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1、2014中考英语作文突破指导一、题型特点：一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大：越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大：06年年 Non-smoking Day;07年年“校园节约从我做起校园节约从我做起”;

2、到到09年的年的“A Person I will never forget”，10年年_ is fun五、作文一般框架：五、作文一般框架：文章分文章分3段：段：（1）综述：）综述：概括性强，最多概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；句话引入主题；（2）正文）正文主要内容：主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多个方面，每个方面最多2句话；句话；（3）结尾：）结尾：紧扣主题，紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。句话内结束，尽量升华。满分作文标准：满分作文标准：第一档：（第一档：（1513分）分）完全完全符合符合题目题目要求要求，观点正

3、确观点正确,要点要点齐全，齐全，立意立意高高。句式句式多样多样，词汇，词汇丰富丰富。语言。语言准确准确，语意，语意连贯连贯，表达表达清楚清楚，结构结构合理，具有合理，具有逻辑性逻辑性。卷面书写干净，卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小点，大小写正确。写正确。最好能有一两个最好能有一两个亮点句亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）（主从，定从，表从，谚语）六、如何列提纲：六、如何列提纲：例例1：利弊型作文：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊的利与弊Para1:（综述）（综述）with the developme

4、nt of internet more and more popularPara2:（利）（利）First,convenient,anywhere,any time;Second,share with;Last,express views free,money-freePara3:（弊）（弊）However,one coin has two faces.On the one hand,a waste of timeaffect study;On the other hand,not safestolen,hurt feelingsPara4:（个人）（个人）As a student,make

5、good use of it.七、如何列提纲：七、如何列提纲：例例2：计划安排型作文：计划安排型作文谈假期安排谈假期安排Para1:（综述）（综述）graduate from,holiday is coming,plan for this holidayPara2:（正文）（正文）Firstly,study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly,visit tourist attractions;Last but not least,do sports to build up my body.Para3

6、:I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday.(Im looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)八、常见的作文类型模板：八、常见的作文类型模板：1 书信书信Dear.,Im glad to receive your letter -Best wishes!Yours,Lucy a书信开头常用语书信开头常用语 I am very glad to receive your letter(hear form you).Hello,Jane.Is

7、everything going(on)well?/How is everything going(on)?Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can.How time flies!It has been months/years since we last met.Thank you for inviting me to.b 书信结尾常用语书信结尾常用语 Best wishes(to/for you).Wish you good luck.(I am)looking forward to h

8、earing from you.二、口头通知常见写作模板：呼语及开场白部分：Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.Please come o

9、n time and dont be late.结束语部分：Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope youll have a nice time here.Thats all.Thank you.八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2 图表、数字比例型图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Last week,our class had a class meeting on(how to)Here are the results.（表达出不同看法或观点）Most students

10、 think While 20%of them choose to.Another 15 believe There are also some saying that（表达个人看法）As a student,I agree to3 说明利弊型说明利弊型 Nowadays is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First,优点1 Besides,优点2 However,every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand,缺点

11、1 On the other hand,缺点2 In my opinion,个人观点 4 不同观点型不同观点型 We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe 正方观点.First,原因1 Besides,原因2 While others dont agree.They think反方观点.On the one hand,原因1 On the other hand,原因2 As for me,个人观点 5 解决问题型解决问题型 Recently,

12、the problem has been more and more serious.should do something to solve it.Firstly,方法1 Secondly,方法2 Finally,方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to,the will become better and better.九、常用过渡性词语九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：At first;at last;in the endthen/next/after thatwhen/while/as soon as/not u

13、ntilat the same time;at times;once in a while;so thatTo ones surprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a word/in all议论文常用连接词议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;not onlybut also;表示递进的：besides;whats more;whats worse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for;because of;thanks to;(for the reason

14、 that);表示结果的：so;as a result;sothat;therefore;表示目的的：so that;in order that;(in order)to;for;表示对比的：while;on the one hand+on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;preferto;would rather dothan do;议论文常用连接词议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：for example;for instance;such as;like;that is to say表示总结的：in all/sh

15、ort;in a word;in brief/total;last but not least;last;表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb benefit from sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;be fond of;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;

16、put ones heart into;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;议论文常用连接词议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;其他：in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;议论文常用

17、连接词议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;其他：in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;十、作文万能句式十、作文万能句式I will work hard to make my dream come true.I h

18、ope your dream will come true one day.It takes sb.+时间+to doSb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./(in)doing sth.Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.)to vIts nice/kind of sb.to v.Its time for sb.to do sth.Its a waste of time toIts years/days since sb.+vedIts great fun to do=sb.have great fun

19、doingIts a pity thatIts an honor to十、作文万能句式十、作文万能句式Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistakesThere be doingGreat changes have taken place insth is/are well worth v-ing.It seems/seemed thatIt seems(im)possible to vIt is said thatAs the saying goes,and.are different in many ways.too+adj./adv.

