19页。
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