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1、备战高考作文之荚豪荚谡:理论指导及实战演练0要点精析夹叙夹议文是一种比拟常见的写作文体，以记人叙事为主，记叙人物的经历或事物/事 件发生、开展、变化的过程。兼有总结全文，深化主题。材料常涉及社会生活现象、人物或 自然景物。无论记人还是叙事都要通过表达、描写来加以表达，把人物的经历或行为、发生 的事情/事件用一定的顺序和语言技巧表达出来。在表达过程中“人以事显，事由人生”，人和 事是密不可分的。在一篇记叙文中记人、写景、叙事往往是交织在一起的，不能简单地分裂 开。高考作文一般都不会单纯的记叙某事，而是夹叙夹议。film课堂典例作文要求：你是王海，是学校学生会主席，最近你做了一次调查，发现你校学生

2、都不愿 在学校食堂(canteen)就餐，有的那么把食物丢进垃圾桶。请你以学生会主席的身份向校长反映 你调查的结果，并谈谈你的看法。命题解读：本文属于多种文体综合写作，书信体的格式加上夹叙夹议，要求：1.书信体的格式；2 .对学生就餐情况作陈述或描述；3 .就此现象作议论。Dear Principal,Fm Wang Hai, president of the Students5 Union. I am writing to you to report an unpleasant phenomenon that is going on in the school canteen. Recent

3、ly, Ive conducted a research and found that most of the students in our school do not feel like dining in the school canteen. Some of them even throw the food into the rubbish bin.Among the factors the survey presented, the major concerns lie in the slow pace of the staffs service and the plain dish

4、es of the school canteen .As students in the senior high school, were all busy with the school work. Unfortunately, the inefficiency of the canteen costs us too much time, which makes us turn to fast food. Whats more, we have quite few choices of dishes, and in fact, they9re not satisfactory in qual

5、ity and flavor, which may result in the unpleasant waste as well.In my opinion, it is high time for our canteen to make some improvements. First there should be more windows selling food and a more efficient managing system. Second, various dishes should be added to the menu and the food quality nee

6、ds improving. On the other hand, students should be educated to respect others9 labor and avoid wasting food in the future.With the joint efforts, Im sure that next time, the canteen will come os the best choice te satisfy the students need .Yours sincerely,Wang Hai结构点评书信体的格式：日期、称呼、正文、结束敬语和签名五个局部完整正

7、文局部先描写现象后论述：1 .开门见山点明写信目的：反映学生就餐情况，反映调查结果；2 .分析论述引起不良现象的几个原因；3 .提出解决的措施；4 .对未来学生就餐情况进行展望。语言点评第一段:一短一长句（that引导的定语从句）交代了自己的身份和写信的目的；接着用一长（that 引导的宾语从句）一短句描述了学生就餐情况；第二段：句总启论述；用lie in分析原因所在：食堂服务的慢节奏和食堂乏味的菜；用一 短一长句（which引导的非限制性定语从句）分析第一个原因；Whafs more连接两个并列的原 因;用and连接的并列句和which引导的非限制性定语从句分析了第二个原因;第三段：用“it

8、 is high time for . to do”提出解决的措施；用“First” “Second”论述食堂应采取 的措施；“On the other hand”表述从学生的角度应采取的措施；三个并列的“should”表达作者 肯定的态度；第四段：“With the joint efforts”承上启下：概括第三段的三个措施;句展望未来。实战演练实战演练演练1就你读过的一本书，写一篇读后感。具体要求如下：* 写出书名及作者简单介绍书中你感兴趣的人物、情节或思想（选一即可）* 说明感兴趣的理由例文：As the saving goes, good boots are good teachers

9、. The books we read exert significant influence on our mental growth as we get mature. As for me, what impresses me most is The Little Prince written by a French writer Antoine Saint- Exupery.Undoubtedly, the story itself about the princes adventure is touching. But the food for thought between line

10、s is something more valuable. Of all the thoughts that the writer wanted to convey, I appreciate this one most, “The most important things nrs invisible to eyes. I was deeply touched by it at the first sight.There are many things that we are busy pursuing： key schools, good jobs, money, reputation .

11、 The list seems to be endless and therefore our schedule is always full of tasks. However, what makes our life meaninqful is something apart from those visible. Love, friendship, dreams of realizing our value actually make up the essence of life and meanwhile the efforts and the spirits add the brig

12、ht and shinning colors to our life.“The most important things are invisible to eyes. Bear it in our mind and let it guide us for a more worthy life.演练2临近毕业，回顾三年高中生活，你肯定参加过很多班集体活动。请具体描述你参加过的 最难忘的一次活动，并简要说明这次活动对你产生的影响。How time flies! It will be only a month before I graduate from my senior high school

13、. Recalling what I have experienced, I keep the military training in mind, which was the first class activity of the life in senior high school.With the sun shining in the blue sky, we began our military training with great excitement and confidence. Sweat falling down the face, we stood like soldie

14、rs. However, as time went by, complaints emerged one after another. Why must we take part in such a tough training? “Whats the meaning of walking like that?” Some of my classmates even pretended to feel dizzy in order to ask for a sick leave. But the monitor said, “Since we have been here, why not p