20、to doThere are many differences between and 十、作文万能句式十、作文万能句式I have made up my mind to I am sure thatI am not sure whether/ifI would rather.than It doesnt matter ifThank you for v-ing.If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/nature/society,our life will be better and better.十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语

21、have/look for a chance to dodo outdoor activitiesbe/get used to(doing)sth.learnfrombe proud of/take pride inplay an important/active part/role in agree with sb.to do sth.with the help of sb.=with ones help(反义：without ones help)be/get ready to do sth.=be/get ready for sth.pay attention totake good ca

22、re of make friends withget on/along well with 十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语wish you successful/successas time goes bygraduate fromlooking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态）pass the(final)examstick to doingkeep you mind on your goalsmake up ones mind to do sth.(on sth.)make a decision to dowork hard at Engl

23、ishonce in a while/at times/now and thenfrom then on十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语in the future（将来）/in future（从今以后）increase our knowledge/enlarge our vocabularyin fact/as a matter of factin the beginning/at firstfeel like giving uphave trouble/difficulty in(doing)sth.have(no)time to dohave experience in(doing)s

24、th.follow ones advice/suggestions master some basic skillsbe required to doask sb.for helpcant wait to do十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语be supposed to doencourage sb.to dodeal/do with work out/solve the problemsall sorts/kinds ofat home and abroadone of be full oflearn sth.by oneselfcome up with good ideasbe sur

25、prised at sth.(to do sth.)in order to keep healthy/fita good way to v十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworry about/be worried aboutin ones spare/free timebe kind/friendly tobe strict withhelp otherssay thank you tohave fun/enjoy oneself/have a good timeplenty of+C/Uworry about/be worried aboutask sb.f

26、or help/turn to sb.for help/call sb.for helpbe popular withshare sth.with sb.know little/much about 十一、作文万能短语十一、作文万能短语do/try ones best to vbe/feel sorry forhelp sb.(to)do sth./with sth.in/during classbefore/after classteach sb.to do sth.*词数词数80左右，不少于左右，不少于70词，不多于词，不多于 100词。词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被不能使用其他颜色

27、笔、修正液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。实信息。四、四、Language errors in writing纠错纠错.be多余或缺少多余或缺少Im enjoy studying English.It bad for our health.I enjoy studying English.It is bad for our health.2.时态错误At that time,they always help me with my English.I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.At th

28、at time,they always helped me with my English.I have enjoyed studying English since I met him.My favorite sport is run.I think do some sports is very important for us.My favorite sport is running.I think doing some sports is very important for us.3.非谓语动词错误I like do sports.I wish take part in the Oly

29、mpic Games when I grow up.I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.I like doing sports.4.副词位置错误I very thank her.I very like football.I thank her very much.I like football very much.5.代词错误They are good for us body.I hope me also become a basketball player.They are good for our body.I h

30、ope I also become a basketball player.6.缺介词或介词错误I thank him very much help me study English.He even came to my home for help me.I thank him very much for helping me study English.He even came to my home to help me.I like it because its exciting and good for my healthy.I have ever gived up English.(单

31、词错误)(动词P.P.错误)I like it because its exciting and good for my health.I have ever given up English.7.其他错误Its good for my health.Not only make me brave,but also make me become taller.If you want to keep fit,it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.Its good for my health.It not only make

32、s me brave,but also makes me become taller.If you want to keep fit,it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day.（缺主语）（句型错误）Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.1.I climed slowly and was very tried.2.I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.