15、ersevere until the last minute?” Our class teacher also encouraged us not to give up halfway. Inspired by what they said, the whole class kept on hard training, and won the first place in the competition eventually, which was the best reward of the 7-day efforts.Not only did the tough training leave

16、 a deep impression on me but it also increased my courage of facing up to great challenges. By taking part in this unforgettable activity, Ive fully realized that getting something done is just an accomplishment and getting something done well is an achievement. From then on, whenever I meet with di

17、fficulties in my study, I will always strive to the best advantage.演练3描述你在学校的一次难忘的活动。具体要求如下:1 .详细描述活动的情况;2 .简要表述你在活动中的感受。例文:Thursday, December 27th. 2020, was the most unforgettable day in Senior Three for me. It was the first time, as well as the last time that I had performid on the stage of our s

18、chool at theclosine ceremony of the School Art Festival.As scheduled, the ceremony began at 7 oclock that eveeicc and everyone felt excited, awaiting the wonderful performances. In fact, the performances were undoubtedly sensationally terrific, but I just couldn 7 he fully absorbed in them. I was a

19、bit nervous. At the summon of the teacher, nearly 200 Senior Three students, including me, went to the back of the stage to prepare for our singing performance. Everyone took his place and after that, I couldnt help thinking that it was my last Art Festival and that I should spare no effort to add a

20、 brilliant touch to it. Slowly, the curtain was drawn up. There burst out a loud applause in the audience, louder than whatever Id heard. All the people were expecting a great deal of us and we were standing still, every muscle ready. At the sound of the music, we threw all the nervousness into the

21、wind and sang to our hearts content. Together we sang out our passion, our belief and our dreams. The charm of the song fascinated everyone and our resounding voice lasted in the auditorium. Absolutely, we sang far better than any of the previous rehearsals and our performance turned out a success.V

22、ery soon, wellour beloved AJmaJdMfeK and headed into our bright future.However, the unforgettable scene of that day will impress me upon my mind permanently.演练4Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.疫情期间，作为社区青年志愿者的你，计划帮助老人团购生活必须品

23、。你的计划如下：(1)计划团购那些物品(选择2至3件)；(2)选择的原因。【56题答案】【答案】 As a community volunteer, I want to help the elderly to buy some daily necessities, because many of them are not able to use mobile phones to order and pay online. With observation and consideration, I think food which is high in protein and easy to c

24、ook should be bought. I plan to buy eggs, noodles, fish and milk, so that their cooking can be much easier. In addition, fresh fruits and vegetables are equally important, which help to keep their diet balanced and make them eat healthily during this special time. Of course, daily protective applian

25、ces such as alcohol, disinfectant and face masks should also be included. Older people have weak immunity and are more likely to be infected with the virus.I hope to help the elderly during the epidemic to express our gratitude and let them feel the warmth of the community.【解析】【导语】这是一篇开放作文。假设作者是社区青年

26、志愿者，计划帮助老人团购生活必须品, 谈谈自己的计划购买什么以及原因。【详解】1 .词汇积累能够做某事：be capable of doing sth,be able to do sth.计划做某事:intend to do sth.plan to do sth.重要 的：significantimportant差的，弱的：poorweak2 .句型拓展简单句变复合句原句：I hope to help the elderly during the epidemic to express our gratitude and let them feel the warmth of the comm

27、unity.拓展句：I hope to help the elderly during the epidemic through which we can express our gratitude and let them feel the warmth of the community.【点睛】高分句型 lWith observation and consideration, I think food which is high in protein and easy to cook food should be bought.（运用 了 which 引导的定语从句）高分句型 2I pla

28、n to buy eggs, noodles, fish and milk, so that their cooking can be much easier.（运用了 so that引导的目的状语从句）演练5Guided Writing （25 分）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.读书之妙趣，不仅在于书，还在于读书的人和事。请把你读书的趣事写下来，参加某一英文 报征文大赛，与人提供。在征文中，你必须：1

29、.回忆与同学或教师或家人的读书生活场景。2 .简要谈谈对读书的感受。参考范文：When young, I was addicted to reading, whether comic strips or novels. It feels like a kind of breath without which I cant live. Here is an interesting story I am dying to share with you.That originated from my childhood when I was abandoned to Sherlock Holmes.

30、 Every time finishing reading one chapter of The Great Adventure of Sherlock Holmes, I would gather all my friends to role-play the scene happening in the story and guess who was the murderer by sharp observation and reasonable logical thinking, which deepened my reading and also confirmed my determ

31、ination to be a detective, one dream that might only be realized in dream now. Ridiculous as I used to be, it is still a incredible and yearning time that is cherished and treasured.Therefore, reading is a time full of joy and fun, it is with which that you can put down all your trouble and anxiety,

32、 be free from hustle and bustle and finally find your soul and home where you can touch your dream and immerse yourself in a fictional world, no hurt and no worry.Hence, why not read all your life? Extracting a piece of paragraph and sharing with others to play is my approach, what about yours? Lets cherish all reading time and feel the joy of it.