33、climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.On a friday afternoon,I went shopping with my mother.Spelling（拼写）（拼写）（others)Friday4.I cant forget that day.Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.I cant forget that day because5.What a crazy day it was,I will remember it forever.!Capita

34、l letter（大小写）（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）（标点符号）6.I will remembered that day forever.remember7.I thought it is hungry.was8.My grandmother always tidy up my room.tidies9.How unforgettable this things is!thingFind out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.Tense（时态）（时态）Verb agreement(主谓一致主谓

35、一致)Word form(词形）词形）10.In my fathers help,I became more patient than before.With my fathers help,11.To cut a long story to short,.To cut a long story short,12.I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother.by bus13.My mother told me dont give it up.told me not to give it upFind out the mistakes in the foll

36、owing sentences and correct them.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）短语和固定搭配）14.I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road.saw an old lady lying16.We played snow in front of house.played with15.I sat on a seat,listening music.listening to 17.Then a lady asked who had broken her window.We all were afraid.were allFi

37、nd out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.Missing words（漏词）（漏词）18.We should do things by our own hands.withthe house19.It is tired work.tiringWords order（词序）（词序）Using wrong word（选词错误）（选词错误）22.He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.carefully21.One Sunday morning,I went

38、to Shihua by bus and sat beside me was a girl.I went to Shihua on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me.Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.Chinese English（中式英语）（中式英语）In my life,many things happened.20.In my life have many things happened.During the winter holida

39、ys,It happened a lot of things.One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother.When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall,we saw a small girl cried in a corner.We asked what happened on her.She said she cuondt found her mother.So we started to helpt she to found her mother.Luckil

40、y,we found her mother,they were very happy and we were happy,too.I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.Check and correct this article.a lot of things happened.helpingIw

41、ere shoppingcryinghappened tocouldntfindhelp herfind.Theycould also,so1.是否有大小写错误是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)2.是否有拼写错误是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)3.是否有标点错误是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.4.是否有语法错误是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)主谓是否一致主谓是否一致 动词的时态动词的时态 语态的使用是否正确语态的使用是否正确 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 Common

42、ErrorsinEnglishwriting五、整洁性五、整洁性 1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。看不清，占不满格。3 字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。不会得高分。4 4 规范规范三写三写：大大 小小 写写,拼拼 写写,书书 写以以“My English Teacher”“My English Teacher”为

43、题写一为题写一篇篇100100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1 1 孙老师，孙老师，2525岁，岁，1.651.65米米,打扮入时。打扮入时。2 2 关心热爱学生关心热爱学生 。3 3 教学方法生动有趣。教学方法生动有趣。4 4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；六、实战训练六、实战训练Pre-writing1.审：审：2.定定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题为题写一篇写一篇100字作文字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历首段：个人简历正文：教学特色正文：教学特

44、色尾段：作者的评价尾段：作者的评价 be fashionable love students,and care about the students be lively and interesting get on well with,be popular withWriting:3.列列1.打扮入时打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎相处融洽，深受欢迎My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher.She is 25 years old.She is 1.65 meters tall.

45、She is very fashionable.She loves her students.She cares about us.Her lessons are interesting and lively;Miss Sun gets on well with us.She is very popular.We all love her and her teaching!Writing4.4.连：连：连词成句，连句成篇连词成句，连句成篇复写复写Rewriting：5、美润色丰富要点；6、改、改查错改错查错改错7、抄修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。WritingMy English T

46、eacher Miss Sun is our English teacher.She is 25 years old.She is 1.65 meters tall.She is very fashionable.She loves her students.She cares about us.Her lessons are interesting and lively;Miss Sun gets on well with us.She is very popular.We all love her and her teaching!请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震请根据要

47、点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内词左右。内容要点如下：容要点如下：1谭老师个人简况：谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3对学生要求严格，对学生要求严格，4深爱学生。深爱学生。5谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。名学生得救。6你的感受及愿望。你的感受及愿

48、望。参考词语：参考词语：1.graduate from a university,大学毕业大学毕业 2.be strict with,对对严格严格3.the Wenchuan earthquake,汶川地震汶川地震 4.collapse,坍塌坍塌5.deeds,事迹事迹三段式：三段式：首段：首段：正文：正文：结尾：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望作者的感受和愿望列出列出7个内容要点：个内容要点：1）外表严肃；）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保

49、护）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；名学生英勇献身；6）感受；）感受；7）愿望。）愿望。Helooksserious.Hesstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed,heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbody.Ifeeldeeplymoved.Illlearnfromhim.连句成文：连句成文：Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan provin

50、ce.He graduated from Hunan University.He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city,Sichuan province.He had taught there for 27 years.He looked serious.He was very strict with his students.He loved them deeply.When the Wenchuan earthquake happened,he was giving a lesson.The school building co